Template:Did you know nominations/Arthur J. Hill

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The result was: promoted by The C of E (talk) 06:44, 6 August 2021 (UTC)

Arthur J. Hill

Created by Chetsford (talk). Self-nominated at 01:26, 12 July 2021 (UTC).

  • Article is new enough and long enough, though a bit on the short side considering the amount of text taken up by the titles of his positions. No major issues. The hook is a bit meh to me—is a single parent raising four children that unusual? But the lengthiness of "United States Assistant Secretary of Housing and Urban Development for Housing" is just enough to catch my attention, and I can't think of anything better, so I'll approve, accepting the paywalled ref AGF. I've removed the hook links to United States, which caused a WP:sea of blue issue, and single parent, which is basic enough a term to not need linking. QPQ provided, though follow-up responses to that review are expected if the promoter finds it inadequate, as one has commented. --Paul_012 (talk) 19:06, 4 August 2021 (UTC)