Talk:The Ten-Per-Cent Solution/GA1
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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 06:11, 17 December 2011 (UTC)
I'll review this article sometime tomorrow. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 06:11, 17 December 2011 (UTC)
Here are the issues I found:
- "However, Annie soon begins to interfere too much and this frustrates" I'd tweak to 'much, which frustrates'
- Done! Theleftorium (talk) 00:13, 18 December 2011 (UTC)
- Reception would probably be a better section title than Release, since that's more what it's about.
- Changed to "Release and reception". Theleftorium (talk) 00:13, 18 December 2011 (UTC)
- "finishing before new episodes of" finishing ahead of sounds better in this context.
- Done! Theleftorium (talk) 00:13, 18 December 2011 (UTC)
I'll put the article on hold and will pass when the issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 00:04, 18 December 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review! :) Theleftorium (talk) 00:13, 18 December 2011 (UTC)
- No problem. Looks good now, so the article passes. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:56, 18 December 2011 (UTC)