Template:Did you know nominations/Hanna Stjärne

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The result was: promoted by Panyd^{The muffin is not subtle} 14:11, 7 November 2014 (UTC)

Hanna Stjärne[edit]

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... that journalist Hanna Stjärne (pictured) was announced as the new CEO of Sveriges Television in September 2014 and will take the post within six months?

Reviewed:Caitlin Doughty

Created by BabbaQ (talk). Self nominated at 21:41, 26 September 2014 (UTC).

ALT 1 ... that Hanna Stjärne (pictured), the youngest-ever CEO of a Swedish national radio channel, has now been named CEO of Sveriges Television?184.147.131.89 (talk) 20:16, 2 November 2014 (UTC)

This article is long enough and new enough. Going for the original hook because one of the facts for ALT1 is not born out by the #5 reference used at the end of the sentence. The image is appropriately licensed, the article is neutral and I don't see any close paraphrasing. The article mentions the year 200, but should this be 2000 or 2001? This is also referenced to #5, but the fact cited is not mentioned there! Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:21, 3 November 2014 (UTC)

Done. Otherwise ping me :)--BabbaQ (talk) 16:44, 4 November 2014 (UTC)

I'm sorry, I started reading the article and couldn't understand it. It needs a copyedit from someone familiar with English grammar. It also needs to be linked to at least one other Wikipedia article, so it won't be an orphan. Yoninah (talk) 23:40, 4 November 2014 (UTC)

I got some help with c/e. Also I de-orphaned the article. Ping me if you have more concerns.--BabbaQ (talk) 14:45, 5 November 2014 (UTC)

As always, your response is quick and efficient. Thank you! The article reads well now, and is no longer an orphan. Foreign-language hook ref AGF and cited inline. Good to go. Yoninah (talk) 16:25, 5 November 2014 (UTC)