Talk:Time Crash/GA1

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GA Review[edit]

Looking good :) Here are a few suggestions:

  • After the Tenth Doctor (David Tennant) parts ways to Martha (Freema Agyeman) - "parts ways with", "parts ways from"? "To" doesn't really make sense to me, unless he's parting with/from someone else to go to her.
  • I was always trying to be old and grumpy and important — like you do- shouldn't be spaces before/after the emdash.
  • The quote is from the Tenth Doctor, but when he puts on his "glasses" it's linked to the Fifth Doctor's appearance. Is he wearing the Fifth's glasses, or what?
  • We don't really need to re-link TARDIS in the final Plot paragraph.
  • Calls also peaked during the episode's airing - which calls? Explain so dummies like myself don't have to go read the cited article ;)
  • Unitalicise TV Squad.
  • Again Image:Time Crash.jpg is a little over the low-resolution standards, but only by a bit so it's not too big a deal if you can't scale it down a little.

That's it - the article will be on hold for a week so good luck with the changes. —97198 (talk) 02:19, 24 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

  • Done, and as fast as Spheres ;) Sceptre (talk) 02:50, 24 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Nice work. I'll jump to it and pass the GAN. —97198 (talk) 06:14, 24 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
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