Talk:William A. Shine Great Neck South High School/Archive 2

Archive 1

Archive 2

GA review

Sorry, but I have to fail this article's GAN. I encourage you to renominate then when the article is fully referenced. The article's WP:LEAD should be longer. The History, Media attention, Academics, Student Government, Demographics, Trivia, and Additional Information section are very deficient in citiations. Also, Triva and Additional information should be integrated into the rest of the article. I encourage you to review WP:WIAGA and improve this article and submit it for GA status later. Cheers, Reywas92^Talk 00:02, 1 November 2009 (UTC)

GA Review

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Reviewer: Laurinavicius (talk) 00:22, 2 November 2009 (UTC)

I'm sorry to say this, but I have to fail this article's GAN. The several major problems that Reywas92 brought up in this article's previous GA assessment have not been issued. As s/he has said before me, "he article's WP:LEAD should be longer. The History, Media attention, Academics, Student Government, Demographics, Trivia, and Additional Information section are very deficient in citiations. Also, Triva and Additional information should be integrated into the rest of the article." Again, please look over WP:WIAGA and fix these problem, then renominate it for GA-class. However, I have re-assessed this article as B-class, as it does meet B-class criteria. My regards, Laurinavicius (talk) 00:22, 2 November 2009 (UTC)