Template:Did you know nominations/Itcha Range

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Rcsprinter123 (yak) @ 19:44, 18 August 2014 (UTC)

Itcha Range[edit]

Created/expanded by Volcanoguy (talk). Self nominated at 04:30, 16 August 2014 (UTC).

  • Article has been expanded almost 10 fold on the 10th and is thus long enough and new enough, good sources, I couldn't check copyvio as I could not access all the sources. The article is interesting and well written, however there are no inline citations in the article lead. In particular the hook which is found word for word in the lead has no references there. The rest of the article is well cited but the content of the hook must be pieced together from the cited bits here and there. Please add inline citations in the lead and in particular concerning the hook and the article will be good to go. Iry-Hor (talk) 20:07, 17 August 2014 (UTC)
It is clear in the main body of the article that volcanic activity produced the Itcha Range between 3.8 and 0.8 million years ago. Volcanoguy 20:14, 17 August 2014 (UTC)
I am not arguing that this isn't clear, it is only that I would like to see an inline citation for the hook in the lead. Iry-Hor (talk) 20:37, 17 August 2014 (UTC)
Whereabouts in the lead do you want it sourced? Volcanoguy 20:38, 17 August 2014 (UTC)
Second paragraph first sentence "In contrast to most mountain ranges in British Columbia, the Itcha Range represents an inactive shield volcano." and toward the end of the 2nd paragraph, "3.8 and 3.0 million years old and thus over two million years ago it passed the most active shield stage of life. A long period of dormancy lasting for almost a million years followed, which was interrupted by the post-shield stage of volcanism 2.2 to 0.8 million years ago." Just put a reference(s) at these two places and we are done! Nice article by the way. Iry-Hor (talk) 20:46, 17 August 2014 (UTC)
Done. Volcanoguy 21:11, 17 August 2014 (UTC)
and this is now alright ! Iry-Hor (talk) 21:14, 17 August 2014 (UTC)