User talk:Goldsthm
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Hello, Goldsthm, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 12:34, 31 August 2017 (UTC)
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Nice work on your draft. I made a few small edits to your page, mostly formatting things. Please check the page history for details. Bear in mind that references go after punctuation, not before, and that there should not be a space before a reference.
References should appear immediately after the statements they support. There should be a minimum of one reference per paragraph, and there shouldn’t be any text after the last reference in a paragraph. Your first two paragraphs lack any references. Your third paragraph includes numbers in the text (1., ... 2., ...etc.) While popular in certain types of writing, this really isn't ideal for good, flowing prose. You shouldn't use this format on Wikipedia.
You should add links wherever they would enhance the reader's understanding. If you use a term that average reader would be unfamiliar with (like SWOT), you should provide a link to the relevant article on Wikipedia. Finally, you should avoid self-references and speaking directly to the reader. "As seen in previous sections" speaks directly to the reader (there's an unspoken "you" in there; rephrase that without the passive voice and it was be "As you have seen in previous sections..."). It's also a good idea to avoid specific references to other parts of the article (because they can change), but if you do, be specific - link to another section directly. Just saying "previous sections" is too vague. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:13, 4 October 2017 (UTC)
- I think the question of where and how to add information to an article is really something that you should decide. You're in the best position to judge where things belong, and how to present things in a coherent, logical fashion. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:40, 6 October 2017 (UTC)