User:EEcunning

Articles I am Working on

Lucius Julius Gainius Fabius Agrippa

Improvements made:

• Sentence clarity

• Reduced wordiness and complex thoughts

• Cohesion of thought & flow
• Sectioning to break up the different points and improve overall accessibility

• Created sections:

• Family, Ancestry, and Early Life
• Work in Apamea
• Legacy

• Tone/ Neutral POV

• Removed section of content defined by Wikipedia as 'Original Research'

Antarctic flora

Improvements made:

• Cleaned up repeat links
• Clarity of thought

• Reworded the first two paragraphs for cohesion and flow

• Additional sectioning of facts

• Added the section on origin

• Improvements to how someone whose specialty is not botany reads and can comprehend the article