Talk:The Girl of the Northern Woods

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Review: February 14, 2015. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Good888 (talk · contribs) 10:17, 8 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Lead section

May I ask what a halfbreed trapper is?
Link Library of Congress.

A mixed-race individual... seriously. It was acceptable then, but now it is an artifact of language's evolution because the term has become derogatory. Though the ethnicity of the character is unknown... its all that we get. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 02:24, 14 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Plot

They are leading him to his execution, when the faithful Lucy encounters her sweetheart and whispers: Add speech marks at the start of this sentence.

Done. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 02:24, 14 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Production

"but it may have been Lloyd Lonergan." Rewrite to: "but it is presumed to be Lloyd Lonergan." Or something similar.
Link New Rochelle.

Done. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 02:24, 14 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Release and reception

Link Canadian Bank of Commerce and Carnegie Library.

Linked... but these individual branches do not have articles and redirect to the larger article. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 02:24, 14 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Going to place on hold for now. good888 (talk) 19:29, 9 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Good888 All set. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 02:24, 14 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Promoting to good article class as usual. good888 (talk) 10:57, 14 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]