Template:Did you know nominations/Pat Marsh (ice hockey)
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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 02:13, 25 December 2018 (UTC)
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Pat Marsh (ice hockey)[edit]
- ... that Pat Marsh was once referred to as "the first lady of British Ice Hockey"? source
- Reviewed: Psalm 133
Created by Flibirigit (talk). Self-nominated at 06:00, 30 November 2018 (UTC).
Article is new enough and long enough. Source #2 is broken. " Ahearne became president of the BIHA in 1971," and "Marsh was responsible for day-to-day administration of the association" are not supported by the source. I also presume that the funeral date wasn't changed from the prognosticated one? Birth year(s) need source(s). I presume we did look for a free image before putting a non-free one up? Didn't notice any copyvio or plagiarism. The way "She was remembered as being well-liked but also overworked." is placed in the article implies that the comment refers to her passing, but actually it refers to her retirement. Hook is supported by source - is it reliable, anyway? - but needs to be in the article. QPQ is done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 17:44, 30 November 2018 (UTC)
- The full-length archive URL has been substituted into source #2, instead of the shortcut URL. Citations have been imported from the Ahearne Wikipedia article to confirm his jobs. The day-to-day administration wording was removed. The funeral sentence was reworded. No other photo was found for Marsh, only the non-free photo. The quote for her retirement was moved into the correct paragraph. The phrase "the first lady of British Ice Hockey" appears both in the hook, and the second last sentence of Marsh's article. Sorry, if I am not understanding the comment regarding the hook. Please explain differently if possible? Flibirigit (talk) 02:34, 6 December 2018 (UTC)
Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 07:07, 6 December 2018 (UTC)
- The full-length archive URL has been substituted into source #2, instead of the shortcut URL. Citations have been imported from the Ahearne Wikipedia article to confirm his jobs. The day-to-day administration wording was removed. The funeral sentence was reworded. No other photo was found for Marsh, only the non-free photo. The quote for her retirement was moved into the correct paragraph. The phrase "the first lady of British Ice Hockey" appears both in the hook, and the second last sentence of Marsh's article. Sorry, if I am not understanding the comment regarding the hook. Please explain differently if possible? Flibirigit (talk) 02:34, 6 December 2018 (UTC)
