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70 or 90 foreign nationals killed in the attacks?

Resolved

The lead currently says that there were casualties from over 70 countries. The article text says more than 90 countries lost citizens in the attacks. The reference for 70 is an undated list published by Interpol (who cite the US State Dept).[1] The reference for 90 is an article from the US State Dept from 2006.[2] Does anyone know the actual figure? All things being equal, I would go with the dated article since we have no idea when Interpol published their list. A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 23:06, 5 July 2011 (UTC)

I'd go with the Interpol figure. The America.gov article has a link to a "fact sheet" which is now a dead link, and not available to be checked. The Interpol list was last updated August 2007, and quotes the U.S. State Department, so it seems reliable, and the more recent of the two. Shirtwaist ☎ 06:18, 6 July 2011 (UTC)
Oh, I didn't see the date at the bottom of the Interpol cite. You are correct: it is more recent. Thanks! A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 14:08, 6 July 2011 (UTC)

Popular culture

I was the previous GA reviewer and personally would still fail the article. Personally, I think it continues to be disorganized. In addition, I think a popular culture section should exist. There should be a section with a paragraph recounting all NYT best-sellers related to the attacks, a paragraph with all big screen movies, a paragraph with all notable television events, a paragraph on notable special memorial services (E.G. Obama's recent visit), a discussion of annual memorial services (9/11, memorial day, flag day, veterans day, etc.), a paragraph on memorial buildings and structures, etc.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 12:06, 10 July 2011 (UTC)

We've discussed adding a popular culture section and there was virtually no support for it, let alone consensus. A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 13:05, 10 July 2011 (UTC)
TTT, maybe we can have a longish list of See Also links. I'm of the thinking that if we are in keeping wiht a desire to have the article be around 60kbs (which may be less than possible) that adding or exapnding things that are beyond the SCOPE of the title, will make the article have less focus on the title related issues.--MONGO 16:24, 10 July 2011 (UTC)
There is certainly room to have an independent list article.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 16:32, 10 July 2011 (UTC)
There could also be some adjustments to the template. Tom Harrison Talk 16:40, 10 July 2011 (UTC)
A list article and a template adjustment are good ideas. Even a list of related 9/11 articles that provide extensive coverage of the post 9/11 impacts would be good.--MONGO 16:44, 10 July 2011 (UTC)
An Outline of the September 11 attacks, similar to Outline of religion? (Might not be the best title if we want to leave it open to military, political, cultural, literary impact etc.) Tom Harrison Talk 17:00, 10 July 2011 (UTC)
Pressure to add "in popular culture" sections can be quite overwhelming, and I support the idea of a separate list article as an elegant solution to a problem that would otherwise never go away. (See this excellent statement on the topic.) Adding it to the template is a good idea imho as well -- you want it to be easy to find. Antandrus (talk) 17:12, 10 July 2011 (UTC)
That's pretty close to our established practice, but xkcd should really say "The term Wood refers to the hard fibrous tissue..." Tom Harrison Talk 17:33, 10 July 2011 (UTC)

See Talk:Outline of the September 11 attacks. Tom Harrison Talk 17:44, 10 July 2011 (UTC) We already have List of cultural references of the September 11 attacks, which is linked through the template at the bottom. Hut 8.5 18:32, 10 July 2011 (UTC)

Reconstruction of WTC: When did it start? When does it end?

The lede has too much detail regarding the reconstruction of WTC. It currently has 4 sentences (which is the same number of sentences devoted to the victims). I'd love to simplify it to say something like, "Reconstruction of the World Trade Center began in January, 2002 and is expected to be completed by 2013". The problem is that I don't know the real dates. Does anyone here live in New York and know the real dates? Living in Chicago, the reconstruction of the WTC doesn't appear on our nightly news as I imagine it does in New York. A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 01:30, 12 July 2011 (UTC)

What help is needed?

It's been a quite a while since I worked on these articles, but would love to see it become a GA again, and get more FA's related to the topic -- this article eventually, subarticles and others too.

The article looks pretty stable now :) Is there any particular area or task that you want help on? Cheers. --Aude (talk) 18:21, 15 July 2011 (UTC)

PS - Through WP:GLAM/NARA, they would be willing to help us access anything not digitized and get it digitized. And, if we need any other particular help, we're in better position to do outreach and find that help. --Aude (talk) 18:21, 15 July 2011 (UTC)
I'm not sure if there's any easy way to answer this question. The main discussion/effort to improve the article is here. Briefly, here's our progress so far:
  • All of the 2008 GA issues have been fixed.
  • Almost all of the issues in the 2008 FA review have been fixed. A few remain and a couple are debatable as to whether they're really issues. (But none should bar the article from reaching GA status.)
  • Most of the issues in the 2011 GA review have been fixed although the reviewer may disagree. A few remain but IMHO they are debatable as to a) whether they're really issues or b) if they are issues, whether they are part of the GA criteria or FA criteria.
So what remains to be done?
  • I think that there's too much detail in the lede about the WTC reconstruction. See the discussion here.
  • Regarding the video clip of the plane crashing into the Pentagon, the first 85 seconds (or so) need to be cut. I don't believe that this is part of the GA criteria, but we'll have to address before submitting it for FA status.
Beyond that, I think we're running out of things to fix. Either that, or they're better addressed after the GA review. A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 20:04, 15 July 2011 (UTC)
Hi Aude, nice to see you. I hope to tighten up Attackers and their background. It would be helpful if knowledgeable people carefully read through the whole thing, maybe comparing what's in the sub-articles. Tom Harrison Talk 23:53, 15 July 2011 (UTC)
If you and AQFK get this article to FA, I don't know if there are enough barnstars available to reward you. I say get the facts straight here and then make sure the subarticles reflect the same data, but with greater detail of course.--MONGO 04:12, 17 July 2011 (UTC)

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:September 11 attacks/GA3. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer:  JoeGazz  ♂  18:44, 18 July 2011 (UTC)

Quick Fail Criteria

 Skipping my normal template. I'm going to skip my normal template and do this a different way. This article was just failed at Talk:September 11 attacks/GA2 not even two weeks ago and you are already nominating it again? That's bold but I will go ahead with the checks but in a different manner. I am going to check first to see if what was of concern in the previous GA nomination was addressed and fixed. I will make a list of that below in a subsection.

Joe's Quick Fail Criteria

 This section is a work in progress... This section is what I call Joe's Quick Fail Criteria, something where you get 2 days to fix what is addressed specifically from the old GA Review that is still of a concern. This article, like it was said is a WP:IAR case, so that is a little out of my comfort zone so I will ask other opinions along the way. Let's begin.

  • I still see that you use 9/11 in the lead. That is an issue, it needs to be reworded as "nine-eleven" or something similar, that goes without saying from this point forward.
  • I see that you still are bordering on a maximal length for the article, it is really quite long in my opinion. The article needs cutting of unnecessary details and possibly making some new articles to cut out the lengthiness in this one.
  • The lead is of concern here, it is not yet summing up everything, please include some motive information in the lead while cutting unnecessary details.
  • If "Nearly 3000" people died in the event, shouldn't the numbers add up? You have 2753 people, 343 firefighters, 60 police, and 8 private authority. Then you have something about 184 more people. These numbers don't add up, they add up to more than 3000, they add to 3348. This should be fixed or if the firefighters and police were included in the death toll, make that clearer.

Please fix the errors above, if they are not fixed by July 20, 2011 at 19:30:00 the article will be failed. Please allow me to note that I am going to be looking in to the Good article criteria, MOS, and my personal opinions of what a good article needs to have. I will be very tough on my good article reviews because I will not put my name on something that is less than quality.  JoeGazz  ♂  19:28, 18 July 2011 (UTC)

  • No offense, but judging by your statement "you get 2 days to fix what is addressed specifically from the old GA Review that is still of a concern", it doesn't appear as if you read the previous GA review or its discussion very carefully.
  • The previous GA review did not ask us to not spell it "9/11". Instead, their concern was about pronunciation. This was addressed by adding a footnote. In any case, "9/11" is the common spelling in English. See, for example, The 9/11 Commission Report. I could be mistaken, but I don't believe that this should be changed.
  • The previous GA review asked that 2K be trimmed from the article. We trimmed it 5K. It's currently at 51K. We can trim an additional 1K if necessary although it's unfair for you to say that we did not address the previous GA concern when we actually did more than they asked.
  • Good (but new) point.
  • Again, you are mistaken. This was not included in the previous GA review. If it had, we would have explained to the GA reviewer that firefighters, policemen, etc. are people, too. In any case, I think it's fairly clear, "'Among the 2,753 victims who died in the attacks on the World Trade Center were 343 firefighters and 60 police officers from New York City and the Port Authority, and 8 private emergency medical technicians and paramedics."
  • Actually, now that I think about it, you've already made several mistakes. I think I'd rather resubmit this to get a better GA reviewer. Thanks for your time. A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 20:44, 18 July 2011 (UTC)
I'm going to ignore your last point, the clarification on the number system was indeed helpful and cleared it up. The 9/11 pronunciation issue being documented as proper English by a government website is acceptable. I'm trying to read a lengthy article, and 2 old GA reviews that were organized differently than mine, that's the concern here. Getting into my main points will be much easier to understand. I apologize to you on the aspect that these were fixed and on my part were a mistake, although I do have more concerns that need to be addressed of my own. On a side note, you cannot resubmit the article for GA review until this one is closed, and I fully intend on getting this article to GA status just like you, that's why I am going to be critical of it. I will also be asking for a 2O in the end to make sure that there is not a 4th GA nomination that has to go through. I don't mean for that to sound snappy in any way, I just want you to know that reading those other GA Reviews were different format than this one, so moving onto my new comments that I notice simply by myself without consideration from previous GAs, I hope to continue to review this article to a higher standard which is acceptable to you. JoeGazz  ♂  01:38, 19 July 2011 (UTC)
Just so you know, I have more free time to edit Wikipedia on weekends than weekdays. Also, I'm having a root canal today, so it might be a couple days before you hear back from me. A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 12:58, 19 July 2011 (UTC)
Oh, that's no problem at all, I again want to apologize for the boldness that came across and the mistakes above. Knowing your schedule here, if I come across something that is simple like a simple un-debatable grammar fix, I'll just fix it but I will leave more serious things, like lead rewrite (the lead is basically okay now, just an example) to you because I am not sure how you want it formatted and I'm not a September 11 expert. Also, one last thing, per knowing your schedule, I will also extend any hold times on the article that I may place like I usually place a 7 day hold, well I will place a 14 day hold in this case. Sound good?  JoeGazz  ♂  13:33, 19 July 2011 (UTC)
Yes, that's fine. It looks like other editors have resolved the above mentioned issues. A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 20:28, 23 July 2011 (UTC)

Main Review

 Reading article and taking into consideration MOS and no previous GA... Well, I am quite surprised with the dedication of all of the other editors who have worked on this article, it certainly has come a long way and I am impressed to say that I have found minimal errors that need fixing and hope that these can be debated, fixed, and the article passes this GA nomination.

  • This was mentioned in the beginning, it's a new issue, can you maybe add motive to the lead? Something about "why?" will be helpful if someone is reading just the lead and that is a likely question to come into their head.
  • The section "Hate Crimes" seems to have 2 short paragraphs which is against the MOS, can we possibly merge them somehow? If they are completely different things, can we expand those sections then? (This isn't a big deal, it just makes me want to go on reading, so the references may provide more info)

Personally, that is all I see off the first check, I am going to check it over again later, but if you could please respond to these or fix them, that would be great! I believe August 2, 2011 is when these should be fixed by. Please don't hesitate to ask more questions and I will do another check later and post anymore findings here.  JoeGazz  ♂  15:52, 19 July 2011 (UTC)

  • Comment - I've been busy and reading through this again but slowly, I am 99.9% sure this will pass I just need another day or two to make the decision.  JoeGazz  ♂  23:42, 22 July 2011 (UTC)

Concluding Comments

 The debate below has closed and a decision rendered.
I'm going to wait for the discussion below regarding a "See Also" link to finish up so there is no active discussion when I close this.  JoeGazz  ♂  19:59, 25 July 2011 (UTC)

  • Closing Comment- I've decided to pass this article, in the beginning I admit, it did look like it may fail, but with the work, discussion, and the patience of the editors who have worked so hard on this article. It is my pleasure and honor to pass this article to Good Article Status. I wish you all the best!  JoeGazz  ♂  01:31, 27 July 2011 (UTC)
Would it be possible to un-sandwich some of the text in the first section - as per our MOS:IMAGES on this - Avoid sandwiching text between two images that face each other, or between a left-side image and an infobox.Moxy (talk) 04:40, 27 July 2011 (UTC)
JoeGazz: Thank you very much for all your help with this article. Good luck and happy editing! A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 12:43, 27 July 2011 (UTC)
Thank you very much for your support. I wish I had been more active in the process, but I am extremely proud of the work the editors here have put in. We have a long road ahead of us, but this is a shining start. --Tarage (talk) 11:14, 28 July 2011 (UTC)

Comments by Other Users

All users who are not the named reviewer above are welcome to leave comments below for said reviewer to take into consideration when making his/her decision.

(commenting on this review without reading the article in question) Would it be possible to get a more thorough (point specific) review. Reading over this I am not sure that you have stated what the problems are or aren't clearly to the editors involved. Are you saying that only the lead needs to be expanded as of now - thus all the other concerns have been address? If so moving on should be easy?Moxy (talk) 04:22, 19 July 2011 (UTC)

Just a short clarification to make sure the reviewer is clear on the article's recent history. This article was a GA from 2008 to 2010, but was reassessed and delisted. All points in the reassessment were subsequently fixed before relisting the article for GA. All the points in the previous reviewer's list of problems that he thought made the article fail GA were fixed. In addition, most of the points in an unsuccessful FA review in 2008 have also been addressed. If the current reviewer wishes to point out any deficiencies in the article - above and beyond the extensive good faith corrections that have already been made in response to previous reviews - it would be very helpful of them to be specific about exactly what needs fixing and exactly why, and to allow editors a reasonable amount of time to make the requested changes. Shirtwaist ☎ 07:39, 19 July 2011 (UTC)

Reviewer Comment: Yes, I see that the other concerns in the previous reviews have been addressed and thank you for telling me about the delisting, can you please link me to that reassessment for reference only? In the "Main Review" section I will be pointing out new points of concern to me and always explain why they need to be fixed. The standard time I place an article on hold for is 7 days, however, in this case, I am going to place it on hold for 14 days if any remaining issues stand to allow the nominator, along with other editors more than a substantial amount of time to fix the article and address the concerns. The concerns before were from old GA reviews which have been addressed and should be disregarded from this point forward.  JoeGazz  ♂  15:14, 19 July 2011 (UTC)

I don't have much experience with the GA process, but is this articles (or any other articles) GA fate in the hands of a single editor? RxS (talk) 17:33, 19 July 2011 (UTC)

Yes its in the hands of ONE reviewer.Moxy (talk) 19:41, 19 July 2011 (UTC)
It is in the hands of one reviewer to make the decision, BUT, the reviewer can request second opinion and then technically the article was reviewed by 2 people. Featured articles have to be consensus building.  JoeGazz  ♂  20:16, 19 July 2011 (UTC)
The GA reassess from June 2010 was transcluded to the talk page here. As you can see, all problems listed in the reassess were fixed. The FA review fixes are here. Shirtwaist ☎ 21:36, 19 July 2011 (UTC)
Yes, I acknowledge that those were fixed. Thank you.  JoeGazz  ♂  13:46, 20 July 2011 (UTC)

I believe this article would be incomplete if it does not include a link to the related article about conspiracy theories. I base my believe on the notion that the conspiracy theories are a mayor component of Popular Culture aftermath of the event. Books are written about truther culture and comedians use the subject in their work. This is general knowledge for which I hope I won't be required references. I do not believe mentioning the conpiracy article in the prose is indipensable. I believe a link will suffice.Stapler80 (talk) 05:36, 23 July 2011 (UTC)

This has been heavily debated and the consensus is no. --Tarage (talk) 10:16, 24 July 2011 (UTC)
That's a strange consensus to have reached... no mention of a subsequent relevant aspect of the event at all? I'm notthe reviewer, but given the profile of the "truther" movement then lack of even a mention would probably be a fail (for weight/npov). I mean; it's not even in the 9/11 nav template, which seems to be taking WP:FRINGE to a worrying degree. --Errant (chat!) 16:05, 25 July 2011 (UTC)
We discussed the issue for months and it was the subject of two RfCs. At the end of the day, consensus was against including CTs in the article. As for the template, that's a separate article (which I don't edit). I am aware, however, that editors of the template discussed it and consensus was also against inclusion. In any case, that template is a separate article and I don't think its within the scope of this review. A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 16:39, 25 July 2011 (UTC)
I don't have much time for the 9/11 conspiracies. However, to knowingly and consentially remove any mention of them (i.e. not even as a see also), is to use consensus as a justification for POV. Distasteful as many of us may find it, 9/11 conspiracy theories is a significant part of the 9/11 topic. Consider the topic as a tree, with this article as the trunk. If an article exists, it should be accessible from the trunk, unless a strong case can be made that it is a branch of a bigger branch. —WFC— TFL notices 17:33, 25 July 2011 (UTC)
You're free to search the talk page archives to see why consensus was against inclusion. But briefly, one of the main arguments was WP:ONEWAY. There were few, if any, reliable sources about 9/11 that also included coverage of CT in a serious and prominent way. A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 17:37, 25 July 2011 (UTC)
I'm not suggesting that the article should cover them, because as you say, they are not prominently covered by sources which go into detail on the event itself. But a link to the article should be provided somewhere, because it is a relevant and reasonably broad sub-topic with no other obvious parent. —WFC— TFL notices 18:03, 25 July 2011 (UTC)

WFC, the obvious parent article for 9/11 conspiracy theories is Conspiracy theory. It's not self-evident that conspiracy theories claiming to explain 9/11 really have anything to do with 9/11. You're welcome to familiarize yourself with the archives and see how we got where we are. But after two recent RfCs, I can't see taking this up again so soon. Tom Harrison Talk 18:35, 25 July 2011 (UTC)

  • Reviewer Comment - I've reviewed the archives as well as the RfCs that were brought up and there is strong evidence that consensus is to not include the link to the Conspiracy theories article and so this issue that was brought up will not influence my decision on probably passing this article. You're free to debate this more, but I am going to disregard this little point here. Thank you for bringing it up though.  JoeGazz  ♂  20:05, 25 July 2011 (UTC)

I believe there is a erroneous factual implication in Attack where it is written "All aircraft within the continental U.S. were grounded, and aircraft already in flight were told to land immediately. All international civilian aircraft were either turned back or redirected to airports in Canada or Mexico, and all international flights were banned from landing on U.S. soil for three days.[32]" This grounding was sustained for most US flights, but I believe exceptions were quickly made to fly friendly Saudi Arabian diplomats and family members out of the US. This is certainly historically relevant since a majority of the hijackers were from there. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Wdteague (talk • contribs) 04:25, 20 August 2011 (UTC)

2008 Mumbai terrorist attacks RM

Since I know this is relevant to many editors, both for and against, the use of the word "terrorist" in article titles (and content, but this is beyond the scope of the discussion), I am letting you all know that there is a new Requesting move at Talk:2008_Mumbai_terrorist_attacks#Requesting_Move_2 to restore the long standing 2008 Mumbai attacks title, which was changed after only 3 !v without any real discussion. Please participate as this is a relate discussion to the ones here, but of a slightly lower profile, and am afraid a GA is goy to become the usual NPOV crap unless it gets community attention. --Cerejota (talk) 20:10, 22 July 2011 (UTC)

"detailed timeline of bin Laden's having prior knowledge"

This sentence in the Osama bin Laden section implies that Osama bin Laden had detailed knowledge of the impending attacks. This may or may not be true, but it does not appear to be unambiguously supported by the referenced source. At most, the source only states that bin Laden was: "reportedly told of date for the attacks on 6 September". Expanding this to imply that bin Laden was given detailed foreknowledge of the attacks is arguably WP:OR. It needs rewording or better sourcing. Stating that bin Laden's aides had detailed foreknowledge of the attacks is consistent with the source. Wildbear (talk) 23:09, 24 July 2011 (UTC)

Oh COME on. You are going to nitpick and nitpick until you get your way aren't you. I am heavily against this. Wildbear is just trying to push his POV again. --Tarage (talk) 02:41, 25 July 2011 (UTC)
Presenting speculation as fact is not NPOV. All you need to do is provide a source that gives undisputed evidence to support the claim. Wayne (talk) 02:53, 25 July 2011 (UTC)
The article does not say that bin Laden had detailed foreknowledge of the attacks. It says a detailed timeline of his prior knowledge was given in a documentary by Yosri Fouda - it is the timeline, and not the knowledge, that is detailed. The documentary does also allege that bin Laden had "an integral role" in planning the attacks, which additionally means he must have had detailed foreknowledge.[3] Hut 8.5 09:21, 25 July 2011 (UTC)
I agree that the article states "A detailed timeline of bin Laden's prior knowledge". I do not agree that this is supported by the referenced source. At most, it only gives a single data point for bin Laden's prior knowledge — that bin Laden was told of the date for the attacks on 6 September — which does not constitute a timeline. Perhaps we need an uninvolved third party to read the source and give their assessment. "The documentary does also allege that bin Laden had "an integral role" in planning the attacks". Do we have source for this? (I did a brief search and didn't find it.) Wildbear (talk) 19:08, 25 July 2011 (UTC)

This seems like a level of detail more appropriate to one of the sub-articles. I think we can pull it without losing anything we absolutely must have here. Tom Harrison Talk 00:21, 26 July 2011 (UTC)

