Template:Did you know nominations/Busan Museum
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: rejected by Allen3 talk 12:17, 2 January 2016 (UTC)
Insufficient progress toward resolving outstanding issues
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Busan Museum[edit]
A gift brozen bodhisattva in Busann museum
- Did you know that the nature treasure number 200 is in the Busan Museum?
Created by Pkh409 (talk). Self-nominated at 02:50, 8 December 2015 (UTC).
- (This is not a review, just a comment) A few days late, but as it is the nominators' first nom, I think it's acceptable, per recent discussion at the talk page. --Hanyangprofessor2 (talk) 03:41, 8 December 2015 (UTC)
Length is fine. However, there are some copyediting issues that need to dealth with. Some language clean-up is needed. Also, the article needs to be less travel guide style (for example removing mentions of bus lines). The article talks about "national treasure, number 200", the hook says "nature treasure number 200". There is no explanation in article was "number 200" refer to (needs link to National Treasures of South Korea). 'gift brozen' should be fixed to gilt-bronze. Hook supporting sentence needs a direct reference. --Soman (talk) 10:02, 15 December 2015 (UTC)
This was created as part of a class, and Hanyangprofessor2 (aka Piotrus) has told me that the class is over and he doubts that there will be response from the student (and that he had send Pkh409 an email about the nomination). Under the circumstances, it seems highly unlikely that the issues will be dealt with, so I'm marking the nomination for closure. BlueMoonset (talk) 01:12, 1 January 2016 (UTC)
