User talk:Arsteven/sandbox

Hello: Good so far. I have a few ideas: try grouping some of your top-level heading into categories, so that you can have fewer top levels. You can use some of your headers as sub-headers. I am not sure that capillary action should be part of the article-remember that you don't have to explain everything-you can just link to other articles. Also, you will be using the heat of sublimation rather than fusion.Hagen76 (talk) 06:14, 10 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Please add an introductory paragraph before the table of contents. Use header levels to organize your paper--right now all headers are at the same level. Also, fix the equations and add the figures, the table, and more references. Hagen76 (talk) 18:48, 3 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]