I've undone the following addition.[4] I don't think that there is a need for qualifier given that a) No serious dispute exists that Bin Laden was involved and b) Bin Laden himself did not disagree. Also, given that Tom Harrison already removed the offending content,[5] I don't think that any further action is required. A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 01:52, 26 July 2011 (UTC)
The fact that there is no serious dispute that Bin Laden was involved and that Bin Laden did not disagree is totally irrelevant. The fact remains that the translation is disputed by independant sources so the governments own translation is an allegation and shouldn't be presented as unchallenged fact. Wayne (talk) 02:59, 26 July 2011 (UTC)
Quick question, which sources dispute the translation, and what about the translations do they dispute? RxS (talk) 03:14, 26 July 2011 (UTC)
The answer was in the ref given to support the qualifier. This source

"At the most important places where (the translation) is held to prove the guilt of bin Laden, it is not identical with the Arabic (text)... The American translators who listened to the tapes and transcribed them apparently wrote a lot of things in that they wanted to hear but that cannot be heard on the tape no matter how many times you listen to it." - Prof. Gernot Rotter et al, professor of Islamic and Arabic Studies at the Asia-Africa Institute University of Hamburg

This is also the so called "Fat bin Laden" tape. David Griffen claims it is not even him. Griffen may be ignored as a RS for a dispute but independant translators can't. Wayne (talk) 09:18, 26 July 2011 (UTC)
This "allegedly" is a conspiracist talking point sustained by cherry-picking sources. It should not be included here. Tom Harrison Talk 10:47, 26 July 2011 (UTC)
Very simple solution to the problem. Supply a RS for your claim that Rotter (who is also a German politician) and his translators are conspiracy theorists and that Das Erste is not a RS and supply an independent translation supporting the claim being made in this article. Wayne (talk) 15:12, 26 July 2011 (UTC)
There is no problem, except people trying to soapbox the article, and using the talk page to promote conspiracy theories. What's in the article is sourced and cited. I have no interest in writing anything about Eurpoean politicians. If you do, it sounds like that material belongs in 9/11 conspiracy theories. Tom Harrison Talk 17:22, 26 July 2011 (UTC)
I did say they were POV pushing. Glad people believe me now. --Tarage (talk) 21:31, 26 July 2011 (UTC)
You are making a claim about the reliability of sources not only without supplying any sources to back your claim up but also stating that you dont have to supply any. WP is about reliably sourced information given due weight. If two RS contradict each other then both views must be given if there is no RS refuting one. We have a claim by the U.S. government regarding the translation. We also have a claim by a RS that the governments translation is wrong. I made a legitimate and relevant request for confirmation of the claim made in the article, simple solution.....supply a source that says the discrepency is a conspiracy theory not supported by other independent translators. Do not make claims of POV pushing without (1.) supplying evidence i.e. a source that says the discrepency is a conspiracy theory and (2.) proving this conspiracy theory is widespread enough that everyone should know it is a conspiracy theory. It gets a little tiresome when editors throw the truther tag around as a thinly disguised PA to avoid proving their case. Wayne (talk) 04:15, 27 July 2011 (UTC)

Dredging up a source that can be construed as supporting the he's-not-bin-Laden theory doesn't make bin Laden "alleged." This has all been hashed out again and again, most recently in a section above, and the talk page has often been used as a forum to promote these fringe theories. There's no reason to take it up yet again, and I'm not going to spend any more time on it. If you want to make bin Laden "alleged," that burden's on you. Tom Harrison Talk 14:12, 27 July 2011 (UTC)

Nowhere have I claimed the person is not bin Laden and neither does the source "I dredged up". Bin Laden's admission in that tape is alleged not bin Laden. WP policy requires that the entire claim be deleted but I was willing to compromise and accept a simple qualifier to avoid protracted arguements from POV pushers, yet editors continue to feign stupidy to avoid supporting their view or having to accept an edit they do not like. As I supplied a RS I have no burdon, the burdon is now on you to provide a ref to refute "alleged", please do so or accept the edit. Wayne (talk) 04:12, 28 July 2011 (UTC)
Are there any other sources that back up this claim? Because I have a problem including disputed content on the basis of a single persons (Rotter) opinion. RxS (talk) 04:39, 28 July 2011 (UTC)
Rotter appears to be a reliable source with experience in translating Arabic books for publication and he has no apparent link to any conspiracy theorising. Rotter's "opinion" is backed up by translations by two other translators, Dr. Abdel El Husseini and Dr. Murad Alami who is an accredited translator of Arabic, English and French for the German court system. The original translation of the video was done by unnamed CIA translators. It is this translation that needs corroboration. Named independent sources for a translation must carry greater weight than unnnamed sources with a known COI. I have been unable to find any refutation of Rotter's translation or support for the CIA's. That particular video should not even be mentioned in this article if we follow WP policy. Wayne (talk) 09:53, 28 July 2011 (UTC)
The fact that you can find a single source contesting the translation doesn't mean anything. If there is a substantive debate as to the accuracy of the translation then it may be acceptable to modify the content of the article, but one source isn't enough for this. Your claim that "the original translation of the video was done by unnamed CIA translators" is wrong.[6] The two (independent) translators were an academic at Johns Hopkins University and a professional translator working for a company which does translation work for various government clients. The translators are named and neither has anything to do with the CIA. A translation of part of the video was also included as a prosecution exhibit in the trial of Zacarias Moussaoui.[7] Hut 8.5 11:32, 28 July 2011 (UTC)
Of course it means something as there is only a single source for the U.S. Government translation as well. The German translation has not been refuted so it must stand per WP:Weight. The tape being used for the prosecution is irrelevant. That there is no debate is also irrelevant as the tape is of little importance so there is no reason to debate it. Considering the claim was aired on national TV, if the government translation is accurate then you should be able to find refutation of the German version somewhere. The original translators at least would have commented if they were confident they were right. Please follow WP guidelines regarding content. Wayne (talk) 17:00, 28 July 2011 (UTC)
WP:WEIGHT does not require us to provide a refutation of the German translation. It requires us to represent views in proportion to the prominence of each. The fact remains that of all the reliable published sources on the subject of this translation (and yes, there was plenty of coverage, including interviews with one of the translators [8] [9] [10] [11] [12] [13]) as far as we are aware there is only one source which presents the allegation that this part of the translation was flawed. This viewpoint therefore has little if any prominence and it would violate WP:WEIGHT to include it. I cannot imagine why we should expect an American translator to be aware of something published in a different language on another continent, let alone publish a refutation of it. Hut 8.5 19:18, 28 July 2011 (UTC)

missing link

In the FAQ states:

"The article has a section directing to conspiracy theories and this is sufficient and appropriate."

I cant see it. Where it is? --Solde9 (talk) 16:48, 27 July 2011 (UTC)

Here's a link to the article: 9/11 conspiracy theories. The FAQ is out of date. A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 17:00, 27 July 2011 (UTC)
I meant where is the link in the article. You mean out of date, that there is no more need to be a link in the article? --Solde9 (talk) 17:43, 27 July 2011 (UTC)
Correct. There used to be a link in the article, but it was removed after a very lengthy discussion. I just updated the FAQ. I also added a link to 9/11 conspiracy theories in the FAQ. A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 17:49, 27 July 2011 (UTC)
Thanks, could you please add a briefly comment in the FAQ about why there is no need to be a link in the article. Or maybe a link to the discussion? --Solde9 (talk) 17:54, 27 July 2011 (UTC)

Is anyone else interested in bringing this article back to Featured Article status?

This article used to be a Featured Article but was delisted in July 2008.[14] Two years later, it was delisted as a Good Article.[15] Considering that this is the seminal event in our lives, I think that it deserves better treatment. I'd like to bring the article back to Good Article status and then to Featured Article status and may be even nominate to appear on the Main Page of Wikipedia, but I can't do it alone. Who else is interested in helping? A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 13:21, 25 June 2011 (UTC)

A noble effort and glad to do what I can to help...the first point of order is to streamline the peripherals...to reestablish the focus.--MONGO 03:55, 26 June 2011 (UTC)
A review of why it was delisted from GA might be in order. A peer review wouldn't be a bad idea either - it would provide a basic roadmap of required improvements to make. Shirtwaist ☎ 10:19, 26 June 2011 (UTC)
Yes, I was thinking of starting by going over the last GA review and fixing whatever issues were identified. By "peer review", are you referring to this: WP:Peer review? I wasn't aware of that page. (I've added it to my watch list.) A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 14:19, 26 June 2011 (UTC)
BTW, I didn't realize this at first, but this year is the 10th aniversary of 9/11. I think it would be great to have this article up to FA status in time for the 10th aniversary. It would be a lot of work but if we all pitch in, we can do it! A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 18:27, 26 June 2011 (UTC)
Yes, that's it. It's sort of a prep for good articles that are close to FA review, but it can be useful for GA advice too. Couldn't hurt. Has anyone checked off the points in this GA reassess yet? Shirtwaist ☎ 11:40, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
Keep in mind that GA and FA reviews look at stability and non-contentious talk pages as factors in deciding whether or not to promote articles. The recent dust-up wouldn't look very good in a GA or FA review right now, and there's only about two months till 911. Shirtwaist ☎ 11:57, 27 June 2011 (UTC)

I'm going through and fixing the issues identified in the last GA review. I have all of the dead links resolved, the images issues, and some of the excessive detail. I've copied and pasted the issues from the last GA review into this discussion and struck out the issues that have been resolved. A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 14:15, 27 June 2011 (UTC)

  • There are several dead links among the references.
  • Some overlinking issues too. For instance al-Qaeda, bin Laden, Taliban and Pakistan are linked too many times. There are also links to states or cities like Indonesia, Malaysia or Hamburg which I think are not relevant to the article.

*The "Long term effect" section doesn't seem comprehensive - in particular I would expect to see a subsection about the consequences on government policies all around the world regarding terrorism.

  • The "FBI investigation" section seems to short (only two sentences).
  • The pictures seem a bit random - for instance it's not clear why these two pictures [16][17] are in the "Economic aftermath" section or this one in "International response". It seems they've been put there for decoration only. Also I would have expected to see at least one picture of Osama bin Laden in the section about him.
  • Missing:
    • consequences on government policies all around the world regarding terrorism, per Laurent. --Philcha (talk) 13:43, 15 June 2010 (UTC)
  • Excessive, not relevant:
    • The wikilink to roll is just basic aerodynamics, nothing about the struggle for the doomed plane on 9/11. --Philcha (talk) 13:43, 15 June 2010 (UTC)
    • No need to name Felicia Dunn-Jones or Leon Heyward, it's enough that longer-term effects killed 2 more. --Philcha (talk) 13:43, 15 June 2010 (UTC)
    • "According to Jerrold Post, a professor of psychology at George Washington University and former CIA officer, the hijackers were well-educated, mature adults, whose belief systems were fully formed" --Philcha (talk) 14:21, 15 June 2010 (UTC)
    • Section "al-Qaeda and blowback" about the origins of al-Qaeda. --Philcha (talk) 14:21, 15 June 2010 (UTC)
    • "At that point, Bin Laden and al-Qaeda were in a period of transition, having just relocated back to Afghanistan from Sudan.[97] The 1998 African Embassy bombings and Bin Laden's 1998 fatwā marked a turning point, with bin Laden intent on attacking the United States" in section "Planning of the attacks". But the 1st and last sentences should stay. --Philcha (talk) 14:21, 15 June 2010 (UTC)

A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 14:15, 27 June 2011 (UTC)

FBI investigation and Consequences on government policies all around the world regarding terrorism

I've fixed most of the issues raised in the most recent WP:GA review. However, there are two that remain outstanding:

  1. The section on the FBI investigation needs to be expanded
  2. Lack of coverage of the consequences of government policies regarding terrorism.

I'm having difficulty in finding sources. Oh sure, there are lots of news articles which cover some particular aspect (i.e. news) relating to these two subjects, but nothing about them in general. I know that if I find enough news articles, I can cobble them together to synthesize content, but that's time consuming and relies too much on my judgement to determine what's important to mention and what's not. To make matters a bit more interesting, one of the criticisms in the WP:FA review was the lack of cites to high-quality print sources, so I'm trying to find books about these two topics. I've gone through the first 30 hits at Amazon.com[18] but haven't found a good source yet from a reputable publisher. Any help would be appreciated. A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 15:42, 29 June 2011 (UTC)

I expanded the FBI section but am still at a loss as to what to do with the second item. A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 17:44, 29 June 2011 (UTC)
OK, I added a section on 9/11's consequences on government policies regarding terrorism. But it probably needs to be expanded. I'm taking a break for the day soon. Perhaps someone else can finish it? If so, we can nominate the article for Good Article status shortly. A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 22:45, 29 June 2011 (UTC)
I've nominated the article for WP:GA status.[19] I'm not sure how long it will take for someone to do the review, so in the meantime I will begin working on fixing the issues identified in the last WP:FA review. That review was 3 years ago so I'm not sure how much has changed but what I can fix, I will. A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 18:02, 2 July 2011 (UTC)
You've done a lot of work single-handedly almost to get the article in much better shape. While I support your effort to get it a GA ranking myself and others with a lot of edits here are discouraged from participating in the review process. I will and hope other regular editors do watch list the review process so comments made there might help us help you make the article even better.--MONGO 18:46, 2 July 2011 (UTC)
It's listed at WP:Good article nominations#World_history. One of the editors there will review the article. A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 19:18, 2 July 2011 (UTC)
While regular editors shouldn't review the article per se, it's ok to respond to criticisms in defense of things in the article that you consider valid and necessary for the quality of the article. Reviewers aren't immune to good arguments. Shirtwaist ☎ 01:34, 3 July 2011 (UTC)


2008 WP:FA Review

  • I'm going to publish an account of Tama scratching bin Laden's balls off. Then you can do an FAC on him.
  • This needs to be integrated: According to the Commission Report, hundreds were killed instantly by the impact, while the rest were trapped and died after the tower collapsed.[32] As many as 600 people were killed instantly or were trapped at or above the floors of impact in the South Tower.
  • I know the wording in this statement is exact in the field of first response, Rescue and recovery efforts took months to complete but it makes no sense to say that rescue efforts to months to complete. Can you take out "Rescue and"?
  • Have you consciously decided to use Mohammed to represent Mohammed Atef in Planning of the attacks? Would it not be simpler use Atef since Mohamed Atta is in the same paragraph?
  • Why would the government of the United Kingdom also reach the conclusion that bin Laden was responsible for the attacks? Were they conducting investigations of their own? For what reason? Can you include a phrase that would connect that?
  • Can you combine these statements more effectively: Osama bin Laden says he had personally directed the 19 hijackers.[96] In the video, he says, "We had agreed with the Commander-General Muhammad Atta, Allah have mercy on him, that all the operations should be carried out within 20 minutes, before Bush and his administration notice."
  • I think, since there's so much doubt cast upon the legitimacy of hearings at Guantanamo, that you're going to have to put these statements in context: Mohammed ultimately ended up at Guantanamo Bay. During US hearings in March 2007, which have been "widely criticized by lawyers and human rights groups as sham tribunals", Mohammed again confessed his responsibility for the attacks, saying "I was responsible for the 9/11 operation, from A to Z." How did he confess? Was he on the stand at Guatanamo in a military court?
  • In Motive, you mention bin Laden used the term "spectacular" but it's not clear in what context. Can you give the full quote, please?
  • Under Muslim American reaction, were Muslim Americans the only aliens who were fingerprinted and registered?
  • Do you think it's worthwhile to include information that obituaries for everyone who died in the World Trade Center printed in the New York Times took, I think, three years to print? Or that television and radio broadcast nothing else but news and information about the attacks in the US for 3 days after, and longer in some places? Such a thing has never occurred in my experience. --Moni3 (talk) 20:09, 3 July 2008 (UTC)

Continued comments: First, let me apologize to SandyGeorgia and to Aude. I didn't check (obviously) who the primary contributors were. Since VegitaU had successfully nominated two related articles, well...you know...

  • I think you should include brief examples of what the 9/11 Commission was criticized for.
  • A sentence here starts with a number: 31.9 million square feet of Lower Manhattan office space was either damaged or destroyed.
  • What about the World Trade Center collapse has made it carcinogenic? Was it only the jet fuel? One could reason that someone who works in a building for 20 years with no ill health effects would be just as unaffected by the same disassembled materials. Was there something in the chemical change of the fires and rubble that became carcinogenic?
  • This may be difficult to include, but I feel as if the article does not address the shift in national mentality. Indeed, the article may not be able to do so, but American opinions about being invulnerable and isolated from international conflict were rudely jarred by 9/11. The immediate effects: the War on Terrorism, and the badly associated War in Iraq, the PATRIOT Act, are mentioned, but the longer aftereffects are not. Surely there must be a source that states the long term public and foreign policy effects have yet to be seen. This event will change how the US runs things for decades to come. --Moni3 (talk) 14:01, 9 July 2008 (UTC)

Comments - It's certainly sobering to see this here. The most important event of my lifetime definitely deserves a review from me.

  • In the references, print publishers should be in italics.
  • Current refs 62, 67, 155, 170 and 178 need a publisher.
  • Current refs 41, 77 and 83 should have full caps removed. Only capitalize the first letters of the words.
  • "attempted to retake control of their plane." Technically the airline company would have owned the plane.
  • Last sentence of second paragraph: "World Trade Center's collapse" used twice. Mix it up a little.
  • "and a small memorial built on the site." Was built.
  • "The 9/11 Commission Report believed the bombs were probably fake." Believed is an odd choice of words here. How about indicated?
  • Attackers and their motivation, Al-Qaeda: The terrorist group doesn't need a link here after it was just linked. Jihad is linked twice in the section as well.
  • Planning of the attacks: Afghanistan is linked in the prior section.
  • Hijackers: Another al-Qaeda link. Giants2008 (talk) 01:42, 4 July 2008 (UTC)

Comments

Otherwise sources look good. Ealdgyth - Talk 02:55, 4 July 2008 (UTC)
lowermanhattan.info is a reliable source - the site belongs to the Lower Manhattan Construction Command Center, which was set up by Mayor Bloomberg and Governor Pataki, to oversee construction projects in Lower Manhattan. muckrakerreport is not a reliable source. There's definitely a better source to replace the constructionequipmentguide.com source. --Aude (talk) 10:35, 4 July 2008 (UTC)

Here are some specific issues:

Lead section

  • "crashed two of the airliners into the World Trade Center in New York City, resulting in the collapse of both buildings" - the WTC consisted of seven buildings. This wording needs to be adjusted.
  • Were "members of the flight crew" involved in attempting to retake control of United Airlines Flight 93, just passengers involved, or what?
  • The "In addition, the death of at least one person from lung disease ..." sentence can be said more concisely.
  • The "The United States passed the USA PATRIOT Act, as many nations..." sentence is awkward.

Attacks

  • "No traces of explosives were found at the crash sites" - what is the reference for this?
  • "The 9/11 Commission Report believed the bombs were probably fake" - really? the report is capable of thinking and believing things? this needs rewording. Also, why did the 9/11 Commission think this? This whole bit about "bombs" on the planes and "traces of explosives"
  • "which was given the code name "the Faculty of Law"." - excessive details here
  • The "The National Institute of Standards and Technology (NIST) launched investigations into the cause of collapse ... " paragraph is misplaced or out-of-place in the section that talks about the events on September 11.

Other sections - I don't have time to go through them all right now, but there are issues.

