Template:Did you know nominations/Love and Glamour

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The result was: promoted by  — Crisco 1492 (talk) 05:30, 15 October 2013 (UTC)

Love and Glamour

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• ... that the bottle for Jennifer Lopez's fragrance Love and Glamour, created by the entertainer with designer Jon DiNapoli, was shaped to resemble "a woman wearing an elegant gown"?

5x expanded by Status (talk), Arre 9 (talk). Nominated by Arre 9 (talk) at 10:47, 3 August 2013 (UTC).

• "Interesting hook?" maybe not. Gautier got there first. The article is a bit too laden with quotes that makes it spammy. -- Ohc ^¡digame!_{¿que pasa?} 07:36, 5 August 2013 (UTC)

• Any progress here? Any response from the nominator? --PFHLai (talk) 03:48, 31 August 2013 (UTC)

• My apologies, I will get to making adjustments soon. — Arre 05:01, 31 August 2013 (UTC)

• Reviewer needed to give a comprehensive review of this nomination, including all the usual DYK checks. Arre 9 appears to have made a few adjustments in the minutes after posting the above—which should have been reported here once complete. The review should also give an opinion on the hook, and on the extent of quotation usage. Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 13:27, 10 September 2013 (UTC)

Note: based on the QPQ tool, Arre 9 has enough previous DYKs that a QPQ review will be required. BlueMoonset (talk) 13:31, 10 September 2013 (UTC)

Reviewed Template:Did you know nominations/Fractional currency — Status (talk · contribs) 03:10, 11 September 2013 (UTC)

• Regrettably, the submitted QPQ cannot be counted due to issues with its content; QPQ still required. BlueMoonset (talk) 04:21, 11 September 2013 (UTC)

• Reviewed Template:Did you know nominations/Let's See Action — Status (talk · contribs) 21:05, 11 September 2013 (UTC)

• Still needs reviewer; QPQ has been satisfied. BlueMoonset (talk) 15:30, 17 September 2013 (UTC)
  • This will be my 50th DYK... if it's ever passed that is! — Status (talk · contribs) 21:15, 29 September 2013 (UTC)
    • Ok. Size is fine, as is the citations and the creation date. However, I'm just not certain about the hook. It states a "curvaceous woman's body", but the article doesn't say that as a inspiration. I would suggest that the hook is changed to say it is shaped to resemble "a woman wearing an elegant gown" - as this is directly cited in the article. Miyagawa (talk) 19:45, 4 October 2013 (UTC)
      • @Miyagawa: Done. It appears as if the information that said that was removed. — Status (talk · contribs) 05:50, 7 October 2013 (UTC)
        • Sorry! I don't know how I missed the ping. All good to go now with the updated hook. Miyagawa (talk) 19:26, 14 October 2013 (UTC)