Talk:Ted Frank/GA1
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Reviewer: GRAPPLE X 13:31, 25 August 2011 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
I haven't reviewed many BLPs before so forgive me if I'm too anal about citations with it.
- Is it reasonably well written?
- A. Prose quality:
- "Frank is also a former director and fellow of the Legal Center for the Public Interest at the American Enterprise Institute in Washington D.C.." -> It's up to you if you want to use "D.C." or "DC", but the latter looks cleaner at the end of a sentence like this.
"Frank defended himself on the PointofLaw.com weblog which he is a regular contributor to, " -> this reads a bit awkwardly to me. Perhaps "to which he regularly contributes" would work better.
- "Frank is also a former director and fellow of the Legal Center for the Public Interest at the American Enterprise Institute in Washington D.C.." -> It's up to you if you want to use "D.C." or "DC", but the latter looks cleaner at the end of a sentence like this.
- B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
- MOS is fine.
- A. Prose quality:
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- Citations are fine. Some facts are cited with four or five references but in a BLP I feel that's not too much due to the fear of misrepresentation, though elsewhere it might be.
- A. References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- Scope is grand.
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Article is neutral.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- Article has grown hugely this week, but a look at its history reveals no controversy so I don't think the additions will be unstable at all.
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- Sole image is commons and not a problem. A portrait might be something to keep an eye out for the future but it's not necessary unless something free turns up.
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
- OK thanks Grapple I appreciate you taking an hour or so to review this. I reworded the second point, D.C. does look a little funny but I think its the official name. I would really like to see a photograph in the infobox which would certainly improve the aesthetic. I'll see if I can request one, although would most certainly help if some uni student could photograph him at his next appearance!. I believe there was a placeholder image in the infobox previously requesting a free image but it was removed. ♦ Dr. Blofeld 13:40, 25 August 2011 (UTC)
Yeah, there was no evidence that those placeholders worked anyway. Promise I will try to get hold of a photo over the next few days. If I could learn of his next uni visit perhaps I could contact a university and request one at the event or something. ♦ Dr. Blofeld 13:47, 25 August 2011 (UTC)