Template:Did you know nominations/John Ernest Adamson

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by PrimalMustelid talk 16:53, 19 December 2023 (UTC)

John Ernest Adamson

Created by Llewee (talk). Self-nominated at 11:05, 16 October 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/John Ernest Adamson; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

  • @Llewee: Long enough, new enough. No maintenance templates found, no neutrality problems found. All refs offline or paywalled, happy to AGF. However, the hook needs a citation at the end of the sentence (and really, those paragraphs are far too long anyway). In addition, "(See:1923 Birthday Honours and 1924 Birthday Honours)" looks a bit like you're citing Wikipedia, which isn't allowed.--Launchballer 12:39, 7 December 2023 (UTC)
Thank you for reviewing my nomination. The content of that sentence is mentioned in the next source. I just included the see also as additional information. I will give the article a tidy up in a moment. Llewee (talk) 12:58, 7 December 2023 (UTC)
Launchballer Hopefully should be OK now.Llewee (talk) 13:14, 7 December 2023 (UTC)
Good to go.--Launchballer 13:57, 7 December 2023 (UTC)