Talk:Winter Dreams

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The bit at the end about the story being powerful and worthy of consideration, while true, sounds pretty subjective and definitely not attributed to any source. If nobody has any objections, I'm going to remove it.128.54.164.92 (talk) 19:04, 5 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Concerning the "a schematic of the production..." part of the article, shouldn't that link be one of those footnote thingies? Just my two cents, even though, obviously if this article were edited there'd be more revisions than simply footnote-aesthetics. - MoaM —Preceding unsigned comment added by 142.25.77.143 (talk) 21:24, 26 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Nevermind, just included the footnote stuff myself...I've never done that before... Complete Wiki-Nub here; expect another "UnsignedIP" thing - MoaM —Preceding unsigned comment added by 142.25.77.143 (talk) 22:44, 26 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I don't agree with the story summary. It seems like the author of the article either didn't read the story thoroughly enough or intentionally misrepresented it. For instance, the article says that Dexter quit his job as a caddy because he "decided he was too old." But the story says - refering to Dexter quiting - "The girl who had done this (caused him to quit) was...[Judy Jones]," which means that, while he said he was quitting because of his age, Dexter really quit because of the yet-to-bloom Mrs. Jones. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Slamstarguy (talk • contribs) 06:27, 11 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]