Template:Did you know nominations/Soony Saad

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The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 21:05, 8 January 2023 (UTC)

Soony Saad

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Saad with Ansar in 2019

• ... that Soony Saad (pictured) scored on his Major League Soccer debut on his 19th birthday? Source: Major League Soccer
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Improved to Good Article status by Nehme1499 (talk). Self-nominated at 09:54, 10 December 2022 (UTC).

•  Reviewing... Onegreatjoke (talk) 17:15, 10 December 2022 (UTC)

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
Freely licensed: Used in article: Clear at 100px:

QPQ: - Not done
Overall: @Nehme1499: Good article. Article is sourced and the hook is interesting. Just waiting on a QPQ. Onegreatjoke (talk) 18:00, 10 December 2022 (UTC)

@Onegreatjoke: done. Nehme₁₄₉₉ 18:35, 10 December 2022 (UTC)

Alright, approving. Onegreatjoke (talk) 18:46, 10 December 2022 (UTC)

There are a few things that I feel can be reworded. SL93 (talk) 16:48, 8 January 2023 (UTC)

"ahead of the 2015 season"

"became the first MLS player to join the Lebanon"

"won his services in a weighted lottery system utilized by the league to distribute players who sign with the league after the MLS SuperDraft."

"his high school career with a state record 172 goals"

"coming on as a substitute" SL93 (talk) 16:48, 8 January 2023 (UTC)

@SL93: I personally don't see the issue with the highlighted sentences. How would you change them? Nehme₁₄₉₉ 17:50, 8 January 2023 (UTC)

I took care of it. SL93 (talk) 18:01, 8 January 2023 (UTC)