Template:Did you know nominations/Jade Garden
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: rejected by BlueMoonset (talk) 02:24, 6 July 2016 (UTC)
Issues raised were never addressed despite talk-page requests, and the article has been tagged with multiple template issues. Closing as unsuccessful.
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Jade Garden[edit]
- ... that Jade Garden in South Korea has been modeled after a famous European garden?
Created by Ji-soo Seo (talk). Self-nominated at 03:09, 23 May 2016 (UTC).
New enough, nominator QPQ exempt, non-list content is verified with citations to sources. Matters that need to be addressed:
- Hook content is not stated in the source used in the article at the end of the sentence stating the hook's content. It's a primary source, and states that Jade Garden is "an exquisite European style garden", but does not adequately verify the wording in the article, which states "has been modeled after the famous European garden". In terms of the hook, the source does not state that it's "modeled" or that it's "famous", or that it's modeled after a specific, single European garden, as the hook suggests;
- The article is not long enough; presently at 1383 B (1500 characters is the minimum);
- Virtually all of the sources in the article are primary; the article needs the addition of independent secondary reliable sources to verify content;
- Would benefit from copy editing for organization and cohesion;
- Presently tagged with orphan and primary sources templates (the latter of which I added, because this needs to be addressed). Please see WP:DYKRULES for more information about DYK rules and processes. North America1000 13:45, 25 May 2016 (UTC)
- How about the new hook here : --Ji-soo Seo (talk) 04:40, 26 May 2016 (UTC)
- ALT1:... that Jade Garden is an exquisite European-style garden in South Korea? and I will revise as you mentioned.I asked help about secondary sources and pictures in Korea wikipedia. --Ji-soo Seo (talk) 04:41, 26 May 2016 (UTC)
- The matters denoted above need to be addressed before this can move forward. North America1000 13:55, 8 June 2016 (UTC)
