Talk:Vince's Devils/GA1

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Lead
  • Where is the source for "Ladies in Pink?"
  • Link "brand" to WWE Brand Extension
  • explain "brought over" -- were they drafted? traded?
  • you refer to Candice as "Candice" and "Candice Michelle" -- pick one for consistency.
    • Picked Candice Michelle. Nikki♥311 03:25, 1 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • try to explain their connection to Vince in the lead
    • I don't think there is much more to it than sucking up, but I can't find anything 100% on it. Nikki♥311 04:04, 3 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Debut
  • explain the trade? was it done live on television or on WWE.com? a mobile text alert?
    • The source indicates it was unaired, but doesn't specify. I added that it was un-aired in the article. Nikki♥311 04:04, 3 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • the image of Wilson should not be on the right side, because the MOS for Images says that images of people facing the right side of the screen should not be on the right side of the computer. Move it to the left side.
    • Done, but I had to move it down so the headers wouldn't be aligned all wonky. Nikki♥311 03:25, 1 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Feuds
  • The third sentence of the first paragraph would make more sense if the second sentence said "Victoria and Wilson lost a match against Stratus and Massaro"
    • Good catch! That does make much more sense. Nikki♥311 03:25, 1 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • what is WWE Homecoming? Explain or link.
  • try to find an archive of Chloe's WWE profile from archive.org
  • the new out of universe style requires "edition" to become "episode"
Split
  • "The feud between Candice and Wilson continued for some time" can probably be removed - it's not very neutral.
In wrestling
  • Double DDT[10] - Torrie Wilson and Candice Michelle
    • Put the reference at the end of the line for all of the moves
    • Change to "Double DDT - performed by Torrie Wilson and Candice Michelle" (for all)

Also, try to make it more clear of why they are called Vince's Devils. There is not explanation for their name. I'll watch to see when you're done. iMatthew 01:25, 1 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks. I have a busy week this week (2 papers and a test!!) but I'll try and tackle these when I get some time (or want to procrastinate). After scanning the list, I have one disagreement. The references for the moves aren't at the end of the lines because the only part they source is the move name. In contrast, the article that sources "Candylicious (Hanging figure four necklock)" actually states that Candylicious is a hanging figure four necklock. Putting them at the end of the line would make me feel like I'm being dishonest, since it isn't sourcing the whole line. :( If you feel extremely strongly about putting the sources at the end, I will...I just wanted to explain my reasoning. Nikki♥311 01:52, 1 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I'm done with all except a few that I had some problems with. What do you think? Nikki♥311 04:04, 3 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Everything is good. Passing. iMatthew 19:51, 3 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks!!! :) Nikki♥311 20:11, 3 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
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