Template:Did you know nominations/Bridget Chaworth

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The result was: promoted by — Maile (talk) 19:20, 17 December 2013 (UTC)

Bridget Chaworth[edit]

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~~... that Bridget Chaworth served Elizabeth I for twenty-five years?~~

Reviewed: Saint Spyridon Church

Created by NinaGreen (talk). Self nominated at 20:17, 9 December 2013 (UTC).

new and long enough article, sourced and interesting hook. I checked the references, GTG. --Norden1990 (talk) 21:59, 9 December 2013 (UTC)

The hook is rather blah, IMO. Yoninah (talk) 00:58, 12 December 2013 (UTC)

Well, the other reviewer found it interesting, and serving that demanding Queen for 25 years is something she probably deserves to be noted for. :-) NinaGreen (talk) 05:55, 12 December 2013 (UTC)

How about:

ALT1 ... that the inscription on Bridget Chaworth's monument commemorates her 25 years of service as a gentlewoman of the Privy Chamber to Elizabeth I and 14 years of service to Anne of Denmark? NinaGreen (talk) 16:30, 12 December 2013 (UTC)

Thank you, that's better, and I added what her "service" was about. Hook ref verified. ALT1 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 16:46, 12 December 2013 (UTC)

You can't approve a hook you yourself have proposed or contributed to. New reviewer needed for ALT1.--Gilderien Chat|List of good deeds 22:15, 13 December 2013 (UTC)

The rule only says that you can't approve your own hook, not that you can't tweak someone else's. Yoninah (talk) 16:49, 14 December 2013 (UTC)