Talk:William C. Cramer

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Needs editing[edit]

The article seems immersed in intra-party politics, with excessive quotes about "who said what about whom," more than is typical for a biographical article. Some of this material can be reduced, with a focus on the results of the rivalries, rather than step-by-step discussion.Parkwells (talk) 15:27, 4 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Needs more sources[edit]

The article relies too heavily on one political analysis article, the source of many quotes about who said what. Needs more distant perspective and additional RS.Parkwells (talk) 16:27, 4 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

The balance of the article needs to be changed so that it is not simply a summary of Hathorn's analysis of the effects of the Cramer-Gurney dispute on state Republican politics, but is a more general bio of Cramer.Parkwells (talk) 14:15, 10 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Too much on 1970 campaign/election[edit]

In the interests of a biographical article, this section needs to be reduced and edited. This article is not supposed to be a repetition of the analysis of the effects of the dispute on Republican politics in the state.Parkwells (talk) 15:38, 10 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]