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Your submission at Articles for creation: Operation Valiant Dragon (March 16)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by S0091 was:

Thank you for your submission, but the subject of this article already exists in Wikipedia. You can find it and improve it at Operation Uphold Democracy instead.

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S0091 (talk) 17:00, 16 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Joerezi! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! S0091 (talk) 17:00, 16 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Sincerely, S0091 (talk) 17:06, 16 March 2023 (UTC) (Leave me a message)[reply]

Operation Valiant Dragon[edit]

Hi Joerezi, I did search Google, Google Books, ProQuest and JSTOR but the only thing I find is this little blurb about Captain Kirk A. Lear, US Air Force: "Capt. Lear has extensive experience in both airdrop and special operations missions, and participated in Operations JUST CAUSE, DESERT SHIELD / DESERT STORM, and VALIANT DRAGON , the mass parachute assault launched towards Haiti." Could it have been by a different code/name? You might also seek assistance from WP:WikiProject Military History. S0091 (talk) 17:34, 16 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Not that I am aware. From what I’ve heard from people involved in the operation, the name was Valiant Dragon, it was conjoined to operation uphold democracy. Joerezi (talk) 18:01, 16 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

See this Google Book search result. There are references to "Dragon's Blood" but not Valiant Dragon. ?? I still suggest asking for assistance at the project I linked above as there are active editors that are likely more familiar with the topic and/or US military operations in general. S0091 (talk) 18:17, 16 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Mary Help Of Christians Catholic School (FL) (March 16)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Jamiebuba was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

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Jamiebuba (talk) 21:53, 16 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:Mary Help Of Christians Catholic School (FL)[edit]

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A tag has been placed on Draft:Mary Help Of Christians Catholic School (FL), requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Mary Help of Christians Catholic School (Florida) (March 17)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Greenman was:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just passing mentions about the subject)
reliable
secondary
independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Greenman (talk) 11:08, 17 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, I'm new to Wikipedia, so I'm not exactly sure what I need to do to fit the criteria of what is needed for the sources. Do I just need more sources? Or is there a different problem? Joerezi (talk) 14:06, 17 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

In addition to reading through the links in the decline message, you may find WP:42 helpful. If you have additional questions, I suggest asking at the Teahouse as editors are unlikely to see queries you post here. S0091 (talk) 14:17, 17 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Operation Valiant Dragon[edit]

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 17:03, 16 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Mary Help of Christians Catholic School (Florida)[edit]

Hello, Joerezi. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Mary Help of Christians Catholic School (Florida), a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 21:03, 17 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

August 2023[edit]

Hello, I'm Tacyarg. I noticed that you added or changed content in an article, Cardinal Gibbons High School (Fort Lauderdale, Florida), but you didn't provide a reliable source. It's been removed and archived in the page history for now, but if you'd like to include a citation and re-add it, please do so. You can have a look at referencing for beginners. If you think I made a mistake, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. Tacyarg (talk) 20:50, 22 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

How would you recommend I cite a source for a yearbook I have? The only evidence I have is photos of a yearbook. How do I publish that as a source? Joerezi (talk) 21:02, 22 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your reply. I'm not sure, to be honest, as I don't know the status of a yearbook. You could ask on the Talk page of the schools project or at the teahouse. Tacyarg (talk) 23:09, 22 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Operation Valiant Dragon[edit]

Hello, Joerezi. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Operation Valiant Dragon".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. When you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 17:16, 16 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Mary Help of Christians Catholic School (Florida)[edit]

Hello, Joerezi. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Mary Help of Christians Catholic School".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. When you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 21:03, 17 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]