Template:Did you know nominations/Jealous (Beyoncé song)

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The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:26, 18 September 2014 (UTC)

Jealous (Beyoncé song)[edit]

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... that a critic from The Atlantic wrote that "Jealous" was one of the most notable songs in Beyoncé's music catalog?

Reviewed: Preston Larrison

5x expanded by My love is love (talk). Self nominated at 02:53, 8 August 2014 (UTC).

Alt 1: ... that a critic from The Atlantic wrote that "Jealous" was one of Beyoncé's most notable songs?
Alt 2: ... "Jealous" was considered to be one of Beyoncé's most notable songs?

The hook fact was not in the article (probably due to copy-editing, the "one of" had been lost), but it is too close to the source anyway. Please check for other incidences of close-paraphrasing or I'll send one of the DYK ruffians after you with a big stick. Belle (talk) 11:24, 8 August 2014 (UTC)

@Belle: I think I corrected everything. What is next? Should I change the hook? I Am... ***D.D. 12:23, 8 August 2014 (UTC)

Just strike it out an add an ALT (otherwise it looks mysterious to anybody else that comes by). Belle (talk) 12:28, 8 August 2014 (UTC)

@Belle: I think I'm done. I Am... ***D.D. 12:40, 8 August 2014 (UTC)

Here's another suggestion, though I had to put the close paraphrasing in quotes. Someone really should check all the sources carefully for copyvios.

ALT3: ... that Beyoncé's "Jealous" is all about "promises, suspicion and potential revenge"? Yoninah (talk) 22:42, 13 August 2014 (UTC)

Full review needed, with especial care taken to check for copyvio and close paraphrasing per above comments. Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 20:16, 8 September 2014 (UTC)

@BlueMoonset: The article recently passed the GA criteria and was reviewed by a user who checked for those issues. I Am... ***D.D. 18:41, 15 September 2014 (UTC)

It looks like this may satisfy DYK under two criteria. Current size is 17370 characters. original size really is zero as this was a redirect before. SO expansion wise is find, also creation would be satisfied too. Currently it is big enough. Everything is cited. Written in a neutral way. Correct person credited, Hook Alt 2 is included in the page, referenced, confirmed and short enough. QPQ: none claimed to be done for this although this would be credit number 6. However Template:Did you know nominations/Preston Larrison was reviewed without claiming it before for other QPQ (none was needed earlier), so could be claimed for this one. Plagiarism check now done, nothing plagiaried. Graeme Bartlett (talk) 11:42, 17 September 2014 (UTC)

OK now QPQ is indicated this is good to go. Graeme Bartlett (talk) 21:22, 17 September 2014 (UTC)