Talk:That Should Be Me/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 00:38, 4 May 2011 (UTC)

• I like the song, so I'm reviewing it :)--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 00:39, 4 May 2011 (UTC)

Lead

• Most music critics positively received the song, and it debuted -> there has to be some kind of connector to these totally opposite things.

Both are reception.

• after the release of My World 2.0. -> following the release

 Done Candyo32 14:43, 1 June 2011 (UTC)

Background

• The mix was assisted by Christian Plata and Erik Madrid. Atweh and Luke Boyd perform background vocals on the song. -> try and tie this into one flowing sentence

 Done

• Described as a "sobbing" ballad -> by who?

 Done Candyo32 14:44, 1 June 2011 (UTC)

Reception

• RChris Richards -> typo?

 Done

• "That Should Be Me" also appeared on the UK Singles Chart at number 179 -> source? Also for Billboard source

 Done

Music video

• who is playing the keyboard. Bieber then sings his lines, playing guitar -> inconsistent

How so? [Bieber] comes before who. What other wording would you suggest?

• The woman who directed the band into the studio now directs them and Bieber into another room with lights, to film the video. -> I'm pretty sure its Bieber's mother

1:09-1:15 is definitely not this woman. Candyo32 13:39, 3 June 2011 (UTC)

Source queries

• 3 -> publisher?

Publisher is listed. Not linked because it is the same link for the work.

• 6 -> publisher?

Washington Post published by the Washington Post Company, and I've been told in FL procedures that in such cases only the work should be noted.

• 9 -> over-link

 Done

• What makes 10 and 12 reliable?

No thread about their reliability, but I have used HitFix numerous times in my own GA's, and TVbytheNumbers/Zap2it is heavily used in television articles. Candyo32 13:44, 3 June 2011 (UTC)

• 14 again over-link

Can't unlink myself as it is the singlechart template. Candyo32 13:46, 3 June 2011 (UTC)

• • Nice job, sorry again for the 3-week delay, had some extra issues on Wiki that prevented some immediate editing. You have 1 days to make these fixes....Lol, take you time ;)--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 18:42, 30 May 2011 (UTC)

• • Alrighty, this one is a pass. Good work.--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 21:57, 6 June 2011 (UTC)