In summary, I think the article falls short of the "comprehensive" FA requirement and doesn't follow "summary style" as well as is possible, has serious prose issues, and can use improvement in other areas. I am more than willing to keep working on the article and subarticle, but now is not a good time for me to work on it. Now is especially not a good time to work the article through FAC, due to my wikibreak and that my boxes of books, documentaries and other sources for the 9/11 attacks are in storage now. I expect to have a break from work/school at the end of August and early September, and willing to put in time then for this article and the subarticles. Now is simply not a good time. --Aude (talk) 10:19, 4 July 2008 (UTC)

I also agree with Moni3 about bringing articles on other topics (not 9/11) to FA. Only working on 9/11 articles is not the most joyful thing. Ideally for each 9/11 FA, I like to get another non-9/11 FA. While I am overseas, I may work a little bit on other topics and come back to the 9/11 articles in 1-2 months. --Aude (talk) 10:28, 4 July 2008 (UTC)
  • Don't we have guidelines against internal linking? "2,974 people"—irritating to be shunted downwards when you hit it.
  • Why is "civilians" linked? Please see WP:CONTEXT and MOSLINK. Audit the whole article to weed out trivial links: let your high-value links breathe.
  • Comma required? "died as an immediate result of the attacks with another 24 missing and"
  • "The attacks had major ramifications around the world, with the United States declaring a"—The comma's there, but another "with" construction straight away? And please see these exercises on "noun plus -ing". Audit the whole text for overuse of ", with ...". It gets tiring.
  • "Stock exchanges were closed for almost a week, and posted enormous losses immediately upon reopening, with airline and insurance industries suffering the greatest financial losses"—which comma could be removed for smoother reading? "Upon" is rather la-de-da; try "on".
  • It's particularly important not to autoformat in this article (it's no longer encouraged at MOSNUM, in any case). My display keeps saying "11 September 2001", which is—all over the English-speaking world—known in US format, not my UK/Australian format. Tony (talk) 13:04, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
NOTE: The above FA review is from 2008. Here is a link to the version from 3 years ago that was reviewed.[20] A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 01:46, 4 July 2011 (UTC)
The article has changed some since as you surely know. It is actually not easy to bring this article to FA since "too many" editors have handled it...FA's are usually the work of one or just a few major contributors. It isn't impossible, but I suspect making the GA a goal before 9/11/2011 and then pushing for FA by mid 2012.--MONGO 03:52, 4 July 2011 (UTC)
Failure isn't an option. :) I think that significant progress has already been made. All of the issues from the 2010 WP:GA review and most of the issues from the 2008 WP:FA review have been fixed. As soon as the current GA review is concluded, I will immediately nominate it for FA status. I think that things are going very well and we are on target to complete FA status by the tenth aniversary of 9/11. A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 04:07, 5 July 2011 (UTC)

According to WP:LENGTH, the upper limit for article length is 50 KB of readable prose. Using User:Dr_pda/prosesize, readable prose is currently at 57 KB:

File size: 596 kB

Prose size (including all HTML code): 98 kB
References (including all HTML code): 20 kB
Wiki text: 162 kB
Prose size (text only): 57 kB (9335 words) "readable prose size"

References (text only): 1440 B

So we need to remove 7 KB. I can do it, but I'd like to take my time and read through the whole article a few times to figure out what's needed and what's not. I'll try to target redundant content and unnecessary details. I hate to delete content, so I'll probably move content to a sub-article. Or I'll post a message on the sub-article's talk page asking the editors there to incorporate the content. A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 00:49, 7 July 2011 (UTC)

Do as you think best, but keep in mind WP:LENGTH also says:"> 60 KB Probably should be divided (although the scope of a topic can sometimes justify the added reading time)" Shirtwaist ☎ 00:25, 8 July 2011 (UTC)
I completed a first pass and was able to remove about 3.5 KB without losing much at all. Does anyone see anything else that needs fixing before I nominate it again for a WP:GA review? A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 21:38, 9 July 2011 (UTC)
One thing bothers me about the lead - "According to the New York State Health Department, as of June 2009, a total of 836 firefighters, police and other reponders have died." The source seems to be contradictory on this point, and it's not made clear if they're including the 411 responders killed on 9/11 in those figures. In fact, the source isn't clear on whether or not the 800 deaths are related to 9/11 at all. It should at least be taken out of the lead and placed elsewhere, if not jettisoned altogether. Shirtwaist ☎ 23:30, 9 July 2011 (UTC)
836 is the number of responders who died from any cause whatsoever, including car accidents. I'm not sure what someone dying years later in a car accident has to do with 9/11. Everyone dies eventually. I'll remove the sentence. A Quest For Knowledge (talk)

I started going through all the references to make sure that they all have a publisher. Out of the first 139, I found 2 which didn't have cite templates filled out (which I fixed). I'll check the rest later. I'm going to bed soon. A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 03:43, 12 July 2011 (UTC)

I believe that all the missing publishers and templates have all been filled out. I'm currently researching the tangled web of WTC's reconstruction. Here are updated stats regarding the article's length:

File size: 584 kB

Prose size (including all HTML code): 90 kB
References (including all HTML code): 19 kB
Wiki text: 155 kB
Prose size (text only): 52 kB (8504 words) "readable prose size"

References (text only): 1386 B

A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 17:58, 15 July 2011 (UTC)

Here are the current article length stats:

File size: 584 kB

File size: 589 kB
Prose size (including all HTML code): 86 kB
References (including all HTML code): 19 kB
Wiki text: 152 kB
Prose size (text only): 50 kB (8108 words) "readable prose size"

References (text only): 1381 B

A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 02:25, 4 August 2011 (UTC)

GA Review

GA toolbox
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This review is transcluded from Talk:September 11 attacks/GA2. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 15:12, 4 July 2011 (UTC)

I will start to review this article in the next few days.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 15:12, 4 July 2011 (UTC)

  • While waiting for my comments, please address the following:
    • The dablink checker to the right shows 3 issues
    • The external link checker to the right shows one dead link
    • There is at least one entirely uncited paragraph. Every paragraph in this article needs at least one inline citation.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 15:20, 4 July 2011 (UTC)
      • The link to 911 (disambiguation) is OK. It's part of the text that says, ""9/11" redirects here. For the date, see September 11 or November 9. For other uses, see 911 (disambiguation).".
      • As for the Algiers bombings disambiguation link, I cannot find it. The text "Algiers" does not appear anywhere in the article. Does anyone know what's going on here?
      • The dead link is a false positive. The link works fine every time I've tried it.[21] I'm not sure why the tool thinks that it's a dead link.
        • At first I was unable to open the link successfully in my firefox browser. Then I opened it in Chrome, MSIE, Safari and Opera. After doing so, I was then able to open it in Firefox as well.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 22:13, 4 July 2011 (UTC)
      • I've added cites to the 2 paragraphs missing cites.[22][23] A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 16:01, 4 July 2011 (UTC)
        • The Algiers bombing link is coming from Template:Campaignbox al-Qaeda attacks which is transcluded in the article. Since both the entries in the dab page were carried out by al-Qaeda I don't think this needs fixing. Hut 8.5 16:37, 4 July 2011 (UTC)
WP:LEAD
  • First thoughts. As I embark on this review, I expect it may be a WP:IAR affair.
  • That being said, at 58159 characters of readable prose the article is on the borderline of what I consider to be maximal length (60KB) so I would expect the LEAD to be bordering on my upper limits as well. Generally, I think about 3000 characters is the max and we are at 3102. I don't want to bean count here, so I will just proceed with that out there. In the end, I am going to have to get familiar with the prose of the main text and see if the LEAD provides a representative summary. Let's look back at its overall length towards the end of the review.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 22:28, 4 July 2011 (UTC)
  • I have one issue with the opening sentence. Is it possible to make it clear that the final alternative means "nine eleven" and not "nine slash eleven".--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 22:28, 4 July 2011 (UTC)
    • Regarding article length, as we go through the GA review, I will look for opportunities to trim the length.
    • I can add something saying, "pronounced /naɪnɪˈlɛvɪn/". What do you think? A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 01:49, 5 July 2011 (UTC)
      • What about just adding nine eleven? Would that be inappropriate? I don't know if it is ever written like that. If not would (spoken as nine eleven) be better than the fancy pronunciation?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 02:16, 5 July 2011 (UTC)
        • I'm not sure that I follow. Are you suggesting that we replace "9/11" with "nine eleven"? It's true that's not how it's pronounced, but it is how it is spelled (which is why I suggested adding a pronunciation explanation to the article). I'm not sure what the best way is to solve this issue. A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 03:44, 5 July 2011 (UTC)
          • Here is what we have now:
            • The September 11 attacks (often referred to, in combination with the attacks' side effects on that day, as September 11, September 11th or 9/11)
          • Here are some alternatives:
            • The September 11 attacks (often referred to, in combination with the attacks' side effects on that day, as September 11, September 11th or 9/11 — "pronounced /naɪnɪˈlɛvɪn/")
            • The September 11 attacks (often referred to, in combination with the attacks' side effects on that day, as September 11, September 11th, 9/11 or nine eleven)
            • The September 11 attacks (often referred to, in combination with the attacks' side effects on that day, as September 11, September 11th or 9/11, which is spoken as nine eleven)
            • The September 11 attacks (often referred to, in combination with the attacks' side effects on that day, as September 11, September 11th or 9/11, which is pronounced nine eleven)
            • The September 11 attacks (often referred to, in combination with the attacks' side effects on that day, as September 11, September 11th or 9/11 — pronounced nine eleven)
          • Note that in any of the above nine eleven might be better represented as one word nine-eleven. My problem is that when I look at the current alternatives I think an unfamiliar reader might see nine slash eleven or 9/11ths. Such a reader is not likely to really understand the IPAc symbols.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 05:06, 5 July 2011 (UTC)
  • I am confused on the responder death toll. Numbers in that paragraph don't add up.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 18:35, 5 July 2011 (UTC)
Attacks
  • This is quite an abrupt organization. There needs to be some sort of preamble explaining the motivations of the attackers. People don't just wake up one day and decide to do something like this. There should be a section with a few paragraphs describing the motivation behind the attacks.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 18:31, 5 July 2011 (UTC)
  • The preamble should also explain that the terrorists chose cross country flights because the planes would be more heavily fueled. This is common knowledge but might not be understood by a 10-year or 12-year old who doesn't remember.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 18:40, 5 July 2011 (UTC)
  • I find the attacks section a bit jumbled and confusing. It would be better organized with subsections by attack, IMO. E.g., in paragraph three phrases like the following should be attributed to specific flights/attacks "Reports indicated that during two of the flights" and "Some passengers were able to make phone calls using the cabin airphone service and mobile phones"--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 17:44, 5 July 2011 (UTC)
    • After taking a closer look at this section, I realized that Flight 93 was being discussed in two different places. I moved it around a bit so the Flight 93 material is together in one spot.[27] Hopefully, this reduces the jumbling. A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 22:34, 6 July 2011 (UTC)
  • I don't see what the first 85 seconds of the security footage video offers. I would chop off the first minute.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 17:53, 5 July 2011 (UTC)
Casualties
  • Why don't these numbers match those in the LEAD?
  • The following sentence seems to be a bit garbled: "At least 1,366 people died who were at or above the floors of impact in the North Tower and at least 618 in the South Tower, where evacuation had begun before the second impact." The 618 part seems ungrammatical.
  • I would reorganize this section. Some of the death demographics should be moved earlier. The emergency worker and buildign employees paragraphs could be 2nd and 3rd.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 19:18, 5 July 2011 (UTC)
Damage

Fail As noted at Wikipedia:Good article reassessment/September 11 attacks/1 this article lacks complete coverage of the topic. It is a very lengthy article and I have already found major holes. The article needs to be rewritten while staying under 60 KB of prose.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 19:43, 5 July 2011 (UTC)

Have to disagree. WP:GA? does not require "complete" coverage, it calls for "broad coverage", "broad" being defined as: "(a) it addresses the main aspects of the topic; and (b) it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail" - which this article clearly satisfies. The length is justified for an article on a subject as complex and significant as the 911 attacks. I also think closing the GAR in just one day, without giving editors time to respond to the items needing attention, is premature and uncalled for. Shirtwaist ☎ 02:30, 6 July 2011 (UTC)
Regarding article length, it is currently at 162 KB (165,918 / 1024). I will continue to look for opportunities to remove extraneous details and streamline the verbiage. Removing 2 KB shouldn't be too hard. A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 14:07, 6 July 2011 (UTC)
TTT only mentioned "readable prose size" as being a possible problem, and that is at about 57kB - which is not in itself a valid criticism of an article on a subject of this magnitude and complexity. The FA article on the Oklahoma City bombing, for example, is 52kB of readable prose, and the 911 attacks have far more depth and complexity than that event. Hell, the FA Changeling (film) article is 56kB readable prose, and it's a movie for godsake! Considering that TTT said "this article lacks complete coverage of the topic", removing things seems the wrong way to go. I still can't figure out what he meant by "major holes" and "The article needs to be rewritten". Shirtwaist ☎ 05:22, 7 July 2011 (UTC)
Okay...Tony has helped progress this article as an outside reviewer and I think A Quest for Knoweldge is doing an excellent job so far...getting this article even to GA is a very difficult thing to do, so that in itself will be a huge milestone. I also feel the scope needs to be streamlined some more to jive beter with the title...but again, that is so difficult here where it a huge story to relate and figuring out what sectiosn can be eliminated or trimmed is no easy task. I want to thank Tony the Tiger for taking on this task...and everyone else for already making massive improvements here, especially A Quest for KNowledge.--MONGO 01:24, 10 July 2011 (UTC)

Position of "Motives" subsect in "Attackers and their background"

Shouldn't the section detailing al Qaeda's motives be placed after "Al Qaeda" and before "Planning"? The usual sequence of events in a terrorist attack begins with the motives, followed by planning, then implementation. Chronological order for this seems to look better to me. If nobody disagrees, I'll go ahead and change it. Just wanted to check first. Shirtwaist ☎ 23:23, 27 July 2011 (UTC)

Good point. Maybe bin Laden, then al Qaida, then motives? Since motives starts by talking about bin Laden. Tom Harrison Talk 23:42, 27 July 2011 (UTC)
This is something I thought about a few weeks ago, but haven't had a chance to look into. I noticed that some other similar articles articles, Attack on Pearl Harbor for example, begin with a background section: Attack on Pearl Harbor#Background to conflict. Taking a very quick look at some roughly similar WP:FA articles, Gunpowder Plot begins with a background section. 1962 South Vietnamese Independence Palace bombing doesn't have a background section, but does begin with a Planning section. Night of the Long Knives also begins with a background section, although it's not named this.

So, yes, I think this should be changed. I've been keeping a mental list of things we need to do after the GA review but before the FA review, and this was one of the items. A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 13:03, 28 July 2011 (UTC)
How about this order: - Hijackers/Al Qaeda/bin Laden/Motives/Planning/KSM and others - ? The "Al Qaeda" section goes back to their beginnings during the Russian invasion of Afghanistan, which should probably go first in the chronology. Shirtwaist ☎ 22:58, 28 July 2011 (UTC)
Part of the reason why I didn't tackle this is that I think this might require more work than simply re-arranging the sections. I think that some of the wording might have to be changed for a few reasons. First, the section about Al-Qaeda was never meant to be an introduction to the main body of the article. We might have to reword it a bit to sound more like an introduction. Second, I'm not too sure the wording will flow as well if re-arranged. Third, I think the sections on Al Qaida and its members are among the weakest in the article. I was considering a rewrite prior to FA review. But perhaps I'm being too critical? Anyway, I took at stab it in my user space. I pretty much re-arranged the sections in the order you suggested except I kept the Al Qaeda members together. While re-arranging the sections, I noticed that we covered the FBI investigation in two different places and there was some overlapping information. I combined the FBI stuff into a single section. We can trim it down later. This is just a basic proof of concept. Let me know what you think. This is in my user space so feel free to be WP:BOLD: User:A Quest For Knowledge/September 11 attacks. A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 00:20, 29 July 2011 (UTC)
No no - I didn't mean Al Qaeda should be put at the top of the article body! God no! I think the current layout starting with the attacks is great. It's the arrangement of the section titled "Attackers and their background" that I was talking about changing the order in. The order of that section in your user page, though, looks good to me. The "Attacks" section is right where it belongs, IMO, at the top of the article body.
BTW, would a peer review be in order, or should we just go for the FAR? Shirtwaist ☎ 04:30, 29 July 2011 (UTC)
So, like this?[28]

I don't know. I'm new to all this. What does everyone else think? Should we submit to WP:PR or WP:FAR? Is there something we should do first?
Tom, Hut: You guys have been on Wikipedia longer than I have. What do you think? A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 17:52, 29 July 2011 (UTC)
I can't really give you any useful advice as the sum total of my experience of the FA/GA processes is saving an FA from demotion three years ago (by referencing it almost from scratch). I do think we should keep the current structure of discussing the attacks first and doing the motives/background/perpetrators later, since this fits best with the typical reader's experience of the subject and since articles on high-profile contemporary atrocities and attacks usually do it this way (see for instance Assassination of John F. Kennedy, Virginia Tech massacre, 7 July 2005 London bombings). Even the 9/11 commission report starts with a chapter outlining the events of September 11 before going on to discuss the origins and motivation. Hut 8.5 21:03, 29 July 2011 (UTC)
I was thinking something like this? Shirtwaist ☎ 22:57, 29 July 2011 (UTC)
At the top level, it makes more sense to me to start with the attacks, then the attackers. Within the section about the attackers, this order looks fine to me, though other orders are possible; KSM might be put after 'motives'; 'other al-Qaeda' might be merged into the subsection about KSM, making that 'KSM and other al-Qaeda'.
As far as the PR and FA process goes, I don't really know anything about it. Mongo's worked on several FAs; maybe he can suggest what to take up next. Tom Harrison Talk 23:13, 29 July 2011 (UTC)

I've gone ahead and moved the sections around.[29] We still need to consolidate the section on the FBI investigation. (We were covering it in two different places and there are some bits that are redundant.) I'll try to work on that today on lunch. If not, tomorrow night at the latest (if no one beats me to it). A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 13:08, 2 August 2011 (UTC)

As I mentioned earlier, we inadvertently had two different sections which covered the FBI investigation. Yesterday I combined the two sections in one, but it contained redundant information (such as explaining how Atta's luggage was found twice). I consolidated the two into one coherent whole (hopefully!)[30] A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 01:32, 4 August 2011 (UTC)

List of victims

Would it be appropriate to add an EL to a site that lists all the victims names? I found this one which seems to be complete. Shirtwaist ☎ 11:10, 30 July 2011 (UTC)

Well, on the one hand, I don't see any problem with a list of victims, but on the other hand I'm not sure how much encyclopedic value the reader can gain by seeing all the names. We currently now have 15 external links (including the multimedia sub section), which IMHO, is a lot, so I would be careful about adding new external links. That said, I'm not sure it's worth worrying about. But we might be asked during the Peer review and/or Featured Article review to trim down the number of external links. A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 13:23, 4 August 2011 (UTC)

Featured article

This article is close to Featured Article level....I've been involved in 9 FA efforts and am slowly working on number 10. Take the article to Peer review before submitting it to Featured article candidates...but before you do either, ensure the article meets the Featured article criteria...I think it is pretty close as it sits. The peer review is just to help make the article better, but the FAC is more intense. Two articles that I pushed to FA both failed at their first FAC, the hardest was one I dealt with more than 5 years ago. So I suggest all comments be taken to heart, keep the ego out of it...and if it fails the first go around, work on the issues mentioned and renominate it. I expect if this was taken to PR and then FAC it would be an FA in 6 weeks. I will gladly suspend my other work on this site to assist in this endeavour.--MONGO 03:50, 31 July 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, MONGO. We can use any help you can provide. I just submitted the article for Peer review.[31][32]] A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 01:50, 4 August 2011 (UTC)
That's a good step...you'll possibly get decent commentary due to the high visibility of the topic matter...I'm keeping in reserve on this for the most part since I think you and the others that got it to GA level are doing just fine. This will be an FA before the end of this year, even if you have to resubmit it twice to FAC after making the suggested adjustments. My forte is research more than prose, and prose is what they will be looking at.--MONGO 02:01, 4 August 2011 (UTC)

Reflist in a scroll box?

It looks like the reference list at the bottom of the article has been changed to be an a scroll box.[33] I'm not sure what everyone else thinks, but personally, I don't like it. I'm used to seeing references in a complete list without having to scroll, and it just looks funny. Anyway, I checked the 4 featured articles which have appeared on the main page and not one has the references in a scroll box: Egyptian temple, Parasaurolophus, Definition of planet and Horses in World War I. So, I am reverting the change. A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 12:54, 2 August 2011 (UTC)

I agree. Having the reference list in a scroll box doesn't look good, and it makes use of the list less convenient. I would go a step further and reduce the number of columns to two or less. Wildbear (talk) 17:50, 2 August 2011 (UTC)
I concur with these assessments.--MONGO 02:02, 4 August 2011 (UTC)

Problem in Lead

Just have a bit of an issue with this part of the lead:

"The hijackers intentionally crashed two of the airliners into the Twin Towers of the World Trade Center in New York City, killing everyone on board and thousands of those working in the buildings. Both towers collapsed within two hours, destroying nearby buildings and damaging others."

The first sentence is not exactly true. There can be no certainty whether the actual impact with the buildings killed thousands, or whether the thousands that died at the World Trade Center jumped or were killed in the later collapse. This lead makes it sound as if we know for a fact thousands were killed during impact, which isn't true it could've only been hundreds. We do know however that everyone was dead by the time the buildings collapsed for sure. I think therefore the lead should be rephrased to:


"The hijackers intentionally crashed two of the airliners into the Twin Towers of the World Trade Center in New York City, killing everyone on board and unknown amounts of those working in the buildings. Both towers collapsed within two hours, killing more people within the vicinity of the complex, destroying nearby buildings and damaging others." --Kuzwa (talk) 05:07, 4 August 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure I see a problem. The lede doesn't say that thousands were killed on actual impact (or words to that effect), only that thousands were killed in the attacks, which is true. A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 13:18, 4 August 2011 (UTC)
I don't see a problem either. The lead is a summary, specifics about how many died, and when, where and how they died are gone into in the article body. Shirtwaist ☎ 13:38, 4 August 2011 (UTC)

Article length

Per WP:LENGTH, we should try to keep articles to be no more than 30-50K of readable prose. We are currently at the upper limit with 50K. The article used to be 57K and it took a lot of time and effort to trim it down to 50K. There have been some recent additions to the article so we need to be careful not to add too much so we don't go over 50K. Otherwise, we have to start trimming content again. A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 12:56, 4 August 2011 (UTC)

Article passed GA review, but article still says that it is GA nominee

At the top of the article, it still says that it's a good article nominee. The article has passed the GA review. How do we get rid of this message? A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 13:28, 4 August 2011 (UTC)

Daily Beast and Clarke's new allegations

[34] If Richard Clark is really saying these things, it will probably be reported in more mainstream sources soon. I'm not sure where this would go in the articles we have on this subject. Cla68 (talk) 02:06, 15 August 2011 (UTC)

I thought we established that his comments didn't really have enough weight for inclusion. Especially with such a trimmed down article. Should go in the conspiracy theory page. --Tarage (talk) 04:51, 15 August 2011 (UTC)
Clarke admits he can't prove it...and it appears to be the rumblings of a disgruntled former employee...MONGO 16:39, 15 August 2011 (UTC)
Right now, the articles on the hijackers and on the advance-knowledge debate are probably the best places. Reliable sources do not describe Clarke's statements as conspiracy theories, nor do they describe him as a disgruntled former employee.  Cs32en Talk to me  18:18, 15 August 2011 (UTC)
Right now and henceforth is a more accurate assessment. We can surely anticipate that the conspiracy theorists will ensure the ramblings by a former employee that even he states he can't prove will provide innuendo and illusion to some article somewhere.MONGO 11:42, 16 August 2011 (UTC)
Right now I don't think this belongs anywhere. Clarke seems to be admitting he has no evidence to support these allegations and that therefore they are pure speculation on his part. Clarke made these claims in an interview conducted in October 2009 and hasn't made them anywhere else before or since (assuming he hasn't been misrepresented in this interview). The documentary referred to is produced by two people who previously produced another 9/11 documentary which at least flirts with conspiracy theories. The claims being made plainly constitute a conspiracy theory in that they propose a massive high-level cover-up. Claiming that specific named individuals took part in this cover-up with no evidence whatsoever would also raise BLP issues. If this becomes more widely reported after the documentary is released then it may be appropriate to include it in the articles on conspiracy theories or advance knowledge (there is some overlap between the two) but it certainly doesn't belong in the articles on the hijackers. Hut 8.5 12:00, 16 August 2011 (UTC)

New book goes into possible Iranian and Saudi connections

This Sunday Telegraph article [35] covers a new book called, The Eleventh Day by Anthony Summers and Robbyn Swan. According to the article, the book examines the role that the Iranian and Saudi government may have played in the attack and allegations that, for political reasons, the Saudi role may have been downplayed by the Bush administration. Cla68 (talk) 23:41, 21 August 2011 (UTC)

Good article, thanks for posting the link. Tom Harrison Talk 00:26, 23 August 2011 (UTC)

Fix reference: Would someone skilled pls review & do it?

