User talk:Brandonseigler

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Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Jakob 22:28, 2 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Sure, I'll take another look. Jakob 04:06, 9 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Take a look at this and this to add references inside the text. Let me know if you have problems, I'd be more than happy to help!

--Jakob 17:24, 9 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation[edit]

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Tito Dutta (talk) 12:07, 21 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Bob Shaw (Georgia politician) (May 2)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by AngusWOOF were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

There are a bunch of details that aren't sourced to anything or sourced incorrectly. I corrected some of the ones pertaining to his hall of fame inductions. Also needs to be scrubbed for tone as stuff like "passed away" on colleagues need to be cleaned up.

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AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 00:02, 2 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Can you be more specific about what needs to be cleaned up? Also, there are twenty sources from major universities, newspapers, and government agencies. Why are these not reliable sources? Brandonseigler (talk) 18:23, 2 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I went through and scrubbed the article for anything that may sound colloquial. I also updated all of the news article links to have proper news citations. I found a copy of the Atlanta Magazine article and added it to the citation. Brandonseigler (talk) 18:14, 4 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

If you could please take a look at the page again, I have found many more sources, edited the citations as requested, and changed the language where necessary. Thanks. Brandonseigler (talk) 21:36, 12 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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