Talk:Soulmates (Parks and Recreation)/GA1
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Reviewer: Queenieacoustic (talk) 19:41, 12 May 2011 (UTC)
I'll review the article tomorrow. Queenieacoustic (talk) 19:41, 12 May 2011 (UTC)
I am terribly sorry for the time it has taken for me to review this, but I've been very busy and have just not found the time to read the article. Again, I am terribly sorry, and I hope you can forgive me. Queenieacoustic (talk) 12:53, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
Comments[edit]
Plot[edit]
Nothing here.
Production[edit]
- ...who he previously played him in the second season episodes "The Camel" and "Telethon". Remove "him".
Cultural references[edit]
Nothing here.
Reception[edit]
- "delivered just the right amount to Creep out Leslie (and) keep me in fits of laughter". Although I assume it is copy-pasted from the review, I still wonder why "Creep" is starts with a capitalized letter?
- ...because takes the time to develop it "invests in its characters... Poorly worded. Remove "takes the time to develop" since it seems really out of place.
Lead[edit]
Nothing here either.
Closing comments[edit]
So as you see, just some slight mistakes need to be fixed until the article can pass for GA. I'll put it on hold for seven days so that this overall well-written article can be perfected. Good luck! (Again, sorry for the long wait) Queenieacoustic (talk) 12:53, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
- I think I've addressed everything, but let me know if you have anything more. Thanks! — Hunter Kahn 15:04, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
- Looks good to me. Pass! Queenieacoustic (talk) 15:39, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
It is mentioned that Adam Sandler is the "late Adam Sandler". Adam Sandler isn't dead, this needs to be corrected. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Shadevil75 (talk • contribs) 14:40, 9 June 2011 (UTC)