I looked up a reference (currently numbered 246), NIST WTC 7 Investigation Finds Building Fires Caused Collapse. The link has been moved to: http://www.nist.gov/public_affairs/releases/wtc-082108.cfm I would have edited the main article, but I'm not so confident of my editing skills that I felt up to editing such a major article. Would someone please fix this? (This particular note will be of only temporary value and pls feel free to delete it after it's fixed. Minor edit later.) Oaklandguy (talk) 16:51, 29 August 2011 (UTC) Oaklandguy (talk) 05:37, 30 August 2011 (UTC)

 Done Thanks for reporting it. - ArtifexMayhem (talk) 05:57, 30 August 2011 (UTC)

Target of flight 93

In response to this edit the target of flight 93 isn't anything like that clear cut. United_Airlines_Flight_93#Aftermath goes into some detail discussing the possibilities of what the intended target was and the 9/11 commission report is equivocal ("Jarrah’s objective was to crash his airliner into symbols of the American Republic, the Capitol or the White House" - page 14). In light of this I don't think we should state that the target was definitely the Capitol. Hut 8.5 22:37, 29 August 2011 (UTC)

KSM stated that Atta and Hanjour discussed the difficulties of making a strike on the White House...but I'm going to look that over and see if we can adjust it to show what you mention. I would prefer a short mention of this ambiguity so as to not drown out other details since no primary target was reached by Flight 93.MONGO 11:43, 1 September 2011 (UTC)

Reference formatting

In the reference citations, does anyone object to delinking Fox News, CNN, AP, CBS News, etc.? Tom Harrison Talk 13:45, 31 August 2011 (UTC)

Don't think that's necessary. Several recently promoted FAs have this sort of link in the references and the MoS doesn't seem to say anything on the subject. Hut 8.5 14:16, 31 August 2011 (UTC)
Okay; easier to leave them alone, and they may be useful. Tom Harrison Talk 23:43, 31 August 2011 (UTC)
I think the general consensus at FAC is that each field of the references (like publishers in this case) should be linked first time, every time, or not at all, and if you're using sources that aren't as widely known as Fox/CNN/AP/CBS and would need to be linked, I guess you should link everything at least once. But overlinking isn't generally an issue with references—it's not a common complaint at FAC in my experience, and I personally hold the view that, since an individual footnote is accessible by one click without viewing the whole reference section, it should provide all the information a reader need, including information about the source (for which a link to the Wikipedia article comes in handy). HJ Mitchell | Penny for your thoughts? 21:03, 1 September 2011 (UTC)

See also?

Might be better to remove the See also section and work the links into the article? Tom Harrison Talk 23:48, 31 August 2011 (UTC)

In FA's, that is usually standard since FA's are generally comprehensive. I am working top to bottom on this article trying to standardize it and delinking to eliminate redundancies...even after I finish that by Sunday 9/4/11...it will still need a better writer than I to work the prose. I can deal with MOS issues, especially this weekend, but I'm not a great writer overall.--MONGO 00:37, 1 September 2011 (UTC)
I wrote Iranian Embassy siege, which recently became an FA, and I left a modest "see also" section in it and nobody at FAC complained. Unless there's coverage dealing specifically with the cultural impact, I don't know where you could put links to things like the films, but they're undoubtedly worth linking to from this article. HJ Mitchell | Penny for your thoughts? 20:56, 1 September 2011 (UTC)

Discrepancy in number of victims identified

In this article, the number is 1630, but one more has been identified since then. The World Trade Center article says 1629. I know because I added it. I checked various sources and there is no reason to doubt any of them, but someone is wrong. Sources that say 1629 are [36], [37], [38], [39], [40] and this source I used. Sources that say 1630 but are now outdated because of the additional victim are [41] and this source used in this article.Vchimpanzee · talk · contributions · 21:17, 1 September 2011 (UTC)

Referencing

Current having the The Wikipedia citation bot scan the article...the article has inconsistant citation styles that are all in need of standardization.--MONGO 17:59, 4 September 2011 (UTC)

Bot edits are as seen at this edit, showing bot additions...also, I placed the bot report in my userspace...in case someone knows how to look at this report and see if all is okay....you can check the report here.--MONGO 18:10, 4 September 2011 (UTC)

Shortly I'll go through all the citations and replace "author" with "last" and "first" name fields. Someone speak up if that's a bad idea. Tom Harrison Talk 18:59, 4 September 2011 (UTC)

 Done - I will have gone over all the "long form Google book links" and convert them to short form links using Google book tool. Moxy (talk) 20:11, 4 September 2011 (UTC)
So converting long links like http://books.google.ca/books?id=xMCGStzPzooC&lpg=PP1&dq=September%2011%20attacks&pg=PP1#v=onepage&q&f=true
To links short links like http://books.google.com/books?id=xMCGStzPzooC&pg=PP1
Is there something like that for Google News, to shorten [42]?
Not yet that I am aware of - I have asked for one to be made like New York Times Wikipedia reference generator (but still waiting on that).Moxy (talk) 15:25, 5 September 2011 (UTC)

I've kept "author" in the citation when an institution was listed - National Commission on Terrorist Attacks Upon the United States, National Construction Safety Team - and one case where the article lists no author. That's all for now. Tom Harrison Talk 20:27, 4 September 2011 (UTC)

References 117-119

The references given in footnotes 117, 118, and 119 are not useful as sources for the content of the article. They lack page numbers and rather look like a list for "Further reading".  Cs32en Talk to me  00:33, 5 September 2011 (UTC)

Some have page numbers while others don't...and some won't since they are simply not indexed. I was looking at that as well...let me have a day to examine what to do about them as some might be useful.--MONGO 02:53, 5 September 2011 (UTC)

Lead section

I've attempted some copyedits and revising the part of the lead section that talks about rebuilding. It still seems too long (to me) and goes into too much detail.

I think the "Nearly 3,000 victims..." paragraph can be mostly eliminated, as it goes into very specific details like "8 private emergency medical technicians" and "70 countries". Most essential numbers can go into the paragraph above that, like 184 killed at the Pentagon. This would bring the lead section down to 3 paragraphs, and perhaps give a little space to summarize other parts of the article in the lead.

What's missing in the lead? The lead says "Suspicion quickly fell on al-Qaeda." Who is Al Qaeda? The lead says nothing about who they are/were, nor give a little context or background (in a nutshell).

Another nitpick ... the first paragraph says "The hijackers intentionally crashed two planes into the Twin Towers of the World Trade Center in New York City, killing all on board and thousands of those working in the buildings." This makes it seem that the plane crashes themselves resulted in thousands of deaths. (no idea how many were killed instantly? but maybe hundreds, not thousands?) Not sure how to fix.

Cheers --Aude (talk) 05:31, 5 September 2011 (UTC)

thank you Aude....if someone doesn't beat me to it, I'll address these issues this evening.MONGO 11:38, 5 September 2011 (UTC)
I think we could trim the content on the memorials as well, it's hardly one of the most important aspects of the topic. Hut 8.5 14:31, 5 September 2011 (UTC)

9/11 memorial link

I've added a link to the National September 11th Memorial and Museum's list of victims, which is current and maintained. Not sure if there is anything better than this to link to? Cheers. --Aude (talk) 20:35, 5 September 2011 (UTC)

Just searched and found no better sourcing overall. Thank you.--MONGO 01:42, 6 September 2011 (UTC)

Remove all the refs from the lede

If someone doesn't do this by Tuesday evening, I will unless there are objections.--MONGO 02:49, 6 September 2011 (UTC)

Some of the material on memorials and rebuilding isn't duplicated in the article content, this ought to be moved. Hut 8.5 14:56, 6 September 2011 (UTC)
Oh...well, then yes that wl need adjusting...I was going to reuse the refs after removing them from the lede section.MONGO 15:15, 6 September 2011 (UTC)

Are the hijackers included in the death toll?

There is a box that says no. Are we certain of this? Someone edited the World Trade Center article to say the hijackers had not been included, and I reverted the edit, plus another edit that fixed a misspelling in the previous edit, until we know for sure.Vchimpanzee · talk · contributions · 16:52, 5 September 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure what box you mean. I see "Approximately 3,000 (including 19 hijackers)", and elsewhere more specific figures. Casualties of the September 11 attacks would be the main article, and it has a section By the numbers that breaks it down a bit more. This has come up in the past, but the figures seem to be correct now. "Approximately 3,000" works whether it includes the hijackers or not, so in that context mentioning the hijackers is probably a question of what is most stable and what reads best. Tom Harrison Talk 17:13, 5 September 2011 (UTC)
Under the heading "casualties", the box I copied in the lower right corner.Vchimpanzee · talk · contributions · 17:37, 5 September 2011 (UTC)
Deaths (excluding hijackers)
New York City World Trade Center 2,606[1][2]
American 11 87[3]
United 175 60[4]
Arlington Pentagon 125[5]
American 77 59[6]
Shanksville United 93 40[7]
Total 2,977
Regarding what is "most stable", the number of victims doesn't change that often. Is my solution to showing that victims are not hijackers satisfactory?Vchimpanzee · talk · contributions · 18:20, 5 September 2011 (UTC)
I don't see anything wrong with that, but there may be subtle points about the casualty figures. If so, someone will speak up. Thanks for running it down. By "stable" I mean generally accepted over time by readers/casual contributors. Tom Harrison Talk 18:46, 5 September 2011 (UTC)

I just tried myself re-running the numbers, with current sources, not counting the hijackers: [43] [44]. This matches the table.

  • 2753 at the WTC
    • 1470 - north tower
    • 87 - flight 11
    • 695 - south tower
    • 441 - first responders
    • 60 - flight 175
  • 184 at the Pentagon
    • 125 in the building
    • 59 - flight 77
  • 40 - flight 93
  • 2977 - total victims
  • + 19 hijackers
  • 2996 total deaths

I'm not sure if there are any discrepancies anywhere, but if so, would be good to find and correct them. Cheers. --Aude (talk) 20:21, 5 September 2011 (UTC)

Casualties of the September 11 attacks has 90 for Flight 11, unless that has been fixed.Vchimpanzee · talk · contributions · 20:39, 5 September 2011 (UTC)
Hmm... the casualties articles uses http://inmemoriamonline.net as a source, but I don't think it should be considered reliable, to Wikipedia standards. Looking for better sources. --Aude (talk) 21:12, 5 September 2011 (UTC)
Well, the source in the section of the Flight 11 article that says there were 81 passengers and 11 crew is a dead link. How are we going to fix this?Vchimpanzee · talk · contributions · 15:31, 6 September 2011 (UTC)
Thanks to Aude for fixing the Casualties article. Regarding the dead link, I happened to notice a book at the library I just returned from which had a title similar to Report from Commission on 9-11 Attacks. It has a chapter called "We have some planes". I never saw what Aude found, but I think we're okay just on the victim numbers.Vchimpanzee · talk · contributions · 16:48, 6 September 2011 (UTC)

mdy dates?

There's a hidden category, Use mdy dates|date=August 2010. Should this be kept? Tom Harrison Talk 12:10, 6 September 2011 (UTC)

As far as I can tell the category is just there to let bots know that the article uses American date formatting (and possibly to help them enforce this). I don't see any reason to remove it. Hut 8.5 12:16, 6 September 2011 (UTC)
There was also a hidden template showing (can't remember the exact wording) that 2 different cite formats were being used...which was bot generated and designed to improve consistancy in formating...but it was gone last I looked, so either the problem was solved or the bot was disabled for this article.MONGO 15:22, 6 September 2011 (UTC)
I took that out, hopefully following the documentation for Citation Bot; haven't quite figured it out yet. Tom Harrison Talk 17:00, 6 September 2011 (UTC)

General thought on 9/11 pages

Someone added an In popular culture section to one of the articles. I hate these like poison, but it might be better to leave them alone in the near term, unless they're completely outrageous. The people adding items mostly mean well. I'm inclined to wait till some time after the anniversary to explain and clean them out. Of course, reasonable people may differ on how best to handle it. Tom Harrison Talk 17:00, 6 September 2011 (UTC)

Ref format

I like the idea of formatting the refs and good job thus far - However if refs are to be converted we should be using Template:Sfn "type" style - so that they actually link up and make it easier for our readers - Current format being implemented will make it harder for our readers (more complicated to locate the refs). The example always used is The Beatles were refs and sources linkup, thus making there navigation simpler for our readers to access the information. Just thinking out-loud dont think is all that important, but if we are doing it, lets do it properly Moxy (talk) 03:40, 7 September 2011 (UTC)

The way The Beatles links references and sources does make it easier. Tom Harrison Talk 13:12, 7 September 2011 (UTC)

Airport security

This section is outdated and the "main article" referred to is as well. Plenty of reliable sources including this recent Guardian article could be used to update the article. --John (talk) 15:50, 7 September 2011 (UTC)

On the top of the article page there is a tab which says "edit"...click that...write in the info...add reliable references....below the editing window there is a line to type in a summary of your edit...if you want to see what your edit will look like hit "preview"...or simply hit the "save" button. Wikipedia, the website anyone can edit...MONGO 16:37, 7 September 2011 (UTC)

Good Article reassessment

In case editors didn't notice it, this article is undergoing a reassessment...the link to this is at the very top of this talkpage.MONGO 05:17, 8 September 2011 (UTC)

MTA made a video about its reflection to 9/11 yesterday

Is it all right for me to upload a video about the Metropolitan Transportation Authority's video about 9/11? Rockies77 (talk) 07:54, 8 September 2011 (UTC)

Don't think so - the video is likely copyrighted which means we can't use it outside very special circumstances. Hut 8.5 12:03, 8 September 2011 (UTC)

FAC review improvments

If someone could deal with the mdash and nbsp problems identified here and [45] that would be helpful. Tom Harrison Talk 13:45, 29 August 2011 (UTC)

Will do...in about 8 hours.MONGO 16:10, 29 August 2011 (UTC)
On one hand, it seems like bin Laden should be written with a non-breaking space: bin Laden. On the other hand, this will make the article harder to edit. Thoughts? Tom Harrison Talk 20:01, 5 September 2011 (UTC)

Overlinking is mentioned, so I'll try to pare those down some more. Maybe we can avoid adding any links that aren't absolutely essential.

One reviewer mentions "image problems (stacking/sandwiching, caption issues, etc)." I'm not able easily to deal with those; maybe someone good with images could take a look. Tom Harrison Talk 00:26, 30 August 2011 (UTC)

Tom can you point me to the reviewer's comments or link a diff? (I'm sure it's hiding in plain sight of my searches) - ArtifexMayhem (talk) 05:27, 30 August 2011 (UTC)
Comments at Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/September 11 attacks/archive1; Thanks, Tom Harrison Talk 11:49, 30 August 2011 (UTC)
Thanks. I made one image move but overall we do have a stack-fest. Comments on the images...favorites? favorite-hated? what can go? what must stay? just change it and we'll see? - ArtifexMayhem (talk) 13:28, 30 August 2011 (UTC)
The collage at the top is very good. If there are any, we might include throughout the article more information-rich images like the "Map showing the attacks on the World Trade Center" that is in the section Planning of the attacks. The sections Aftermath, Long-term effects, and Memorials could maybe use some more images. Tom Harrison Talk 13:51, 30 August 2011 (UTC)

I've changed the second paragraph of the Casualties section because the old version had several problems: it isn't correct to say that all the casualties in the towers were killed in the impact or were trapped (and this is a misquotation of the 9/11 commission report anyway), the figures weren't sourced and don't appear in the 9/11 commission report, and the fact that one stairwell in the South Tower remained open can't possibly account for the much reduced casualty figures because only 18 survivors used it. Hut 8.5 15:23, 30 August 2011 (UTC)

That makes more sense. Tom Harrison Talk 18:00, 30 August 2011 (UTC)

For the general prose issues noted in the FAC comments, it would be helpful for a good writer who hasn't read the article before, to read it and make or suggest specific changes. Tom Harrison Talk 18:21, 30 August 2011 (UTC)

The FAC reviewer closed the nomination after 2(!) days....its hard to get decent advice when the target page for such advice is closed and archived...I have my own suggestions and can surely get all the refs and MOS issues resolved in a week but you are correct Tom in that we truly need a totally neutral poet to make the writing better.--MONGO 02:43, 31 August 2011 (UTC)
There are serious problems with writing quality and emphasis that should really prevent this in its current state from being even considered as a "good" article. Shame the anniversary is coming up and it is in such a poor state. --John (talk) 06:20, 1 September 2011 (UTC)
  • For the general prose issues noted in the FAC comments, it would be helpful for a good writer who hasn't read the article before, to read it and make or suggest specific changes. Tom Harrison Talk 12:42, 1 September 2011 (UTC)
    • I'd love to help but the problems of this article go beyond copyediting. It would need a complete rewrite. Have you considered asking around? --John (talk) 17:34, 1 September 2011 (UTC)
If you want to, write something up in your userspace and people can take a look at it. There will need to be consensus for any big changes. Tom Harrison Talk 17:41, 1 September 2011 (UTC)
I am really tempted by this suggestion, but I fear that the "consensus" of the current cohort working on this article is what has left it in its present unsatisfactory state. I think that for it to be improved would really need a wider, more diverse group of editors working on it, something that no one person can really achieve. Maybe the problem is that even ten years after the event, this subject is just too difficult to write a decent article on? I will continue to think about it but it is really a management problem more than it is a copyediting one. Would that it were otherwise. --John (talk) 20:21, 1 September 2011 (UTC)
Well, you can join that cohort by working on the article. Alternatively, there are lots of linked articles you can work on. Tom Harrison Talk 20:49, 1 September 2011 (UTC)
I might take the task on, but certainly not until the 11th has passed because it would get lost in the frenzy of edits the anniversary will inevitably attract. John, could you elaborate a little? I haven't read the article (and don't intend to yet, because if I do copy-edit or re-write it, I want to come to it completely fresh), but it'd be nice to hear where folks think the major problems will be. HJ Mitchell | Penny for your thoughts? 21:08, 1 September 2011 (UTC)
  • A grown-up organization, the BBC, thinks torture, kidnapping and conspiracy theories are notable enough to report on in relation to the September 11 attacks. This article, apparently because of a group of editors generating local consensus by force of numbers, does not. This is both a symptom and a cause of the article's poor quality; honestly, at the moment it isn't even really a GA. Fixing these issues would be a start, if anybody was serious about trying to get it into better shape. At the moment, I am inclined to agree with this harsh but honest critique from someone who has written more FAs than all of us put together and should therefore know what they are talking about. --John (talk) 18:28, 4 September 2011 (UTC)
  • [46] does not show that the BBC consider conspiracy theories to be a significant part of 9/11 because the article is entirely focused on conspiracy theories. We also have an article focused entirely on 9/11 conspiracy theories, so in that respect we are the same as the BBC. The issue here is whether the conspiracy theories are significant enough to warrant a mention in a general discussion of 9/11. When mainstream news outlets report on the anniversary of 9/11 it is extremely unlikely that they will mention conspiracy theories unless the report is specifically about conspiracy theories. We should do the same. Hut 8.5 18:54, 4 September 2011 (UTC)
  • Yes, I've seen that argument, and I understand it represents the current local consensus; I think as I said that this is one of the things holding the article back at present. --John (talk) 19:12, 4 September 2011 (UTC)
  • John, I think the article still is TOO broad...the topic is September 11 attacks...I have always believed that aside from the events of the day and the major issues that arose from those events, that this article should stick to those fine points to maintain FOCUS. This article may still be a long way from being an FA, but it is a far cry better than it was 90 days ago and its not because "partisans" made it worse.--MONGO 21:40, 4 September 2011 (UTC)
  • At nearly 8,000 word in length, I would have thought there'd be quite a bit that could be split off into daughter articles, leaving a shorter article here that summarises the events and refers readers elsewhere for more information on a particular topic. HJ Mitchell | Penny for your thoughts? 22:27, 4 September 2011 (UTC)
  • I'm with HJM here; the article is too long but not broad enough. This was a good start at trying to redress the problem, MONGO, I appreciate that. Once the article is made more neutral in its content, the next job would be to slim down some of the extraneous stuff and try to rewrite it for flow and tone. An article on 9/11 which does not mention the controversies is never going to be a good article let alone a featured one, however complete the local consensus remains among folks still prepared to edit here in spite of the hostile atmosphere. As a minimum it should mention the conspiracy theories; that BBC source could easily provide a model. It should also cover the torture and kidnappings (or, if you must, "enhanced interrogation" and "extraordinary rendition") that took place in the following years using 9/11 as a pretext. Far more people died in the two major wars the US launched in response to the attacks than on the day. The article in its current state does not adequately tell this story, in my opinion. --John (talk) 01:20, 5 September 2011 (UTC)
  • Thanks...I don't have a problem with both sides of the coin so long as we stick to the FOCUS and SCOPE issues. Long discussions starting last March and leading through two Rfc's on the subject indicated that there was strong consensus to remove the CT's. I can't also see why dwelving into the alleged kidnappings and torture has any place in this article, either in passing or in depth. You make it sound like the Bushies had goons sitting back clapping that 9/11 happened so they could get a chance to "torture" people...ridiculous. While somewhere those "stories" do need to be told to satisfy whatever purpose they may, I can't see how that place is here. As far as deaths..in the War on Terror it has been more than the events of 9/11...as was the war with Japan after Pearl Harbor, maybe we should have tried to "reason" with the unreasonable. Furthermore, if I had a dollar for every victim of left wing backed oppression, imprisonment, torture and death in places like China, the former Soviet Union, Cuba...etc., I would be filthy rich. If we start going into the alleged controversies, then this article will once again become garbage...a state it was in forever thanks in no small part due to editors who are more interested in pseudoscience and innuendo than providing a fact based accord that maintains FOCUS and SCOPE.--MONGO 02:48, 5 September 2011 (UTC)
  • I know we differ on this issue, but this isn't about you and me, it's about changing the article to conform with FA expectations. If that is truly your wish, it is my strong feeling (and I was asked to give my opinion) that if it's good enough for the BBC it should be good enough for us. Not including the various controversies around this historical event here on its article is holding the article back. Here is one of many examples of missed opportunities to balance this article. The lack of intervention by the world's most powerful Air Force while its largest city was being trashed by suicide bombers is highly notable and has been written on by many reliable sources. Why is there no mention of this? Why were these good-faith efforts to add well-referenced text brushed aside? --John (talk) 03:09, 5 September 2011 (UTC)
  • "The lack of intervention by the world's most powerful Air Force while its largest city was being trashed by suicide bombers is highly notable and has been written on by many reliable sources"...are you kidding me...what was the worlds largest airforce supposed to do? I'm not sure you have any understanding of the timeline of events, (nor do apparently the alleged writers of these "stories") the fact that initiating an airforce response without knowing exactly how many planes were hjacked, the ramifications of shooting down passenger jets, even if they were heading to the Capital, etc. You want us to venture into conspiracy thories, right? No thanks! I too am wondering if this article can become an FA...if we're going to have to go out on a limb over every piece of wacky misinformation to appease the CTers, it probably won't. It isn't that the alleged "controversies" aren't covered enough to keep this from becoming an FA..it is because it still needs massive MOS improvements and a general cleanup of the flow and structure to improve readability...and possibly sending some sections to daughter articles to improve FOCUS.--MONGO 03:26, 5 September 2011 (UTC)
  • Ok buddy, I think we are through here. I would be amazed if we agreed. There is more than MOS and readability to fix to make this an FA, but you must continue to do as you think best. The clues are there for you if you (or anybody else) ever seriously wanted to address its issues. Reading that talk from 2009 sickened me; that's been the atmosphere that you and your friends have created here and that's what's brought the article to its current state. Really good articles on controversial subjects are written by people listening to and understanding those they disagree with. Until this happens, this article will be as stuck as it is now. See you in another two years, maybe. --John (talk) 03:36, 5 September 2011 (UTC)
  • You've offered nothing for us except to say we aren't discussing the controversies... Hello! 2 Rfc's indicated CT's should be avoided here...just as they are by all those that provide a reasonable rendition of the events...do you get it yet? Frankly, I have seen zilch editing of a truly constructive nature from you on this article...you know it needs MOS improvements, yet you offer only the whinny complaint that we don't cover the alleged controversies! Thanks bunches, buddy! Hugs and kisses!--MONGO 03:52, 5 September 2011 (UTC)
  • I'm not following this article (and have not read it in its entirety) but popped in to see what the discussion looked like. If you are dismissing concerns of comprehensiveness because you instead think the focus needs to be the MOS, then the article will have no hope of passing FAC. Two-year-old RfCs are not going to be enough to hold back those types of issues at an FAC. An FAC will fail if there are serious questions of comprehensiveness, sourcing quality, or POV. Those are the three things that must be addressed first. Prose is the next priority, and I've yet to see an FAC be closed as not promoted solely because of MOS issues. Karanacs (talk) 04:22, 6 September 2011 (UTC) I see that there was a discussion earlier this year on inclusion of the conspiracy theories. I can tell you that there is no way this article will pass the comprehensiveness part of the FA criteria without some discussion of the conspiracy theories. Doesn't have to be a big one, but if they aren't addressed in this article at all, there will be objections. Karanacs (talk) 04:27, 6 September 2011 (UTC)

