Template:Did you know nominations/Mihran Kassabian

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The result was: promoted by MPJ-DK 19:09, 21 August 2016 (UTC)

Mihran Kassabian[edit]

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Mihran Kassabian's hands (1909)

... that the pioneering radiologist Mihran Kassabian photographed his own hands (pictured) to document the progression of radiation-related necroses and amputations?

Reviewed: Ellen Zitek
Comment: Open to rewording to make this a little "hookier".

ALT1: ... that the pioneering radiologist Mihran Kassabian photographed his own hands (pictured) to document the effects of radiation?

Created by EricEnfermero (talk). Self-nominated at 04:08, 18 August 2016 (UTC).

Review by Maile

QPQ

August 18, 2016 QPQ review by EricEnfermero has not been used by him as a QPQ on any previous nomination

Eligibility

Article created by Article created by EricEnfermero on August 15, 2016 and has 4900 characters (0 words) "readable prose size"
Article is NPOV, currently stable, no dispute tags

Sourcing

Every paragraph sourced inline and online
Citations are appropriately formatted
No bare URLs

Hook

Hook is 150 characters, NPOV, stated in the article and sourced
ALT1 is 113 characters, NPOV, stated in the article and sourced

Image

Image used in the hook is in the article, and is a 1910 image on Commons with "no known copyright restrictions" .

Tools

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Nomination passes. I hope they can use this as a lead hook, because the image is so different from most others we see. ALT1 is more concise, but both are interesting. I'm calling the hook as the promoter's choice. Nice job on an interesting subject matter. — Maile (talk) 17:06, 19 August 2016 (UTC)

I agree this begs to go in the lead slot. I've added the word pioneering to both hooks. I'd also change necroses to necrosis, but I'll leave that to others to decide. E Eng 21:38, 19 August 2016 (UTC)