Talk:Whittington Tump/GA1
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 11:32, 3 September 2021 (UTC)
Comments
- Where is the alt name of "Crookbarrow Hill" mentioned/referenced in the main body?
- Feel free to link Worcestershire, I imagine a high portion of our readers have no idea.
- Linked and added England also
- Could you be a touch more specific in the lead to those of who do know where Worcs is, whereabouts in Worcs?
- "clayey" might be worth linking, this is such an awful word, and it may confuse.
- Should The Red Book of Worcester be in italics and indeed linked if notable?
- "The tump, recognisable" is there a dicdef/link/footnote for "tump"? It's certainly a word I'm unaware of.
- There is a basic definition at Wiktionary but I think the opening paragraph at list of tumps (to which [[tump) redirects) is better (though unreferenced), linked - Dumelow (talk) 06:04, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
- "as a land mark" one word or two?
- "pre-historic"/ prehistoric.
- "passed in Middlesex" link.
That's all I have on a first read. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 20:26, 3 September 2021 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review The Rambling Man, I think I've addressed your poitns above - Dumelow (talk) 06:07, 4 September 2021 (UTC)