<outdent>Rather than individual opinion (which in my case is for very minimal inclusion of conspiracy theories), I offer two references, both from the Guardian (which has never had much patience for post-9/11 U.S. policy) which both dismiss and succinctly sum up the state of CT thought these days and its reputation in mainstream/reliable sources: [47] and [48]. 9/11 conspiracy theories have always been a sideshow and have become even more marginalized in the past few years. The appropriate weight for this particular sub-topic, based on mainstream sources, both in this discussion and in the article, is minimal. I suspect more such articles will appear in other sources in the next week. Based on Wikipedia's editing model, the best time to extensively improve the article is after the anniversary, once sources appear that discuss the "ten years after" perspective. That may be disappointing, but we're writing a tertiary source. Extensive wrangling about this single aspect here distracts from the fact that the non-conspiratorial part of the article is strikingly hard to write about well, and that improvement of the article needs to be a long-term project. Acroterion (talk) 12:05, 6 September 2011 (UTC)

A similar, but much more detailed discussion in Slate: [49], part of an ongoing series, which postulates that 9/11 CTs peaked a couple of years ago, mirroring experience here on WP. Acroterion (talk) 15:37, 6 September 2011 (UTC)
Nice sources. Here is evidence that the US government considered these theories notable as recently as 2009. The existence of conspiracy theories was one of four points I gave as examples of the article's "POV-by-omission". It would be interesting to see what folks thought of the other three. --John (talk) 18:50, 6 September 2011 (UTC)
I read the two Guardian articles and the Slate article. All three articles are badly out-of-date in their content; seemingly out of touch with what is going on today. They would be usable for a history on early (and largely abandoned) 9/11 conspiracy theories, but nothing more than that. For a better representation of the issues in discussion today, I would suggest an article by the Santa Barbara Independent: [50]. Wildbear (talk) 03:11, 7 September 2011 (UTC)
If you're trying to claim that [51] gives some up-to-date conspiracy theories that supersede the older ones then you're wrong. Most of the claims that are (largely uncritically) regurgitated in it can be found either in Debunking 9/11 Debunking by David Ray Griffin (2007) or Why Indeed Did the WTC Buildings Completely Collapse? by Steven Jones (2006). Both these figures are cited in the Guardian article. The Santa Barbara itself dates from 2009 and the only claims in it that date from after 2007 are the section on iron microspheres (Jones' paper on the subject was published in January 2008) and the claims about super thermite (which date from 2009). The conspiracy theorists haven't come up with a new idea in years. Hut 8.5 11:49, 7 September 2011 (UTC)
Some might be inclined to debate whether or not there have been any new ideas, but it doesn't really matter. The allegations of evidence for thermitic material have not been scientifically refuted, and this is where much of the "CT" focus remains today. An up-to-date article on 9/11 criticism should reflect this (and downplay things like faked phone calls or a missile at the Pentagon), if it is to present a truly neutral point of view on the topic. In absence of such balanced coverage in the mainstream media, the topic should probably be left out of the Wikipedia article altogether. Wildbear (talk) 19:42, 7 September 2011 (UTC)
The allegations of evidence for thermitic material have not been scientifically refuted - well they certainly haven't been scientifically demonstrated. When this paper was published almost nobody in the real world (outside the community of 9/11 conspiracy theorists and associated critics) noticed. A few scientists did comment on the paper for Norwegian state radio [52] but their reaction wasn't favourable. In light of this we can't possibly include it here, even if we decided to cover the conspiracy theories in this article. Hut 8.5 20:17, 7 September 2011 (UTC)
My point in posting the links is that in the mainstream press there's nothing new, and for the purposes of the primary article on 9/11 the Truther agenda is waning or disregarded. That is what is relevant to this article and FAC review. This article is not about conspiracy theories, it's only a question of whether they should be mentioned at all, and if so, how much. If there's any new thinking among CTs, it's not made an impression outside of a narrow circle of devotees, and apart from the "thermite" business of a few years ago, nobody's had any new ideas: Based on the Guardian's' coverage (which is more serious and extensive than most), nobody in the mainstream press finds CTs more than a curiosity. Salon (again, not a source that is particularly complimentary of U.S.policy) discards CTs as a distraction [53] Acroterion (talk) 12:06, 7 September 2011 (UTC)

Karen...2 rfc's regarding the conspiracy theories indicated overwhelmingly that this issue should be omitted, just as it is by the engineering community. NIST only discussed it n passing to appease the CTers...and when I say in passing, it was a couple paragraphs out of hundreds of pages of text. I definitely agree that the prose is a high priority and needs work yet...when I said MOS issues, I meant that this was still needing major cleanup. Your input is welcome further.MONGO 11:51, 6 September 2011 (UTC)

Karanacs, thanks for looking in. The scope and content of articles, and the weighting of topics, is determined by the reliable sources on the subject. I don't speak for anyone but myself, but if it's "include the conspiracism or no FAC for you" then I'll do without the FAC, thanks. You're entirely welcome to contribute, but be careful - I hear the prose here is so heinouisly offensive it'll make your eyes bleed. Read one section, then give yourself a few hours to recover. Of course, the FAC review also mentioned "quite a few uncited paragraphs," so maybe the writing isn't really so bad. Tom Harrison Talk 12:00, 6 September 2011 (UTC)

It isn't just about FAC of course; NPOV isn't optional on this project. --John (talk) 18:50, 6 September 2011 (UTC)

It should be noted as well that this article used to have a couple of paragraphs regarding cebrations all over the Moslem world, where after the carnage was known, millions of celebrators marched through various regions happy ther event had happened...all this was well documented by excellent sourcing...yet because of howls from some editors, that has been omitted...in an effort to be fair and balanced, I don't see those folks in any way interested in seeing these paragraphs restored, but they are still ranting about the lack of things even less associated with the immediate event of 9/11.MONGO 17:21, 6 September 2011 (UTC)

I realized my comments may come across as "the FAC delegate says you must have this or else bwahahaha". That's not what I meant. More that I see the types of things that reviewers oppose over, and this is a big red flag for me. If y'all don't mind, I'm going to go through and reformat the references to pull out the book sources. I think that will help future reviewers to see the caliber of sourcing you are using and to omit some questions later of "why didn't you include this source". I'll put up a big underconstruction tag right now and get to it - and you can feel very free to revert me if you don't like the format. Karanacs (talk) 02:27, 7 September 2011 (UTC)

The reliable sources have to be our guide to this, not courting votes from FAC reviewers. I understand you're making an observation and not a threat. If the result is the conspiracy theories have to be presented to get to FA, I'm not interested. Others may be. Thanks for the work on the references; it's a good improvement. Tom Harrison Talk 13:06, 7 September 2011 (UTC)

I didn't read the article closely last night, but I scanned the source list. I'm a little concerned that this is sourced so much to newspapers and to primary sources (reports of the various commissions). The Summers and Swan book seems to be used heavily (good!), but a lot of other books are only cited once or twice. This was an issue with the article on the Columbine Massacre too. It became a featured article not long after the event, but it was delisted years later because there were now a lot of books available about the topic and it was better to use those sources rather than newspaper reports. Given the large number of books that seem to have been written on this topic, I think you may run into trouble in any review process if the article is still weighted so heavily towards newspapers and primary sources. Karanacs (talk) 21:01, 7 September 2011 (UTC)

Very valid points and appreciated. Using Google books to search for sourcing has been beneficial to me in some recent work. But I will admit that as I checked all almost 290 sources, many from news websites, I was surprised how many were still live and not even from archives. I know the article is still using two formats of citations...can't remember what the cite bot was showing...though the referencing here is pretty exhaustive, I'm prepared to eliminate some, alter others, expand and standardize all the refs if needed.--MONGO 22:39, 7 September 2011 (UTC)
The issue isn't just the availability of links (I suspect a lot of those articles will be up for a long time, and I'm glad for that), but the types of info that you get from them. A book, in theory, has a lot more analysis, perhaps more detail, perhaps a different weighting of facts. The ref formatting does need a lot more work (difficult with such a large number of sources!) but in general I do that last, once I make sure I've got the right mix of sources used in the article. Right now I think the mix is weighted too heavily on the newspaper side. Good luck! Karanacs (talk) 21:01, 9 September 2011 (UTC)
I also think that including more books may resolve some of the questions about comprehensiveness. Many of those seem to be about the legacy - the conspiracy theories, what 9/11 was used as an excuse for, etc. The increased analysis from books can help to pinpoint if there's any viable content that's been missed in the article. Newspapers don't really cut it for that type of analysis. Karanacs (talk) 21:05, 9 September 2011 (UTC)

Searching for 9/11 does not link the date September 11 or November 9

""9/11" redirects here. For the date, see September 11 or November 9. For other uses, see 911 (disambiguation)."

The dates I bolded are the dates which are not in the link format, instead they are in the regular typing text format, with no links clickable to go to the actual dates September 11 or November 9.

Note: This occurs when searching for 9/11. It may occur when searching other terms or numbers, but I only tested searching 9/11 which is how I found out about this issue/problem.Andise1 (talk) 01:27, 10 September 2011 (UTC)Andise1

Fixed. --John (talk) 01:32, 10 September 2011 (UTC)

Why no 9\11 conspiracy section?

There is not a single mention of this.Why cant you add this in see also?— Preceding unsigned comment added by Manchurian candidate (talk • contribs) 01:08, September 2, 2011

Consensus is against the idea. Hut 8.5 11:28, 2 September 2011 (UTC)
This is so ridiculous and violates NPOV imo. The US government emits a theory and various researchers emit opposing researches. Wikipedia is not a government entity and should not validate one view or the other but neutrally present both. And EVEN if the latter are ONLY mentioned as "conspiracy theories", they should at least be mentioned. There are dozens of polls where one third to half of respondents said they believe the US government was involved in 9/11. This is a belief held by a significant part of our planet and just hushing up that fact is (a) pretty weird and (b) not compatible with an encyclopedia's vocation. --boarders paradise (talk) 17:41, 12 September 2011 (UTC)

—Just for the record, please add me to the consensus! Thank you.HistoryBuff14 (talk) 17:45, 10 September 2011 (UTC)

Current outstanding NPOV issues, with reliable sources

To assist focused discussion towards improving the article, I thought I would sum up the outstanding issues as I see them.

  1. Existence of conspiracy theories about the attacks. BBC 1, Guardian 1, Guardian 2, Slate, US Government, Santa Barbara Independent, Norwegian State Radio, Salon
  2. Torture and kidnapping carried out by US government using 9/11 as a pretext. BBC 2, BBC 3 Guardian Cheney
  3. Entry of the US into two unwinnable wars as a response to the attacks, leading to far more deaths than the original attacks Guardian 3 CNN 1 Vice: Dick Cheney and the hijacking of the American presidency
  4. Airport security; billions wasted Guardian 4
  5. Non-intervention of the USAF: Andrew Brookes, Destination Disaster (2002), ISBN 0711028621, p84. "Marwan al-Shehhi on the flightdeck [of United 175] had learned enough in his training to turn off the transponder that enabled ground controllers to pinpoint the airliner's altitude and position. From now on, watchers on the ground would have to rely on raw radar returns. These were used to scramble two F-15 interceptors from Otis Air Force Base at 08.39hrs, but no one on the ground understood what was happening or what should be done. Even if they had put in full afterburners, the F-15 pilots could have done little because the first airliner was just six minutes' flying time from Manhattan." and David Gero, Aviation Disasters, 4th Edition (2006), ISBN 0750931469, p328. "Although US military forces had been alerted about the hijackings, and two Air Force F-16 jet fighters were airborne in the area, no official authorisation to shoot down Flight 93 was given until the aircraft had crashed. (The question as to whether the 757 would have reached its target had those aboard not taken action on their own remained disturbingly unanswered in the report issued by a federal commission established to investigate the terrorist attack.)", CNN 2, (Many more at this archive)

There are probably others, but those five are the main ones I am aware of. --John (talk) 03:44, 8 September 2011 (UTC)

Discussion

Consensus is against the majority of these edits. --Tarage (talk) 04:11, 8 September 2011 (UTC)
Leaving aside the conspiracy theories for a moment, the article is already quite long at 48kb of readable prose (WP:SIZE recommends that articles over 50kb may need to be divided) and several people have suggested here and elsewhere that content be moved into sub-articles. In light of this adding more details isn't necessarily a good idea, and the fact that something is relevant or sourced doesn't mean it should be added. :[54] is an opinion piece and can't be used as a source, and in any case linking 9/11 to the Iraq War is contentious to say the least (no link has ever been established between Iraq and 9/11, and Rationale for the Iraq War doesn't even mention the attacks). I suppose we could add a bit detailing what happened to Afghanistan after the 2001 invasion. Airport security is barely mentioned at three sentences in "Government policies toward terrorism" and I think more details on the subject ought to go into Airport security repercussions due to the September 11 attacks rather than here. I do think that we could use some more content on allegations of torture of terrorist suspects. Hut 8.5 13:14, 8 September 2011 (UTC)
Don't worry about article length for now. The first task is to get the article looking better. There is plenty of dead wood we can remove once we accomplish that. --John (talk) 17:54, 8 September 2011 (UTC)
These things are way peripheral to that article. There are sub-articles where just about any of these points can be presented, but they don't belong in the top-level article. I'm surprised Torture and kidnapping carried out by US government using 9/11 as a pretext isn't already an article, but maybe it could go in a subsection of United States and state terrorism. Tom Harrison Talk 20:51, 8 September 2011 (UTC)
The non-appearance of the world's biggest air defense force was "peripheral" during an air attack? Pull the other one, it's got bells on. Take a look at this article to gain a clue about how a balanced article is written. Observe especially the last three sentences in the Anticipating war section. --John (talk) 21:29, 8 September 2011 (UTC)
Sorry to seem so clueless. What text exactly are you suggesting be added to the article? Tom Harrison Talk 01:44, 9 September 2011 (UTC)
John, the Japanese navy was flying Japanese planes...you're asking us to make an analogy where there isn't one...hello....U.S. commercial passenger airliners with U.S. citizens (and others) were aboard the aircraft and they were hijacked...it was a different issue.--MONGO 22:12, 8 September 2011 (UTC)
  • Comment Sorry, but I don't see any of these as real issues except perhaps the last. Regarding #1, it's against WP:NPOV to give undue weight to crank theories. Regarding 2-4, none of these items are directly related to the 9/11 terrorist attacks. They're all related on some tangental aspect and are better covered in other articles on Wikipedia. This is an article, not a book and we have to follow WP:LENGTH. Regarding 5, the response of the US Air Force is included in the article. I'm not sure what exactly the complaint is with this one. Is there some critical detail that the article needs, but is missing? I would agree that we should probably add something about the hijackers turning off the transponders, but I'm not sure how that's a POV issue. A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 04:34, 10 September 2011 (UTC)
    • 5 has been partly dealt with by now. There's a fair bit of dissent at the GAR from the contention that UNDUE demands not mentioning item 1 at all, and I think most reasonable sources and news media would mention something of items 2-4 in connection with the aftermath of the attacks. See the reliable sources presented. --John (talk) 04:42, 10 September 2011 (UTC)
      • How much do you want to bet than few-to-none of these sources are actually about the 9/11 terrorist attacks? I took a look at the first 3 sources you listed in item 2,[55][56][57] and none of them are about the 9/11 terrorist attacks. Instead, all 3 are about some tangental topic. I didn't check any of the other sources; I suspect more of the same. A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 04:59, 10 September 2011 (UTC)
        • I'm looking at "It is nearly 10 years since the 9/11 attacks, a horrific day that changed the world as well as America. In a country with a reverence for its constitution, debates about practical questions often end up as arguments about first principles. The attacks on America prompted fierce battles about how civilised societies should treat their enemies, and whether torture can ever be right." when I click the first link. Can you see the "9/11" and "the attacks on America" in the first and third sentences? It is your opinion that this is a "tangental topic" but clearly the BBC disagrees. No offense, but I go with the BBC over your opinion. And no, I don't want to bet; you'd only lose your money. --John (talk) 05:05, 10 September 2011 (UTC)
          • @John: I'm afraid that you seem to be confusing an article's topic with an article that references something. If you can find some articles about the 9/11 terrorst attacks that also include mention of these issues, that would carry some weight with me. A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 05:21, 10 September 2011 (UTC)
            • That's an interesting and highly unusual local interpretation of FRINGE. I don't think the BBC count as a "tiny minority"; as the world's largest news site, I'd say that if they are able to discuss the conspiracy theories, we should be able to also. Of course, I understand you had your straw poll here, I've seen it. But certainly, if you wanted the article to improve, you'd definitely want to revisit that consensus. --John (talk) 07:01, 10 September 2011 (UTC)
              • I'm afraid that you lost me. Where did I say the BBC is a tiny minority? Is your comment addressed to me? A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 12:39, 10 September 2011 (UTC)
                • I see, so you haven't read WP:UNDUE even though you are trying to use it in an argument. Go read it, then come back. --John (talk) 16:23, 10 September 2011 (UTC)
                  • I've attempted to discuss this with you in good faith. However, if you are unable to address the issues raised here and are simply going to rely on cheapshot accusations that I haven't even read WP:UNDUE, then there is no point in continuing this discussion. Have a good day. A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 17:15, 10 September 2011 (UTC)

Suggested text

To cover Point 5 I would suggest something along the lines of the following, and feel free to suggest improvements:

Air defense

The United States Air Force launched F-15 and F-16 fighters, but the airliners had their transponders switched off and were impossible to identify in the time available.[58][Brookes] The fighters had authorization to shoot down the hijacked planes,[59] but it is not clear whether they would have intercepted Flight 93 in time, had the surviving passengers and crew not caused the hijackers to crash the aircraft short of its target.[Gero] The 9/11 Commission reported that NORAD and the FAA were "unprepared" for the tactics used in the attacks, and that the protocols they used were "unsuited in every respect for what was about to happen."(p18) They also criticized NORAD for giving incorrect information in its testimony to the Commission about its response to the attacks.(p34) [60]

