Template:Did you know nominations/Three utilities problem

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The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 20:20, 15 December 2021 (UTC)

Three utilities problem

Improved to Good Article status by David Eppstein (talk). Self-nominated at 23:14, 1 December 2021 (UTC).

  • Comment: you'd think I'd have learned my lesson from that time I got absolutely and deservedly smacked for proposing a bad ALT on a math nom, but I think this one could improved; I've proposed an ALT0a that has minor changes and suggested that the image in infobox be used if this hook is ran as a lead (the white background would stand out on the blue highlight of the Main Page). We don't get enough diagrams and puzzles on Did you know, and I think this one would be fun and interesting for readers to try to work out—some will try to work it out, even though they know it's impossible. In fact, I think it'd get more attention if we didn't say that it was impossible upfront, but that's a different ALT. Cheers! theleekycauldron (talkcontribs) (they/them) 03:18, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
    • I formatted the second image and added a border to both. If you prefer them without, feel free to remove the "border" parameters.  MANdARAX • XAЯAbИAM  19:50, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
    • ALT0a looks ok to me, a little less awkwardly worded. We don't generally allow contractions like "it's" in article space, but I guess it's ok in DYK. I took the liberty of adding "(pictured)" to the hook. —David Eppstein (talk) 06:03, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
Diagram of the three utilities problem showing lines in a plane
Diagram of the three utilities problem showing lines in a plane
  • Comment: I prefer ALT0a but with "it's" and "it is" made consistent. If, however, it's decided to remove mention of the torus and Möbius strip, I think this version with lines, one pair crossing, is better. Disclaimer: I drew both diagrams (and their brethren). Cheers, cmɢʟeeτaʟκ 02:01, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: I recall seeing this problem in a recent YouTube video; glad it has a GA! I like the hook, but I feel it's trying to squeeze in a little more than it needs to, so my suggestion would be to just go with the simple:

ALT1: ... that it is impossible to draw non-crossing lines from three houses to three utilities (pictured) in a plane?

I think that'll draw readers in, and they can then read about the torus/Mobius/etc. in the article.

For the other review components, everything looks good here, with some elements already covered at GAN. Slightly debatable where there's an inline citation for the hook fact right after it appears in the article, but I think it's fine. Picture is freely licensed own work from Cmglee (heads up that you're Main Page-bound!); we could also go with one of the alternate versions but I like how this one is clean and simple. Hook fact is interesting for either ALT0a or ALT1, and I think it's able to state the problem both completely and concisely (not always an easy task). Just let me know your thoughts on ALT1 vs. ALT0a and this will be good to go. {{u|Sdkb}}talk 08:59, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

ALT1 is good to go. I have struck ALT0 ALT0a, which I agree are too complex for the average reader (including me). I have also removed the other image to avoid confusion. Another very good article David Eppstein, thank you. Onceinawhile (talk) 19:29, 14 December 2021 (UTC)

ALT1 to T:DYK/P1