Template:Did you know nominations/Salon des Cent

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The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 18:05, 21 May 2012 (UTC)

Salon des Cent[edit]

Poster for the second exhibition at the Salon des Cent in April 1894 featuring Eugène Grasset's work

Created/expanded by Aymatth2 (talk), Dr. Blofeld (talk). Nominated by Aymatth2 (talk) at 13:35, 12 May 2012 (UTC)

date and length fine, many good sources. I am not so happy with the hook, don't find April 1894 in the article, nor "one of the first" in the source, perhaps phrase something about the designer of the poster? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:01, 20 May 2012 (UTC)
"April 1894" is in the caption to the poster, but I agree that the article does not say this was "one of the first". How about ALT1 below? I have tweaked the article to closely match this hook, which is backed up by the source cited. Aymatth2 (talk) 13:00, 21 May 2012 (UTC)
ALT1, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 13:02, 21 May 2012 (UTC)