Haven't run down the references, but I don't have a problem with that. We could put it after the paragraph Some passengers were able and cut down the paras All aircraft within the continental U.S. were grounded and In a September 2002 interview, Khalid Sheikh Mohammed and Ramzi bin al-Shibh, to make room. Not so sure about a sub-section on air defense, if that's what you're suggesting. Tom Harrison Talk 11:24, 9 September 2011 (UTC)
The proposed section omits the confusions faced by NORAD, the Air Force and Stratcom. If included it needs to show that in the confusion limited numbers of aircraft were activated to respond, fails to show that (I forget the time exactly) that fighters were in NYC airspace after the attacks and, from the info I have read, most sources make it clear that none of the hijacked planes could have been successfully intercepted before they reached their targets with the sole exception of possibly Flight 93, and even in that case, the inability to intercept 93 may have saved lives on the ground. I can see it now...the speculations that would pop up...if 93 was shot down and it came to light that this happened as passengers were trying to retake control of the aircraft.MONGO 11:54, 9 September 2011 (UTC)
This Washington Post interview [61] (published today, but most of the information was previously available) covers the confusion and absence of preparedness well: there were no armed aircraft near Washington, so the orders were to ram Flight 93 to bring it down. Acroterion (talk) 12:13, 9 September 2011 (UTC)
This info John is proposing is better off in a daughter article. Undue, coatrack...too much room for speculations. I'll come up with a section discussing this and put it in the article...under what heading should it be placed?MONGO 14:46, 9 September 2011 (UTC)
If it takes too much space to present a complete account, it will have to go in a daughter article. And if stand-down appears, all bets are off. I think we can say something, but it should go in the Attacks section, and not have it's own sub-section. It might even be possible to integrate it into one of the existing paragraphs. Tom Harrison Talk 15:26, 9 September 2011 (UTC)
Four short sentences, well-referenced to good sources, doesn't seem undue. No, it doesn't have to have its own section. --John (talk) 18:58, 9 September 2011 (UTC)
I have written in the air defense response but it varies from your rendition...but now this issue is in the article as you requested...the diff is here.--MONGO 01:11, 10 September 2011 (UTC)
That looks fine; I've made a few tweaks that should be checked. I may have been unwise to support this. We'll have to keep a close eye on it for slanted presentation and stuff getting tacked on. Tom Harrison Talk 13:55, 10 September 2011 (UTC)
Not bad. TO be clear it is not just me highlighting these NPOV problems but multiple respected GA and FA regulars including Malleus and HJMitchell. I think whatever wording we finish up with should depend as far as possible on book sources rather than Internet news sources, per Karanacs, hence my going to the trouble of looking out book sources. It's a good start though. --John (talk) 01:28, 10 September 2011 (UTC)
Your version appeared to be primarily to assign guilt, so I altered it to simply state the case...you started out this line of argument, as did Malleus elsewhere, as to why the worlds largest air force "failed" to act..they never failed to act...the issue was time, and to some degree poor communications, and in retrospect, perhaps it is better the fighters didn't shoot down the airliners...book sources are fine, but I am finding that news sources (perhaps to this event being so big) are still valid and with the rate of editing this article gets, we can adjust to other refs if one goes dead. The nice thing also about a web based source is that one can see the exact wording much easier than they may be able to in a book, and we don't have to take the editor's word on it that the info is indeed on the page specified. I have written a fair share of FA's you know (there would be more if I didn't work a real job 50 plus hours a week)...so if you're thinking only Karanacs or Malleus are experts in FA's, that's a pretty small universe.--MONGO 01:46, 10 September 2011 (UTC)
Book sources are inherently harder to check than web sources, true. On the other hand, I am sure you must have a public library near you where you can check these books by highly respected authors say what I claim they say, if you seriously doubt it. Book sources are often preferred to web ones for good and featured articles as they are usually inherently more encyclopedic; there are usually far fewer books than web articles about a given subject, but they tend to be more thoroughly peer-reviewed than the average article on the web. For historical subjects like this one, they therefore tend to be more valued, as Karanacs has said. --John (talk) 03:52, 10 September 2011 (UTC)
I agree with what you say overall...I shall look for some book sourcing so I don't rely too much on news and the 9/11 Commission. But isn't just me that needs to check the books, its the readers....so the web sourcing just makes some things faster to cross reference is all. This article isn't going to be an FA near term anyway...it isn't stable enough.--MONGO 05:56, 10 September 2011 (UTC)

Conspiracy theories

The conspiracy theories have now been covered in the mainstream press, here is an article that covers it. This article was actually written by Sebastian Smith of Agence France-Press/Jiji Press and I saw a version of it in yesterday's Japan Times, p. 7. The article links the belief in conspiracy theories to the sociology of the impact of the attacks themselves. At the least, the FAQ #3 on this page needs to be changed, because it says that no reliable, mainstream sources have covered the conspiracy theories, which is no longer true. Cla68 (talk) 11:54, 11 September 2011 (UTC)

There have long been reliable sources about the conspiracy theories. They're (hopefully) what our articles about the conspiracy theories are based on. Their inclusion or not on this page is a question of due weight. I think what the faq means is that no reliable sources suggest the conspiracy theories are true. Tom Harrison Talk 12:55, 11 September 2011 (UTC)
Agree. FAQ#3 doesn't say that "no reliable, mainstream sources have covered the conspiracy theories." ScottyBerg (talk) 13:43, 11 September 2011 (UTC)
The problem with FAQ#3 is that whereas it does carefully distinguish between reliable sources "reporting on", "supporting/providing evidence for" or "advocating" conspiracy theories (which are each different), it fails to make the same distinctions for the content of this Wikipedia article. That is, it uses the question "Should the article provide evidence supporting conspiracy theories?" to justify a position that "there should not be mention of conspiracy theories in this article". That is woolly reasoning at best. Geometry guy 16:41, 11 September 2011 (UTC)

The immediate reason they aren't in the article it that after extensive discussion and two RfCs, the consensus was that they didn't belong here. The FAQ asks and answers a different (if related) question. Tom Harrison Talk 18:10, 11 September 2011 (UTC)

The article I linked to gives more reason why the conspiracy theories should be included here in the Aftermath section. The article explains that the belief in the conspiracy theories, even though some of them defy rational logic, is part of the sociological and psychological reaction to the attacks and the US governments responses to them. Reading some of the comments above and below, it appears that a few regulars in this article view the proposal to include mention of conspiracy theories as some kind of battle between them and believers in the theories. I hope that isn't the case. We should be presenting a complete article on the topic, and the conspiracy theories are part of this topic. Cla68 (talk) 22:44, 11 September 2011 (UTC)

There appear to be several newcomers to this debate, the conspiracy theories were muscled out removed agreed to be WP:UNDUE by several editors, most notably AQFK and MONGO. You need not bother wasting your typing, they WILL be removed the moment you take your eyes off the article. As I have clearly stated, I am in no way a supporter of 9/11 theories, but I believe they are important social shockwaves of the seismic event that was 9/11. However, this opinion has been vehemently denied and the article now stands as you see it now. Soxwon (talk) 22:17, 12 September 2011 (UTC)

Writing quality

Can anyone else see any problems of concision and MoS compliance with this sentence: "On September 20, 2001, he addressed the nation and a joint session of the United States Congress regarding the events of September 11th, the subsequent nine days of rescue and recovery efforts, and stated his intended response to the attacks." In case it is just me. Thanks, --John (talk) 03:50, 8 September 2011 (UTC)

I don't see any problems with it. Perhaps if you would point out your specific complaint. --Tarage (talk) 00:58, 9 September 2011 (UTC)
Tom already had a decent hack at it. If I was grading this original wording in an English essay I would write a comment like: "Simpler is better" with a red underline under the comma after 11th. My suggested version (which was reverted) said "On September 20, 2001, he addressed the nation and a joint session of the United States Congress, and stated his intended response to the attacks." which to me carries almost the same meaning for 25/40 of the wordage. As I stated in my edit summary, I also find "regarding" a little stodgy. Tom's latest version is better than the original, as it removes the ungrammatical clumsiness of the sentence as it stood, but unfortunately at the cost of adding another word, and. I can live with the wording we have now in this section, and it is well-referenced to boot, though I still wish we could remove or replace the "regarding". But eventually I think (and I do speak from experience) that the whole article will need this kind of pruning for concision (to make it easier to read) and copyediting for grammar; several editors have remarked on this so it should not be controversial. Albeit there are other problems which we are discussing elsewhere, but I think this has to come. Let's be realistic and admit that this will be a matter of weeks, but let's also commit to making this article the best it can be, in all the areas where it has to improve. As a friendly suggestion, let's also commit to not reverting out any but the most obvious vandalism; this is how reverting is supposed to be used. Instead, try and find a compromise version, and hats off to Tom for showing the way on this occasion. --John (talk) 01:31, 9 September 2011 (UTC)
I'm willing to listen to your suggestions and read proposed wording, but you lost some credibility when it emerged after much discussion that "prose quality" was code for "it doesn't say what I want it to." Tom Harrison Talk 01:47, 9 September 2011 (UTC)
How do you mean? --John (talk) 02:27, 9 September 2011 (UTC)
We've dealt with quite a number of POV pushers in the past and, while this may not be what Tom is referring to, it feels to me like you are lining up to be one of them. The thread of delisting is a tad immature. --Tarage (talk) 03:03, 10 September 2011 (UTC)
POV pushers? What an utterly unencyclopedic and indeed retarded thing to say. I am trying to help clean up the toilet you and your friends have made of this article. If you can't show proper gratitude, go away and find some better sources or work on some of the grammar errors the article is riddled with, rather than come here and insult me. It is comments like yours that come across as more than "a tad immature". --John (talk) 03:21, 10 September 2011 (UTC)
It is possible that Tarage, Tom and myself along with others DISAGREE with you! But I have never met Tarage, Tom or any of the others that routinely disagree with your constant POV pushing of fringe junk or your efforts to turn this article into a "toilet". If you want to stay an administrator, I suggest you adopt the behavior Tom (an admin) routinely shows in the face of your chronic and insufferable POV pushing.--MONGO 03:28, 10 September 2011 (UTC)
I am sorry if I hurt anybody's feelings by responding to rudeness with rudeness. But, as you are fond of saying, "hello". When multiple neutral editors without previous involvement have highlighted the POV problem you and your cohort have created, and have commented on the toxic atmosphere you have created here on the talk page, it might be time to consider who the "POV-pushers" have been on this article. Me, I am just trying to help improve this article. I am not the only one to think that currently it isn't very good. Again, this page is to discuss improvements to the article; it might be best to direct any further allegations of POV-pushing or threats about loss of adminship to the proper places. This wouldn't be it, as you very well know. --John (talk) 03:47, 10 September 2011 (UTC)
I find it far more likely that the less extreme editors either aren't aware of your POV pushing here or didn't have any problems with with the previous GA assessment. I don't know why you believe what you believe, but in trying to breach consensus here you are going against everything Wikipedia stands for. I would be ashamed of myself if I were you, but we both know you are blind to that concept. --Tarage (talk) 19:52, 10 September 2011 (UTC)

Move discussion

There is a discussion at Talk:September 11#Requested move about whether to make "September 11" redirect to this article on the terrorist attacks. Input is welcome. NYyankees51 (talk) 17:38, 15 September 2011 (UTC)

Chile

The Dablink at the top says: For the 11 September attacks in Chile see 1973 Chilean coup d'état. Is there truly any currency among speakers of English to refer to that coup d'etat as September 11 attacks. From what I have read of that article, it does not seem that even Chileans would refer to what happened that day simply as "attacks".--JimWae (talk) 20:17, 15 September 2011 (UTC)

I removed this a while ago after someone had added it, it seems to have sneaked back in during the frenzy of edits in the last few days. I've removed it again. I can't see any evidence that the coup is referred to as "September 11 attacks" or "9/11" except to make a comparison with the events of 2001, and even if it was then the link belongs at 911 (disambiguation) rather than the hatnote. Hut 8.5 20:59, 15 September 2011 (UTC)

The attacks were attacks UPON the US

For years the 1st sentence read the attacks were "upon the US". Today it says they were "against targets in New York City and the Washington, D.C. area". The attacks were coordinated attacks upon the entire country -- it is not the case that just 2 cities were the target. The attack on Pearl Harbor was not an attack upon a single city. 9/11 was an act of war against a nation, not some single idiot attacking two nearby locations (as in Stockholm), nor just 2 people in 2 planes. The Attack on Fort Sumter was not merely one of any number of attacks upon a fort, it had far more significance than that. Why has this change been made? --JimWae (talk) 20:42, 10 September 2011 (UTC)

It was probably inadvertantly done...please restore as you see fit.--MONGO 21:20, 10 September 2011 (UTC)
Hardly a day (or actually much less), a two hour assault from unknown enemy can be called a war. It is a laughable. In a war, you know the enemy and exchange the strikes. However, war UPON US is what we want it to be. This gives us all the right to respond. --Javalenok (talk) 12:53, 18 September 2011 (UTC)
If the attacks were "upon the US" then they can not be terrorist attacks but an act of war. You can't have your cake and eat it too. Wayne (talk) 17:15, 18 September 2011 (UTC)
I had tidied up the lead, which was horrible. This was not "inadvartantly" done. It has now been restored to its previous horrible state. So it goes. --John (talk) 17:34, 18 September 2011 (UTC)
JimWae is pushing the POV here of the Neoconservatism in the United States movement. The lead should be changed back so it states the attacks were "against targets in New York City and the Washington, D.C. area", which is the only factual and NPOV way of putting it. 184.19.131.61 (talk) 23:58, 7 November 2011 (UTC)

Hate Crimes Section/CNN article

I have changed the phrase "Southeast Asian" to South Asian in the first line of this section. The CNN article is incorrect in its use of the phrase "Southeast Asia" (ie Vietnam, Cambodia etc.). It should be South Asia (India, Pakistan, Bangladesh etc.) as evidenced by the rest of the paragraph (Sikhs for example are from South Asia, not Southeast Asia). I have added more references.-Classicfilms (talk) 02:59, 19 September 2011 (UTC)

Flight 77

Hi everyone! In File:Pentagon Security Camera 1.ogv where is the plane that is stated in the label? Thanks. Alakasam (talk) 21:38, 18 September 2011 (UTC)

My browser (Chrome) shows the .ovg file as a video, with the plane first visible at 1:26. It would be better if the wait was 2-3seconds. Overjive (talk) 22:26, 18 September 2011 (UTC)
On second thought, maybe the long lead-in addresses some conspiracy theory. The caption tells the duration before the plane strikes, which seems adequate. Overjive (talk) 22:41, 18 September 2011 (UTC)
The two videos released differ in the time from start to impact and camera distance from impact. This one is closer and has impact at 1:26, the other more distant camera shows impact at :25. It could be that the uploader didn't or couldn't edit the video down from the full version of this video posted by the listed source. It would be a simple matter for me to create an edited down version of the video that has, say, 5 seconds before impact and a somewhat longer amount of time after impact (not more than 20 seconds I should think), and then submit that file to Commons using the current source on the file page. Would this be appropriate, or even allowed? Shirtwaist ☎ 00:31, 19 September 2011 (UTC)

It is strange http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/508/pentagonf77.jpg/ that we can see something that looks like the nose of the plain but in the next frame we just have fire and no debris ejected. For that I insist: where is the plain stated in the label of the .ogv? Thanks again. Alakasam (talk) 22:55, 18 September 2011 (UTC)

Shirtwaist I think that will be better but I wonder if the label "Security camera footage of Flight 77 hitting the Pentagon" is ok because we couldn't see any airplain. :) Alakasam (talk) 00:55, 19 September 2011 (UTC)
Editing the video to reduce the delay would be an improvement IMO, and the original will always be available via the link in the references. I'm not a WikiPro, but I'd say it's allowed. I'm comfortable with the existing caption because it represents the generally accepted description of events, and we can see the nose. Overjive (talk) 01:56, 19 September 2011 (UTC)

Of course we have too many references that describes the scene as an airplane crashing to The Pentagon. About the nose: there is nothing in the video that let us think that's an airplane. Why do you say that's an airplane? because the NIST? :) Alakasam (talk) 02:43, 19 September 2011 (UTC)

Well, the FBI thoroughly investigated the event (PENTTBOM), and the description is supported by references 3 and 9 of the article. Overjive (talk) 04:32, 19 September 2011 (UTC)
Alakasam, we're not going to have this discussion. There are enough reliable sources to state what we state here, so please do not try to push your views about it. I'm only going to ask once. --Tarage (talk) 05:27, 19 September 2011 (UTC)
That's good. --John (talk) 14:51, 19 September 2011 (UTC)
Glad to know I can count on you to be the peanut gallery. --Tarage (talk) 03:03, 20 September 2011 (UTC)

Tarage it's ok and I didn't changed the article so why threaten me? Alakasam (talk) 16:19, 19 September 2011 (UTC)

Because this talk page has been the target for many conspiracy pushing vandals. It's far easier to take a firm stand now than coddle people who have no desire to improve the project. I am not saying you are one of these people, but I want to make it clear that they are not welcome here. Understand? --Tarage (talk) 03:03, 20 September 2011 (UTC)

They're not welcome at any Wikimedia project of course. I have a question: about the reliable sources related to 9/11: is there any list or something like that? for example created during a discussion? Alakasam (talk) 03:20, 20 September 2011 (UTC)

There's no comprehensive list of every source which is considered reliable, no. Such a thing would be virtually impossible to compile. The guideline for what constitutes a reliable source is here. Hut 8.5 09:57, 20 September 2011 (UTC)

Well it is not the same "complete list" than "a list" :) Alakasam (talk) 14:51, 20 September 2011 (UTC)

See also section

The above section about the inclusion of a link in 'See also' to 9/11 conspiracy theories drew my attention to the other links in that list. If you look at the guidance given at WP:SEE ALSO, you will see that ideally articles linked in a 'see also' section should at some point be folded into the main text (to a greater or lesser extent). The links are usually placeholders until that takes place: "A reasonable number of relevant links that would be in the body of a hypothetical perfect article are suitable to add to the "See also" appendix of a less developed one." I suggest that survivor registry be removed (or linked from somewhere relevant in the article), and United 93 (film) and World Trade Center (film) could be easily integrated into this article or a daughter article (they are already mentioned in List of cultural references of the September 11 attacks). The other articles (such as Families of September 11 and Legal issues related to the September 11 attacks) could easily be folded into the article at some point as well, or removed as being accessible at second-remove through an article already linked. List of terrorist incidents, 2001 is in such a poor state I'd be tempted to remove the link altogether. The only genuine 'see also' is Post-9/11, though that too could be linked from somewhere in the main body of the article. Putting to one side the contentious nature of the 9/11 conspiracy theories link, I think some people are misunderstanding what a 'see also' section is for. It is not a dumping ground for contentious links where it is difficult to reach agreement on wording to be used for those links in an article. But that is what I fear it is being used for here. Anyway, as I said, the issue of the contentious link shouldn't be rehashed here. What I'm looking for is views on the other links in that section. Should they stay or go or be folded into the main article? Carcharoth (talk) 23:06, 20 September 2011 (UTC)

Most of the editing here lately has been no more controversial than any other article. I'd say fold in those you think will improve the article, and remove the ones that you think should be removed. If you're concerned, take it a bit at a time and pause for feedback.
I've heard that there shouldn't be see-also sections, but I've also heard articles get featured that have them. It seems like we should not have one unless it's needed, but shouldn't twist ourselves into knots if a few links remain in see-also. We ought to write the best article we can and let the gold stars take care of themselves. Tom Harrison Talk 01:51, 21 September 2011 (UTC)
I just wanted to point out that not all See Also sections have to be folded into the article or removed. Sure, WP:SEE ALSO says that the articles should be linked, but it's just that, should. There's plenty of people, myself included, who feel that there are a number of subjects related to article topics that would be undue to add a sentence in the article to link to, but are still of relation and importance to the subject. Just not enough importance to be specifically mentioned in the article. That's why there's the See Also section, to link to other articles that have no reason to be linked in the article proper, but are of relevant interest to readers to look at. SilverserenC 02:31, 21 September 2011 (UTC)

Removal of conspiracy theories link

Why is the conspiracy theories article not allowed to be linked here? Surely it's acceptable to place it in the 'See also' section. It's not as if we're saying that the theories are correct, but they are relevant to the subject at hand. Richard BB 20:03, 11 September 2011 (UTC)

I agree. Providing a see also link does not even say they are reasonable, just that there is more on the topic. If the CTs are not acknowledged, they cannot be debunked--JimWae (talk) 20:11, 11 September 2011 (UTC)
There was an RfC here:[62], and I think a second one I can't find right now. They can't be debunked in any case, because they're not falsifiable. Tom Harrison Talk 20:21, 11 September 2011 (UTC)
The official (arab conspiracy) theory falsifiability is not anyhow better. --Javalenok (talk) 14:02, 18 September 2011 (UTC)
It's proven and is official. It is better. Toa Nidhiki05 16:31, 18 September 2011 (UTC)
Both pretexts to attack Saddam, WMD and solders in incubators, were also "proved" (false). Yet, this does not stop us to take everything these important men say us about other "enemy" as "proof". --Javalenok (talk) 17:38, 19 September 2011 (UTC)
If you have proof that Al Qaeda agents did not hijack the planesand that the people on the the planes somehow lied about who hijacked them, please show it. It is fact Al Qaeda agents hijacked the planes and piloted them into the North and South towers of the World Trade Centers. It is fact that they collapsed due to structural failure, aided by massive fires and the pure heat of burning jet fuel. Unless you can prove the official (and accurate) account is wrong, shut the heck up. Toa Nidhiki05 20:25, 19 September 2011 (UTC)
You call everything that wish to be truth "a fact". We only know that officials blame Al Qaeda. Did those hijackers exist or not? We do not know. This is the fact. The buildings collapsed very suspiciously is another fact. We called it "New Pearl Harbor", we used it to overthrow disobedient regimes? This is the third fact. --Javalenok (talk) 16:50, 21 September 2011 (UTC)
Javalenok, you have no proof that Al Qaeda agents didn't hijack the planes. Unless robots or aliens took the plane over disguised as Muslims, the testimony from the people on the planes is enough to prove it.
Once again, you have no proof they didn't hijack them. You have no proof the official, true story is not true. Please take you're Truther garbage elsewhere, or go find some Birthers to hang out with. Toa Nidhiki05 22:25, 21 September 2011 (UTC)
The lack of a proof does not prove the opposite. There are numerous professors and scholars who do not take official statements convincing. Actually the fact that "official account violates the laws of nature" disproves it. --Javalenok (talk) 11:13, 22 September 2011 (UTC)
'Violates the laws of nature'? Ha... About the same number of people that believe Truther garbage believe Obama is a Muslim, was born outside the US, or that NASA fake the moon landings. You're movement has no credibility, and obviously can;t disprove the real story. For that matter, the only thing 'violating the laws of nature' is the idea that somehow you can sneak bombs/thermite/nukes/alien laser beams into two 110-story office buildings without being caught, or that the planes weren't really hijacked. Toa Nidhiki05 12:06, 22 September 2011 (UTC)
Ok, guys this is not a place to debate and the discussion is over. Perhaps we could all find something else to do? Soxwon (talk) 15:36, 22 September 2011 (UTC)
(to Toa Nidhiki 16:31, 18 Sept) No argument that it's official. But where is it proven? If a proof exists, it would be very good to have that proof, or at least a link to it, included in the article. Wildbear (talk) 20:56, 18 September 2011 (UTC)
But even if there's not a full section for it, surely it doesn't hurt just having the link under the 'see also' section? Otherwise there's nothing that would lead anyone from this article to that one, to which it is directly related.
Personally, I don't believe any of the conspiracy theories -- just in case anyone thought I was trying to introduce PoV to this article -- but it just doesn't seem right to me that there's not even a single link from this page to that one. Richard BB 20:43, 11 September 2011 (UTC)
If and how to address conspiracy theories is a contentious issue, unfortunately. Believe it or not, we discussed it for months and there were WP:RFCs about it. In the end, the consensus was against any sort of inclusion. To be honest, we spent so much time discussing it, I'd rather we wait a few months before revisiting it again. A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 21:07, 11 September 2011 (UTC)
Although I think it obvious that there should be link, I agree with AQFK. It's too soon. — Arthur Rubin (talk) 21:54, 11 September 2011 (UTC)
I agree, there should at least be a link to the conspiracy theories article in the See Also in this article. Cla68 (talk) 22:38, 11 September 2011 (UTC)
Anyone considering adding their opinion on whether or not CT's should be mentioned - please first read this extensive discussion and this extensive discussion (which resulted in the current consensus). If you have an argument that wasn't brought up there (doubtful but possible), feel free to add it here. Shirtwaist ☎ 11:23, 12 September 2011 (UTC)

