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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by  — Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:40, 13 January 2013 (UTC)

Don't Worry Kyoko (Mummy's Only Looking for Her Hand in the Snow)[edit]

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Created by Rlendog (talk). Self nom at 02:02, 27 December 2012 (UTC)

  • Hook nitpick I think who should be whom. Chris857 (talk) 02:52, 27 December 2012 (UTC)
  • I have no problem with that change, although I wouldn't claim to be an expert on when to use "who" and "whom". Rlendog (talk) 04:12, 27 December 2012 (UTC)
  • The last phrase should read: "with whom she didn't reunite for another 25 years". Yoninah (talk) 14:17, 27 December 2012 (UTC)
  • That sounds better, and then the "whom" is clearly the right pronoun. Rlendog (talk) 22:38, 28 December 2012 (UTC)
  • Fixed grammar in hooks. Yoninah (talk) 10:38, 31 December 2012 (UTC)
  • Review needed now that hooks are set. BlueMoonset (talk) 19:52, 9 January 2013 (UTC)
  • Length, date and sources are all OK. Article reads well and is interesting. The hook is properly sourced - I think ALT1 is preferable. We're good to go. Prioryman (talk) 10:44, 13 January 2013 (UTC)
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