Talk:Where No One Has Gone Before/GA1
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Reviewer: Ed! (talk · contribs) 01:03, 21 March 2013 (UTC)
- "Plot" section: Please link the actors names after the people they play.
- Also, link Wesley Crusher.
- I'm glad you noted "Where No One has Gone Before," but please also note the Traveler returns in a later episode which signals the end of Wesley Crusher's appearances on TNG.
- "Themes is a little short of a section. I'd suggest it be either expanded or merged into another section.
- When you mention Argyle, it isn't immediately clear that LaForge isn't chief engineer yet. You might want to explain this.
- Just one duplicate link again (Robert Justman)!
- One of the external links is returning a soft 404. Any chance you could check it out?
- The images appear to be properly licensed. Dab links are fine.
- Similarly to Themes, I think release should be folded into the reception section.
- I think you should put some info in the reception section in the lead, so it properly summarizes the entire article.
Great work! Passing the GA. —Ed!(talk) 02:15, 25 March 2013 (UTC)