One more for including the link, either in a see also section, or elsewhere. The conspiracy theories are prominent and notable, enough to deserve being linked. This New York Times article says "This consensus on Wikipedia certainly is not what an outsider might expect from a site that prides itself on its free expression views." It's embarrassing. --GRuban (talk) 14:43, 12 September 2011 (UTC)

It is embarrassing and it's what worried me a few days ago. I knew the page would attract a lot of viewers and be scrutinized over the weekend and thought the prose should have been cleaned up and a link to the conspiracy theories added at least to the see also section. Now the damage is done, but maybe a lesson learned. Truthkeeper (talk) 15:19, 12 September 2011 (UTC)
Embarassment is in the eye of the beholder. While I'm generally in favor of minimal mention in the WP article, I see the NYT article as a a fairly straightforward discussion of Wikipedia's editorial processes that debunks the notion that WP is an indiscriminate collection of any and all theories, suppositions and Internet-generated chatter. What the article gets wrong is that Wikipedia isn't a site for free expression, and isn't supposed to be. Acroterion (talk) 15:51, 12 September 2011 (UTC)
The NYTimes is entitled to their opinion...and as almost always, they've demonstrated once again that they don't understand our policies.MONGO 16:07, 12 September 2011 (UTC)

"Thus the so-called gatekeepers of the media world — prominent newspapers, television news programs, newsweeklies — have an unlikely ally in Wikipedia, which bills itself as the encyclopedia anyone can edit." So we are much like the reliable sources we rely on. Seems pretty much okay to me. Tom Harrison Talk 16:15, 12 September 2011 (UTC)

+1 for including a link. It's an embarassement to act like those beliefs don't exist and to try to suppress them. Wikipedia, you can try all you want, but it won't work. --boarders paradise (talk) 17:53, 12 September 2011 (UTC)

It's absurd that so called "conspiracy theories" are banned from this page JUST for being "conspiracy theories", when the "official story" is a conspiracy theory just as well since it asserts that some Muslims in an Afghan cave have allegedly CONSPIRED to plot the 9/11 attacks. This is by definition a conspiracy theory. Just look up Conspiracy_(crime) --boarders paradise (talk) 18:02, 12 September 2011 (UTC)

 Done with a hefty dose of WP:IAR. The conspiracy theories are a part of major disasters. Just look at TWA 800 and Oklahoma City Bombing (a featured article), both of which discuss conspiracy theories in the prose. Therefore, I find it completely acceptable and appropriate to link to the conspiracy theories, and have thus added a link to them in the "see also section". N419BH 18:13, 12 September 2011 (UTC)

And MONGO removed the link again. The justification is apparently "consensus". If opinions continue the way they have gone so far in this section, I'd say that consensus has changed. Let's get more opinions and see if consensus has changed. --GRuban (talk) 18:51, 12 September 2011 (UTC)
  • That NYTimes article is a black eye for Wikipedia. I wasn't aware, after I made this comment a few months ago, that a few of you had gone so far as to insist on removing the link from the "See also" section. I think a few of you have, unfortunately, lost some perspective on this topic. Hopefully, this will be the last time something like this happens with this article. I am embarrased that this happened on the 10th anniversary of the event. Cla68 (talk) 00:05, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
To be fair I think it is embarrassing that someone would insist the link be reinstated on the anniversary. Fair enough wikipedia needs to provide a non-biased presentation of the article content and I agree that for completeness the conspiracy theories are notable themselves. But we shouldn't be embarrased that on the 10th anniversary some users decided that it was not fitting to include these unsubstatiated conspiracy theories in the article.Polyamorph (talk) 11:05, 13 September 2011 (UTC)

Because we want to hide the truth. --Javalenok (talk) 14:19, 13 September 2011 (UTC)

I don't really like the term conspiracy theories as it seems to imply a small group of crazy people on the fringe. Is all criticism of the 911 Commission's version of events to be dismissed as unworthy of historical record? Including that by former Commission members such as John Farmer, senior counsel to the Commission, who said in 2009, “At some level of government, at some point in time, a decision was made not to tell the truth about the national response to the attacks on the morning of 9/11?"

The deletion of this link is a highly retrograde step and indicative more of fear than boldness.Andrew Lowe Watson (talk) 19:50, 13 September 2011 (UTC)

Andrew Lowe Watson: The link to CT has been added to the article.[63] A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 15:56, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

RfC: Conspiracy theories link

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section. A summary of the conclusions reached follows.
Firstly, consensus is to include a link to the 9/11 Conspiracy Theories in the "See Also" section. There was pretty clear consensus on that matter. Another issue came up in the discussion on including a 'Summary' or couple of sentences about the conspiracy theories. Discussion has either been strongly supportive or strongly opposed with equal support in policy given for both arguments and equal number of arguments for either position. As User:MONGO pointed out, this can largely be attributed to recentism by the NY Times article. At this time, though, there is no overwhelming or even strong consensus either way on a single sentence. The previous consensus on the matter of a section or summary at Talk:September_11_attacks/Archive_55#Moving_on_to_a_general_consensus should remain until a strong consensus is achieved to reverse that decision.--v/r - TP 14:31, 20 September 2011 (UTC)

Should there be a link to the article 9/11 conspiracy theories in the See Also section of the article September 11 attacks? See the section immediately above for more opinions. --GRuban (talk) 18:56, 12 September 2011 (UTC)

  • Qualified Yes: Put in the link if it will finally put to bed the issue of having any of the conspiracy crap in the actual article. If a person wants to read that garbage, then by all means direct them to it, but it should stay out of this one for reasons that have been gone over literally dozens of times (which is the consensus that MONGO is referring to - WP:FRINGE should not be in the main). So if it keeps conspiracy nuts from vandalizing this article, then by all means add it. If it is a first step in putting information here, then keep it out. SeanNovack (talk) 19:35, 12 September 2011 (UTC)
  • Qualified Yes: For the same reasons SeanNovack said. Enough breaking consensus because of passive aggressive administrators. --Tarage (talk) 20:03, 12 September 2011 (UTC)
GRuban: thanks for providing those articles. This helps address some of my concerns. I'm still leaning towards exclusion on the grounds that 9/11 conspiracy theories are not legitimate scholarly viewpoints, but this at least make it a little more palatable to me. A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 03:15, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
GRuban - A couple of corrections: The authorship question in William Shakespeare is a question of attribution, not "conspiracy theory". Anne Frank does not link to "holocaust denial", it links to holocaust deniers who claim the diary was forged. Shirtwaist ☎ 06:00, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
The first point is a matter of opinion, but you are mistaken on the second point, it is a piped link to holocaust denial.--John (talk) 06:08, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
It is a piped link that identifies holocaust deniers Robert Faurisson and Siegfried Verbeke as such, nothing more. This usage does not mean the article "links to Holocaust denial" in the context you're GRuban is using here. That should be obvious. Shirtwaist ☎ 06:18, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
No doubt it should indeed be obvious to me, but it isn't, so can you explain your point to me? --John (talk) 06:21, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
See above. Shirtwaist ☎ 06:39, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
See where above? --John (talk) 14:53, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
With due respect, Shirtwaist, I'm responding to A Quest For Knowledge's point, so my use is in the context of his statement: "...which it does not mention or even link to...". So these are all FAs which both mention, and link to, the fringe view. --GRuban (talk) 12:54, 16 September 2011 (UTC)
This RfC is about adding a "link" in the "See also" section, so it seems clear that AQFK's context involved "mention" of CTs in the article (e.g, text talking about CTs), and "link to" in the form of a "See also" link to 911 conspiracy theories. His statement "I don't see how adding a link to 9/11 conspiracy theories is consistent with our policies" almost certainly also referred strictly to a "See also" link; if not, he can clarify. Neither of those contexts appear in Anne Frank, as the only link to "Holocaust denial" is in this sentence: "In 1991, Holocaust deniers Robert Faurisson and Siegfried Verbeke produced a booklet..." That is not a "See also" link, neither does it talk about "Holocaust denial" as a subject. Therefore, your assumption that what AQFK meant by "link to" included "See also" links and piped links was wrong. Shirtwaist ☎ 20:45, 16 September 2011 (UTC)
Featured article on an American terrorist attack with alternative theories addressed in the prose: Oklahoma City Bombing. N419BH 06:04, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
WP:OTHERSTUFF is not a particularly persuasive argument. Shirtwaist ☎ 06:26, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
And you are, like so many people do, misrepresenting what WP:OTHERSTUFF stands for. It specifically says right there that "However such an argument may be perfectly valid if such can be demonstrated in the same way as one might demonstrate justification for an article's creation" and that "using an "Other Stuff Exists" angle provides for consistency." In this instance, an OTHERSTUFF argument is perfectly valid, because it shows that conspiracy theory articles, as shown by another article of practically the exact same type that is also a Featured article, should include a link and even prose on the conspiracy theories if they are important enough. It is obvious in this instance that the conspiracy theories about 9/11 are far more expansive and noted than practically any other conspiracy theory, barring Roswell and UFOs. SilverserenC 06:34, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
  • Yes. this is the parent article and our readers should not have to search all over for this links - a link does not mean validation of the CT's - it simply links them in a neutral manner. Moxy (talk) 21:22, 12 September 2011 (UTC)
  • Definitely Not having one just raise questions about the NPOV of the parent article. --JimWae (talk) 22:17, 12 September 2011 (UTC)
    • I also note that in the previous RFC/vote, many of the people who voted, voted for several optional alternatives, including merely having a link. The vote was clearly against having an entire section of the CTs, but much less clearly (I'd say NOT clear at all) against having a link in the See also section--JimWae (talk) 21:30, 15 September 2011 (UTC)
  • Comment' There appear to be several newcomers to this debate, the conspiracy theories were muscled out removed agreed to be WP:UNDUE by several editors, most notably AQFK and MONGO. You need not bother wasting your typing, they WILL be removed the moment you take your eyes off the article. As I have clearly stated, I am in no way a supporter of 9/11 theories, but I believe they are important social shockwaves of the seismic event that was 9/11, so I would say yes. However, this opinion has been vehemently denied and the article now stands as you see it now. It will most likely shift to being that way again as soon as people are no longer watching it most likely. Soxwon (talk) 6:17 pm, Today (UTC−4)
  • Yes. In addition, there should be a short section on the theories using this article as a source, explaining that the irrational belief in conspiracy theories may be a psychological and sociological reaction to the trauma of the attacks and the government's controversial response to them. Also, the conspiracy theories article should be linked in the Sep 11 attacks topic navigation template. Cla68 (talk) 22:35, 12 September 2011 (UTC)
Unsurprisingly, now a link in see also isn't enough, and some want a more prominent link, a sentence, maybe a sub-section. Someone above dismissed my concerns about expansion. Tom Harrison Talk 11:52, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
  • Yes. That material is directly related to this subject, and I see no valid reason to omit it. The quality of an article has no bearing on its importance. And given the breadth of the conspiracy phenomenon, a section here would also be warranted. --Gyrobo (talk) 22:47, 12 September 2011 (UTC)
  • Yes. I would go so far as to say that for balance, that wingnut crap deserves a sentence or two, given just how often reliable sources do mention the subject, and those one or two sentences should also treat the topic with the incredulity that reliable sources treat it with, i.e., WP:WEIGHT seems to me to both require a short treatment and that that treatment be negative.--Fuhghettaboutit (talk) 22:55, 12 September 2011 (UTC)
  • Obviously, but preferably there should be a brief piece of referenced text as Cla68 suggests. This should not exceed one sentence (per WP:SEEALSO we would not need both) and should be on the conspiracy theories as defined narrowly by mainstream sources (controlled demolition, nanothermite etc). Too often in the bikers' bar atmosphere that prevails here, CT is used far more broadly as a discrediting pejorative relating to mainstream ideas such as linking the decade of war, "extraordinary rendition" or torture to events of 9/11. These are not "CTs" and should also be covered in the article, as they are in mainstream sources. --John (talk) 22:56, 12 September 2011 (UTC)
  • Yes, clearly. The role of an encyclopedia is to provide readers with information, not hide it from them lest they be led astray. In this case the information is notable and relevant, and including a link is a first step in countering the prevalence and popularity of 9/11 conspiracy theories by providing more readers with the best available information relating to them in reliable sources. Geometry guy 23:23, 12 September 2011 (UTC)
    Note that the article is currently under Good article reassessment and this issue is a prominent topic: see (in particular the latter parts of) WP:Good article reassessment/September 11 attacks/2. Geometry guy 01:27, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
  • Strong yes -- It's ludicrous that there are absolutely no links between this article and the conspiracy theory article. Even if there are people declining to have a section about conspiracy theories on this article, it should at least be under the "see also" section. How are people even meant to know of the conspiracy theories through reading this article? This is meant to be an encyclopaedia; we must present all views neutrally. It just so happens that some people believe in conspiracy theories. The article should reflect that. Richard BB 23:32, 12 September 2011 (UTC)
  • No (first choice) or Minimal inclusion per Acroterion and Carcharoth, who make solid arguments below. A link is over-weighting, disproportionate to that given to the theories in reliable sources about the attacks, and already people are saying a link is not enough. If experience is any guide, adding a link will only lead to demands for a sentence, with links to World Trade Center controlled demolition conspiracy theories and 9/11 Truth movement. Then people will demand a paragraph to present "the context," and that will require links to Architects & Engineers for 9/11 Truth, September 11 attacks advance-knowledge debate, and September 11 attacks opinion polls. And of course that will have to be briefly mentioned in the lead. Tom Harrison Talk 23:53, 12 September 2011 (UTC) Updated, Tom Harrison Talk 12:57, 16 September 2011 (UTC)
Tom, I'm afraid that you're using a slippery slope argument, which could very well be perceived as a fallacy. This RfC is for, literally, just a link under the 'see also' section. Any disagreement with this view under the basis that it could lead to further emphasis seems in error to me. If you do not wish any further content to be added, then please, by all means, make a no vote when and if the respective RfCs for such things arise. As this is simply for a link under the 'see also' section, I can only try to further emphasise that it is our duty as editors of an encyclopaedia to ensure that all views are represented. It seems ridiculous to me that there isn't even a single link from this page to the next. What real harm could the link do under the 'see also' section? The truth is that there is a very definite conspiracy theory movement on the Internet and even outside (whether they have any valid points is another matter and not our duty to decide), and so a link to the article is more than relevant. Richard BB 00:01, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
Just to be clear, "a link is over-weighting, disproportionate to that given to the theories in reliable sources about the attacks, and already people are saying a link is not enough." As to the rest of my comment, with so many good editors actively following the article now, maybe expansion can be avoided. Time will tell. But my argument in that the link would be over-weighting, disproportionate to that given to the theories in reliable sources about the attacks. Many of the arguments for adding a link are variations on "I've seen a lot about this on the internet, so we should mention it." Tom Harrison Talk 00:29, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
Well I said it because I read newspapers and watch television and have seen plenty of mentions of the conspiracy theories when talking about 9/11. You may be right that doing so is an attractive nuisance that will need active intervention to keep from mushrooming, but that's not why we do or do not include things in articles. I haven't been following the article and I bet you're constantly having to turn away proponents of the theories. That sucks indeed. You won't find someone more outside that camp than me, so when I say reliable sources, I don't mean "I've seen a lot about this on the internet." I mean that you go search various newspaper sites with a decent engine, even with something as specific as <truthers 9/11> to avoid false-positives but that will also miss any other mentions which don't use the exact word truthers, and even though most do not provide results for more than a few years, you find a fair number of newspaper articles on the conspiracy theories or mentioning them in the context of a broader story on some aspect of the attacks. That is why they warrant a mention here, if this article is to be comprehensive.--Fuhghettaboutit (talk) 03:42, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
There are many reliable sources about the conspiracy theories - that's how, notionally, the wiki is able to support the dozen or so pages we have about them. But those sources aren't about the attacks, they're about the conspiracy theories. Literature about the attacks makes little if any mention of the conspiracy theories. Tom Harrison Talk 11:48, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
I'm not promising to do so, but I'd like to test this statement. If you're right you're right and I might change my mind about any sentence beyond a link being warranted, if indeed there aren't quite a few reliable sources about the attacks that also mention the conspiracies. My untested impression is that you're not correct but your post focuses the matter.--Fuhghettaboutit (talk) 22:04, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
  • Of course, this RfC is only about including a single link. Yes, some people have said a sentence should be included, but I think you are being a bit hyperbolic here. LadyofShalott 00:04, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
  • Tom, to remove a section on the conspiracy theories is one thing, but to remove a link from the "See also" section looks like outright censorship. That NYTimes article is a black eye for Wikipedia. Are you sure that perhaps your feelings on the issue aren't a little strong and might be affecting your perspective? Cla68 (talk) 00:09, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
The Times article says Wikipedia treats conspiracy theories the same why "prominent newspapers, television news programs, newsweeklies" treat them. Isn't that what we're supposed to do? Tom Harrison Talk 00:30, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
This is not good - its embarrassing for us all even though Jimbo does not think so Moxy (talk) 00:39, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
It says we're a mainstream source comparable to other mainstream sources. Be embarrassed if you want, but I feel okay about it. A bit disappointed, maybe, that I've had no offers yet. Maybe Arthur's doing better. Tom Harrison Talk 11:58, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
It says no such thing and doesn't even say anything that could be seen as implying that. It says that Wikipedia should be written to a higher standard than newspapers, television news programs and newsweeklies. The NYT article actually supports a section. It even subtly makes fun of your position being contrary to what readers expect from an encyclopedia and hints at censorship. BTW, "I just want to give due weight", no mention in a see also link is no not due weight. Wayne (talk) 17:42, 18 September 2011 (UTC)
Interesting...I read the Jimbo link above, and it appears that he does support the inclusion of a link in the see also section. -- Adjwilley (talk) 16:46, 19 September 2011 (UTC)
  • NO LINK...people google for information on the September 11 attacks and that is what they want to read...if they want to read about September 11 conspiracy theories then they'll google that. One editor on another page asked about how an article or book published in a scholarly manner would explain the event of the September 11 attacks to an audience that had never heard of the event before...the answer is that these scholars would print the facts and they would omit the fantasies.MONGO 03:47, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
  • Actually, I would expect a scholarly book about 9/11 to explore the sociological and psychological impact of the event on the collective conscious by discussing the followers of conspiracy theories. Cla68 (talk) 04:33, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
  • That would be an acceptable RS...for the "Sociological and psychological impact of the event on the collective conscious" article, not this one. Shirtwaist ☎ 06:18, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
At minimum, a 'See also' link belongs here. I agree that a section would be undue...and a sentence might or might not be depending on how and where it appears. Linking to the article doesn't somehow give official Wikipedia consent to the content...it just acknowledges a notable related topic. --Onorem♠Dil 03:59, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
This is what I'm referring to, you are not going to keep anything in the article unless it is watched. MONGO and a AQFK (and Tom) wish to keep it scrubbed and will thwart any attempt to mention it. *shrugs* Soxwon (talk) 04:03, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
It's been said before that I'm "a censoring, gatekeeping agent of disinformation who suppresses the truths about 9/11." Presumably the people speaking up for adding the link are familiar with the sources and have an interest in the page, so they will be following it so see fair play. It's not like they'd just drop in to !vote and then ignore the article, right? Tom Harrison Talk 11:57, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
Isn't the whole point of a RFC to let outside editors comment. AIRcorn (talk) 12:34, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
> people google for information on the September 11 attacks and that is what they want to read...
That is right. Links and references must be banned. They distract people by promoting not what they want to know. We decide what people want to know by creating articles for them.
> The answer is that these scholars would print the facts and they would omit the fantasies.
Step 1: label all versions, that not represent the interests of American establishment, as "conspiracies" and "fantasies". Second, scorn them. BTW, official version is not less conspiratorial. It says that crazy Arabs did a conspiracy. --Javalenok (talk) 15:42, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
  • Yes I see absolutely no reason why a link to a directly related article that exists because of this article's subject shouldn't be placed in the See Also section. The Barack Obama citizenship conspiracy theories were mentioned above, saying that the article wasn't linked in the Barack Obama See Also section. The reason for that in the Barack Obama article is actually exactly the opposite of this one, in that that article is liberally edited, so conspiracy articles such as that are not wanted because they are negative. SilverserenC 04:22, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
  • Strongest possible Yes Clearly related and completely within precedent, see Oklahoma City Bombing where alternative theories are discussed in the actual prose. It's embarrassing and against policy that our uncensored encyclopedia has been censored in this manner. N419BH 05:41, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
  • Yes Would rather a short sentence in a suitable section acknowledging their existence, as long as it is presented in a way that shows that they are not taken seriously by the majority of academics. However, having it under see also is an improvement on the current status. AIRcorn (talk) 06:52, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
  • Absolutely yes I hate-hate-hate conspiracy drivel, but the best way to debunk it is to mention its existance for the interested folk, and then have it debunked in the conspiracy article later on. – sgeureka t•c 09:17, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
  • No - there should not be a link in the see also section. It should instead be linked to in the main article under a section, maybe in the investigations section or if not somewhere suitable, in which the link can be given some context. i.e. as with many many modern events conspiracy theories are rampant, although ultimately unconvincing given the overwhelming evidence and eyewitness accounts etc. This can be short but I don't think a plain link in the see also section gives it sufficient context. Polyamorph (talk) 10:51, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
  • No As per WP:UNDUE - "Wikipedia aims to present competing views in proportion to their representation in reliable sources on the subject (the subject being 'September 11 attacks', not '911 Conspiracy theories')". That proportion is either zero or so close to zero as to be negligible in the extreme and unworthy of note. Shirtwaist ☎ 13:12, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
  • Yes. I've come here after reading the NYT article via the Signpost, and I agree that a comprehensive and neutral treatment of the issue must at least mention the fact that there are notable (in the Wikipedia sense) conspiracy theories that contest the generally accepted description of events. This requires, at least, a "see also" link, and probably also a brief sentence acknowledging the fact.  Sandstein  13:54, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
  • No. I've yet to see evidence that WP:ONEWAY is satisfied. For example, the 911 Commission Report did not mention conspiracy theories. That was in contrast with the Warren Report, which did. ScottyBerg (talk) 14:36, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
  • Yes provided it is just one link to 9/11 conspiracy theories with no additional comment. See also links are provided for navigational reasons and don't imply we are giving any significant weight to the conspiracy theories. If anything by labelling them as another topic such a link could be interpreted as emphasising the difference between the mainstream and the fringe. I admit that people are going to support adding a section on the conspiracy theories but I don't see how adding a link is going to increase the number of such requests. I don't support discussion of conspiracy theories in the article text, as doing it properly to emphasise the social context and the mainstream response would likely require several paragraphs, which is too much. Hut 8.5 16:33, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
  • Procedural comment This relates to a number of supports above for "just a See also link, provided there is no other comment" and similar. The purpose of "See also" is that "A reasonable number of relevant links that would be in the body of a hypothetical perfect article are suitable to add to the "See also" appendix of a less developed one." If we add a link in "See also", we are acknowledging that at some point in the future when the article is in better shape there should be an encyclopedic sentence on the subject, with sources. I don't agree though with the slippery slope argument though, that this would inevitably lead to the section growing and growing. I strongly suggest restricting it to one sentence, to be agreed in the future once this process is finished (though it seems pretty clear which way it is headed at the moment). --John (talk) 17:39, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
Links to content which would ideally be covered in an article is one purpose of a "see also" section, but it isn't the only one. The purpose of "see also sections is "A bulleted list, preferably alphabetized, of internal links (wikilinks) to related Wikipedia articles." We are not acknowledging that content on conspiracy theories should be included in this article by inserting a link, only that the topic exists and that it is related to 9/11, and you should not attempt to use support for a link to argue that the article should directly address the topic. There are articles on mainstream subjects where fringe theories are permanently relegated to "see also" links, such as Holocaust and Holocaust denial/Criticism of Holocaust denial. Hut 8.5 17:55, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
The Holocaust article isn't a FA though, although it is currently in better shape than this one. This article, on the other hand, is featured and includes two well-referenced sentences on 9/11 conspiracy theories. --John (talk) 18:42, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
Whether or not another article is an FA is frankly irrelevant to the question of whether or not the material in see also sections will ultimately be incorporated into the main article. In the case of 7 WTC the circumstances are slightly different. Hut 8.5 21:05, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
  • Yes, The censorship is important in order to defend the freedom and democracy. Just look at the Russian apartment bombings. Russian article brings the official version, highlights right away that is KGB version, that Putin is former KGB director and his pro-war political party gains popularity. That is not all! The article says that the events were a false flag operation! That is terrible? A half of the intro is dedicated to the "conspiracy theory"! Obviously, the difference with 9/11 description is that Putin is a bloody KGB dictator with totalitarian censorship. Only dictator regimes ignore civil society and allow it to have doubts in respected media. English and American society is more civilized. It must not mimic the Russian censorship. We must believe in official versions, present them as the only truth and doubtful facts. If we add a controversial link, not to speak turning the article into conspiracy in Russian, anti-liberal manner, an innocent person may accidentally click it and fall into a trap. It may read something and conclude that what you call "a conspiracy" is not that crazy, if not more plausible than the official "truth". This is inadmissible. Keep in mind that 9/11 is the most massively supported alternative story on the planet. Democracy is in danger! Americans are enduring for democracy! Do not let them, terrorists, percolate into our minds! The belief of masses in capitalist democracy must be clean of doubts. This means that we must keep complete silence about the movement wherever possible. Let's talk about cats! --Javalenok (talk) 17:59, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
    Wikipedia:Sarcasm is really helpful⸮ --GRuban (talk) 18:14, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
My way of joking is to tell the truth. It's the funniest joke in the world. If you're going to tell people the truth, you better make them laugh; otherwise they'll kill you. I see here that those who were not in line with liberal democracy are banned as conspiracy terrorists. I have forgotten to mention one more argument: USA official propaganda is known to say only truth to manipulate the public opinion for interventions. The absolute evidence of WMO, never found in Iraq, and Nurse Nayirah are the examples. Only dictators need to lie because they have no other means to control the society (in liberal countries, we must strictly follow the authority commands, and, thus, mind control is unnecessary). -- (talk) 08:55, 14 September 2011 (UTC)
"What is life but a series of inspired follies? The difficulty is to find them to do. Never lose a chance: it doesn't come every day" It just came to mind after reading your...um..."joke". Thanks for the laugh. Shirtwaist ☎ 11:26, 14 September 2011 (UTC)
  • Strong no - In my numerous experiences on wikis and this own site, every time a nomination like this occurs, the addition of the content snowballs into more, more, and more additions. Simply put, the 'Truthers' will no doubt use a successful nomination to try and give higher credence for this discredited view. Aside from the above, also it should be noted that this is unneeded and rather POV, to me. Toa Nidhiki05 23:22, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
As mentioned above, you're using a slippery slope argument. I don't think it is right to decline that a mere 'see also' link be denied on the basis that other things may be uploaded -- that seems like a fallacy to me. Should 'truthers' want extra content added to the article, such as a paragraph, then by all means vote no if RfCs happen for them in the future. For this particular incident, however, it is literally just one link. Oh, and not all of us are truthers ;) Richard BB 23:33, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
It is a slippery slope argument, and is quite valid on my experience on all wikis. Any time something like this is done, the push is done to add more and more - and with new people supporting on the basis that 'we added that, so why not add this?'. Something may seem harmless, but on a major page like this, where you have to get an RfC to add a freaking link, it's a big deal.
And even non-Truthers can get trapped by this - I've had consistency advocates (and friends) on other sites supporting additions or articles they previously rejected on the 'we have that' basis. More people, truthers or not, will support more 'truther' conspiracy bits when this is added. Toa Nidhiki05 23:45, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
There used to be a short section on the conspiracy theories in this article, but it was removed after extensive discussion on this talk page appeared to result in a consensus for the removal. Unfortunately, after that the slippery slope moved in the opposite direction, with a small group of editors advocating for then removing the link from the see also section, then edit warring to keep it removed, ultimately resulting in the embarrassing article in the NYTimes. In an article as high-profile as this one, that something like this could happen is a worrying indication that Wikipedia is not properly equipped for handling its "maintenance phase" of operation. Cla68 (talk) 23:53, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
Something like...what? You seem to be arguing against consensus building and subsequent enforcing of same. I wonder if you will be equally upset about a possible new consensus, one you favor, for inclusion of CT's in "See also", and subsequent enforcement against improper edit warring of same. If the NYT demonstrates its lack of understanding of WP's workings, it's NYT's embarrassment, not ours. Shirtwaist ☎ 06:44, 14 September 2011 (UTC)
It's not the job of one our readers, i.e. our customers, to know Wikipedia's inner workings. They're supposed to read and be informed by the articles. If they find a glaring omission, such as an extensive article on conspiracy theories, but no link to it from the main Sept 11 article, then that's a valid concern that we, the providers, need to take into serious consideration. Something went seriously wrong with this article, and we need to figure out to keep it from happening again. Cla68 (talk) 07:17, 14 September 2011 (UTC)
I don't recall reading a policy or guideline outlining our responsibility to the sensibilities of the New York Times writing staff. Though, I'd prefer the writer to chime in on our discussions if they so chose, instead of airing their personal displeasure with, and lack of understanding of, WP procedure in the press. Shirtwaist ☎ 08:03, 14 September 2011 (UTC)
Indeed. Stop criticizing Marxists. Be a Marxist! --Javalenok (talk) 09:25, 14 September 2011 (UTC)
EXACTLY!!! Wait...what? Shirtwaist ☎ 11:32, 14 September 2011 (UTC)
But you're not worried that the "See Also" section of countless articles on wikipedia will be challenged based on the exclusion here? That won't be a slippery slope, rather an avalanche. DS Belgium (talk) 13:49, 14 September 2011 (UTC)
  • Yes - It's funny how sensitive people are to fringe sources. Even to debunk. - Peregrine Fisher (talk) 00:07, 14 September 2011 (UTC)
  • Support This article is meant to provide an overview of the September 11 attacks, including their impact on society and politics. The scope of the article is not limited to a mere description of the actual events on that day itself.  Cs32en Talk to me  00:29, 14 September 2011 (UTC)
If you read it, it is meant to promote the official agenda, US imperialism.--Javalenok (talk) 08:10, 14 September 2011 (UTC)
There's no such thing as "US imperialism. In fact, the idea that we're imperialists is another conspiracy theory. ----DanTD (talk) 03:50, 17 September 2011 (UTC)
Sure, no matter what American policies are, no matter what lies are used to "reshape the world" in "US interests", saying that US is not an empire will make it a fact. Only countries, who do not have military bases all around the world, who do not have CNN to deliver truth to the world, but systematically demonstrate their disobedience to our interests, like Russia and Iran, are empires. We gonna squash them. exceptionalism and the denials of imperialism are the result of a systematic strategy of propaganda, to "manufacture opinion". Hiding the Pearl Harbor context and assuring that US is not an empire is a part of this brainwashing strategy. Mocking those who dare to think contrary to your propaganda are terrorists and conspiracy theorists is another part of manufacturing the consent. --Javalenok (talk) 08:07, 18 September 2011 (UTC)
That's what they want you to think. Tom Harrison Talk 12:59, 18 September 2011 (UTC)
  • Hell, yes They are important enough inside the topic to merit a "see also" link. Readers should be exposed to all important facets of a topic when reading its "main" article, even if it's just one link so it's at least linked somewhere. --Enric Naval (talk) 00:55, 14 September 2011 (UTC)
  • Comment - Over the years since they first emerged I've been aware of these conspiracy theories in the sense of seeing them portrayed in the mainstream media in the UK, which is mainly mentions in television documentaries and some newspaper articles. The impression I've gained over time is that the theories have failed to gain a foothold and are now portrayed in the mainstream media as fringe, with more than adequate evidence to rebut the claims made.

