Template:Did you know nominations/Siege of Chester

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The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 06:54, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

Siege of Chester[edit]

The Phoenix Tower, from which King Charles watched his army lose the Battle of Rowton Heath

Created/expanded by Moonraker (talk). Self nom at 06:01, 20 September 2011 (UTC)

Hook review
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Article review
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The hook is not cited in the article, the inline citation should come at the next punctuation. I suspect the citations at the end of the sentence are supposed to cover the fact.Jim Sweeney (talk)

Yes, the citation was at the end of the following sentence. I have moved it back to the correct place. Moonraker (talk) 21:47, 20 September 2011 (UTC)
OK Jim Sweeney (talk) 21:54, 20 September 2011 (UTC)