Template:Did you know nominations/Pevely Dairy Company Plant
- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 01:17, 5 March 2012 (UTC)
Pevely Dairy Company Plant[edit]
- ... that to gain permission to demolish the Pevely Dairy Company Plant, Saint Louis University threatened to move its medical school out of St. Louis?
- ALT1:... that the Pevely Dairy Company Plant is one of the oldest dairies in St. Louis, Missouri?
- ALT2:... that Saint Louis University threatened to move its medical school out of St. Louis if the Pevely Dairy Company Plant were not demolished?
- Reviewed: Dimitri Alexandrovich Obolensky (and Ioasaph of Belgorod)
- Comment: I'm open to variation on the hook; I know that the word "threat" can be negative, but multiple news sources referred to it that way. The oldest dairies hook comes from the NRHP nomination form.
Created/expanded by Poroubalous (talk). Self nom at 21:20, 24 February 2012 (UTC)
- Article was born whole on Feb 24 and nominated same day. Text at >2300 chars.
- Article looks well-cited, and content matches refs
- Handles everything in a neutral manner. I'm okay with using 'threaten' as that is how the quote seems to read
- Met QPQ requirement
- Suggestions:
- While not strictly necessary, page numbers for the refs to the nrhp document would help (as it is fairly long)
- Duly noted. poroubalous (talk) 22:08, 2 March 2012 (UTC)
- Issues:
- This website isn't working for me, is it still up?
- Weird -- I just tried it after clearing my cache and it works. I can also find it by going to http://www.landmarks-stl.org/news and by clicking through to the link. I also have a second source for the SLU purchase of the building August 2011, and I can track down another if it's necessary. poroubalous (talk) 22:08, 2 March 2012 (UTC)
- The sentence containing "and is a four-story, red brick office building" reads a little close to the nrhp document. I don't know if this can be reworked to avoid close paraphrasing. That seems to be the worst spot, and paraphrasing what is already short and compact is difficult.
- I will paraphrase that graph here in a bit, I see your point on that sentence and a few others there. poroubalous (talk) 22:08, 2 March 2012 (UTC)
- Done (I reworded the first two sentences a good bit). Let me know if there is anything else. poroubalous (talk) 22:36, 2 March 2012 (UTC)
- I prefer ALT2, it seems to read better than the first one and is interesting.
Looks pretty good, but it has a few issues.
Everything looks good, so I will pass this article on ALT2. Any chance of getting any pictures? Chris857 (talk) 02:31, 3 March 2012 (UTC)
- I can swing by tomorrow morning and try to get a good one; I'll upload it if it works out. poroubalous (talk) 02:16, 4 March 2012 (UTC)
- I took a group of photos this morning;
would look good at the small size of DYK. poroubalous (talk) 17:59, 4 March 2012 (UTC)
- I took a group of photos this morning;
- I can swing by tomorrow morning and try to get a good one; I'll upload it if it works out. poroubalous (talk) 02:16, 4 March 2012 (UTC)
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