Template:Did you know nominations/Karim Morani
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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:33, 19 October 2017 (UTC)
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Karim Morani[edit]
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that film producer Karim Morani is an accused in the 2G spectrum scam?Source: http://indiatoday.intoday.in/story/2g-scam-cineyug-director-karim-morani-denied-anticipatory-bail/1/139017.htmlSource:http://www.dnaindia.com/entertainment/report-karim-morani-accused-in-2g-case-allowed-to-go-to-turkey-and-iceland-for-dilwale-shoot-2116154
5x expanded by Fitindia (talk). Self-nominated at 06:18, 8 October 2017 (UTC).
- Comment: This hook focuses unduly on a negative aspect of a living person. Keeping WP:BLP in mind a better hook is needed. --Skr15081997 (talk) 07:40, 9 October 2017 (UTC)
- ALT1
... that the Ravi Pujari gang made an attempt on the life of film producer Karim Morani?Source:http://www.india.com/showbiz/bollywood-and-underworld-gangster-ravi-pujari-plotted-to-kill-mahesh-bhatt-and-moranis-197859/Source:http://www.deccanchronicle.com/entertainment/bollywood/051017/mahesh-bhatt-deposes-in-court-reveals-details-of-threat-calls-from-ravi-pujari-gang.html
- @Skr15081997: please have a look at ALT1. Thank you. FITINDIA 11:15, 9 October 2017 (UTC)
Recently expanded article. No plagiarism or POV issue detected. Article's main body has at least one inline citation per paragraph. QPQ has been provided. ALT1 is present in the article and backed by sources. Good to go. --Skr15081997 (talk) 10:45, 11 October 2017 (UTC)
I don't think this can go ahead with the present hook because the involvement of the gang is only stated by the police with nobody convicted in a court of law. Although the controversies section is full of hooky details, I don't think we can use any of them because they are just allegations, with no convictions. New hook needed. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:51, 18 October 2017 (UTC)
- ALT1
- ALT2 ... that Karim Morani teamed up with Shah Rukh Khan in 2013 to co-produce the commercially successful film Chennai Express?Source: http://www.hindustantimes.com/india-news/producer-of-srk-hit-chennai-express-karim-morani-arrested-in-hyderabad-for-raping-25-year-old-woman/story-J1fFfOJ0KBxgByWUgeMicJ.html
- @Cwmhiraeth: please have a look at ALT2. Thank you. FITINDIA 06:08, 18 October 2017 (UTC)
- I should think that would do if you add an inline citation to the appropriate sentence in the article. Let's see if @Skr15081997: will give it a tick. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:33, 18 October 2017 (UTC)
- I have add an inline citation to the appropriate sentence in the article. Thank you FITINDIA 06:58, 18 October 2017 (UTC)
- In its present state, the article doesn't mention that Chennai Express was a commercial success. The film's title in the hook should be italicized and "hit" replaced by commercially successful. --Skr15081997 (talk) 08:02, 18 October 2017 (UTC)
- @Skr15081997: I have made the changes please do have a look. Thank you. FITINDIA 08:33, 18 October 2017 (UTC)
- Good to go now. --Skr15081997 (talk) 08:38, 18 October 2017 (UTC)
- I have add an inline citation to the appropriate sentence in the article. Thank you FITINDIA 06:58, 18 October 2017 (UTC)
- I should think that would do if you add an inline citation to the appropriate sentence in the article. Let's see if @Skr15081997: will give it a tick. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:33, 18 October 2017 (UTC)