Talk:Tupolev Tu-12/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: CrowzRSA 01:51, 1 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Doin...

Not so much.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:16, 9 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Before I pass the article, I was wondering if there is any missing information, because there is only one article with prose. CrowzRSA 02:11, 18 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- I don't understand. What do you mean only one article with prose?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:26, 19 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  - Sorry, I meant section. I mean, most articles have at least two. CrowzRSA 21:02, 19 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
    - I added a subsection.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:53, 19 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
      - It does look a little better, but should the section be renamed History, and the section below it be made into a subsection named Development. Like this:

History

Development

Testing and evaluation

- - - - CrowzRSA 01:40, 20 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
        Seems rather elaborate for a five-paragraph article. And the testing is usually part of the development process.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:50, 20 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
        Okay. CrowzRSA 18:41, 20 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:
CrowzRSA 18:41, 20 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]