    Indeed, a recent documentary I saw involved a group of youngish people (teens to early 20s) taken on a road trip around various sites and meeting various people, to see if this would change their pro-conspiracy theory views (some would have barely been 10 when the attacks took place). The documentary was clearly as much about the psychology of the people as about the theories themselves. It was fascinating to see how some people cling to their views regardless of the logical arguments and evidence presented to them, almost needing to not have their views disproved (though several did change their views after meeting eyewitnesses to the events and visiting the sites).

    In another decade or so, a whole new generation will have grown up who were not even born when the attacks took place. It is clear that the conspiracy theories will become nothing more than a quirky aside, much like the Apollo moon landing theories. I think what needs to happen at the present time is that the conspiracy theories need to be mentioned, but not as a single link, or a brief aside, but as a tightly written set of sentences stating: (1) That various conspiracy theories exist (though only a single link to a main article, absolutely no expansion beyond that); (2) That they lack any credibility (this point has to be made very strongly); (3) That increasingly the study is of them as a sociologial and psychological phenomenon, not as a serious object of study attempting to prove or disprove them. And then leave the rest to the subarticles and insist that nothing more be added here.

    My reasoning for this is as follows: saying nothing is a non-starter as that is just avoiding the issue, but if you do say something then it has to be firm and clear, not an unexplained link or a false attempt at 'balance', but rather a clear statement that the conspiracy theories have no credibility. There are plenty of reliable sources that would adequately support a statement to that effect and that is all that is needed here. One final point, some may fear that mentioning the conspiracy theories at all (even to say they have no credibility) will give them undue prominence or credibility. But that's not how article writing works. Mentioning something doesn't automatically make it credible. It is how you mention it or not mention it that matters. In this case, ironically, failing to mention the conspiracy theories gives them credence (that is the nature of conspiracy theories). Better by far to not ignore the elephant in the room, but to mention them and dismiss them in the same sentence. Carcharoth (talk) 01:45, 14 September 2011 (UTC)

    • Largely agree, however statements (or sentiments) like "That they lack any credibility" would have to be supported in this article with referencing. It would be okay to put the link in the "See also" section, or (if felt necessary) to write something like "There are theories of conspiracy surround the events of 9/11.", however anything further would need to be supported. The problem with trying to support such statements is that the process risks spiralling out of control. That's why this RfC is on the link's inclusion in the "See also" section—and discussion should remain focussed on that aspect. GFHandel ♬  23:30, 14 September 2011 (UTC)
      • The reason I have only commented so far and not supported a bare link in 'See also' is that I largely agree with Overjive below, who says "The Conspiracy article introduction gives the impression that the theories have merit. Unless we prominently address the relative merit, we will add to the cultural factors that spread such unsupported theories". That is why I think a link without any accompanying text is not good enough. It needs to be said, plainly and clearly, in both this article and that article that the theories have no merit (though some are more obviously rebutted than others). That is an argument for changes to the conspiracy theory article(s), but it also illustrates that you can't isolate a discussion like this from discussion of other aspects. To go a little further, the 7/7 attacks in London have a conspiracy 'article' as well, but that is a redirect to a section of that article. That solution works well there, but doesn't work here for size and coverage reasons.

        I also, to make it clear, agree with RxS that this is "a fading subject and is less relevant now than ever" (the conspiracy theories, not the attacks themselves). I said above that in another ten years a new generation will have grown up for which this is all just history, and I think it will be even clearer then how much the whole subtopic of conspiracy theories will have faded by then (other than being case studies in sociology and psychology courses), and by that time I expect the conspiracy articles will have reduced in size as time gives more perspective to all this. However, despite all that, I agree with those who say that not mentioning this at all in this article does a dis-service to our readers. Rather than keep the two topics at arm's length from each other, the issue needs to be confronted head-on and dealt with. The WP:ONEWAY argument is more subtle. I'll address that elsewhere. Carcharoth (talk) 00:32, 15 September 2011 (UTC)

        • That's a compelling argument, but I don't think it's practical. If we're going to use summary style, we pretty much have to summarize 9/11 conspiracy theories. The article will necessarily be the product of whoever wants to work on it. I did in the past, don't plan to again, and can't in good conscience ask anyone else to do so. I'm afraid it's nothing, a link, or a summary of 9/11 conspiracy theories. Tom Harrison Talk 00:46, 15 September 2011 (UTC)
          • Summary style does not mean every link or topic mentioned has to be summarised or even mentioned in any detail. At the end of the day, if you (eventually, not in this discussion) get a consensus of editors here saying that a short and firm dismissal of the conspiracy theories is needed here to maintain comprehensiveness and NPOV, then people are going to wonder why some editors are resisting that. The claim that it is WP:UNDUE will start to ring hollow when you are arguing against inclusion of a dismissal of the conspiracy theories, and it will start to seem that you are arguing to omit any link because you want the topics to be kept apart and to develop independently. Well, no. Both articles need to meet Wikipedia's policies and standards, and both articles need to clearly state the obvious. You seem rather to be arguing for allowing editors to pick one or the other to edit. That is the anti-thesis of what Wikipedia is about. I would question whether any editor who feels unable to work on the conspiracy theories article can be objective enough to work on the main article. What is needed here is absolutely editors willing and able to work on both articles. Carcharoth (talk) 04:08, 15 September 2011 (UTC) While I'm here, I should say that I was pointed to the GAR page by Geometry guy, and I largely agree with what he is saying there, particularly the points towards the end of that review as of this timestamp.
              • I'm not unable to spend Saturday night in the bus station with a drunken monomaniac, just unwilling. Question my objectivity if you want, but I feel like I've given all the time I owe the project to conspiracy theories in general. You take a turn if you like. And that isn't snark; I'd love to see you and others actively editing the ct pages, and I hope you'll work on this page too. Tom Harrison Talk 13:47, 15 September 2011 (UTC)
  • Support a link in the See Also section, the fact that some people have put forward conspiracy theories is a verifiable fact, I have also seen the sort of television documentaries Carcharoth talks about and as per WP:NPOV "means representing fairly, proportionately, and as far as possible without bias, all significant views that have been published by reliable sources" so that means we should have a link here. Mtking (edits) 02:23, 14 September 2011 (UTC)
  • Yes Ridiculous though I think these theories are, they are definitely a subset of the 9/11 topic as very many people believe them. In addition, it's only a link, not an endorsement. Ericoides (talk) 05:27, 14 September 2011 (UTC)
  • Comment After reading numerous qualifications accompanying the opinions of supporters - here and elsewhere - of inclusion of mention of CT's in the article, such as "Ridiculous though I think these theories are...", "I hate-hate-hate conspiracy drivel", and "that wingnut crap", I have to assume most if not all authors of RS on the 911 attacks hold similar sentiments towards CTs, which is probably why none of them ever seem to mention CTs in their works. I guess they leave all that drivel to the authors of CT books and websites. Shirtwaist ☎ 12:03, 14 September 2011 (UTC)
Actually many many authors do talk about this despite what other have said to the contrary - 28 and 34 Random House - Yosri Fouda and Nick Fielding.Moxy (talk) 16:10, 14 September 2011 (UTC)
It could be that people – myself included – are giving accompanying qualifications because they feel that some might make the assumption that it was only conspiracy theorists who were pushing for the inclusion of a link. Ericoides (talk) 19:43, 14 September 2011 (UTC)
Understood, Ericoides. I certainly didn't mean to cast any aspersions on those making the comments, just commenting on the fact that those sentiments are very widely shared. Shirtwaist ☎ 22:11, 14 September 2011 (UTC)
Moxy - Is about one page of somewhat anecdotal text in a 216 page book considered "connecting the topics in a serious and prominent way" as per WP:ONEWAY? I don't think so. IMO, that would clearly fall below the threshold of inclusion. Shirtwaist ☎ 22:02, 14 September 2011 (UTC)
There are some problems with the current text at WP:ONEWAY. I had thought this was a section of Wikipedia:Linking, but the shortcut has been appropriated by WP:FRINGE instead. Anyway, there is an unwritten assumption there that inclusion of a fringe link give credence to the fringe topic. That is utterly wrong. It is not the link that gives a topic credence, but what the accompanying text with the link says. The current text says: "If mentioning a fringe theory in another article gives undue weight to the fringe theory, discussion of the fringe theory may be limited, or even omitted altogether." Consider instead this sentence: "If rebutting a fringe theory in another article gives undue weight to the fringe theory, discussion of the fringe theory may be limited, or even omitted altogether." The point being that it should be perfectly acceptable to mention and link a fringe topic to rebut the claims it makes (as long as you source that rebuttal). You shouldn't have to leave it to that article for the fringe topic to be rebutted. It goes back to what I was saying. It is not the link itself that is the problem, but what is said or not said with the text accompanying link. For anything remotely controversial, just a bare link in see also (or even no link at all) is abrogating the responsibility of the editors of this article to accurately inform the readers of this article that a fringe topic gets lots of coverage but has no credibility. Carcharoth (talk) 00:43, 15 September 2011 (UTC)
Interesting perspective, Carcharoth. But how would your version of the text change the subtext in WP:ONEWAY that says any mention of fringe topics - including links - could give undue weight to fringe topics? Is there a significant difference in the average reader's mind between "mentioning" CTs and "rebutting" them? Or would the average reader see a link to 911 CTs in an article on the 911 attacks and say "The people who wrote this article must think the 911 attacks and 911 CTs are definitely connected somehow, otherwise they wouldn't put the link in there", whether or not they were rebutted in the linked article? Shirtwaist ☎ 05:18, 15 September 2011 (UTC)
  • Yes - like it or not, wacky things, like these conspiracy theories are notable and the fact that they exist should be mentioned (albeit very very briefly). I'm also not convinced by any of the slippery slopes arguments presented above - though that is a concern to be kept in mind in the future. Volunteer Marek  12:22, 14 September 2011 (UTC)
  • Sorry No. First, you can't keep asking the same question hoping to get a different result. Secondly, it's a fading subject and is less relevant now than ever. RxS (talk) 14:34, 14 September 2011 (UTC)
  • No The Conspiracy article introduction gives the impression that the theories have merit. Unless we prominently address the relative merit, we will add to the cultural factors that spread such unsupported theories. Overjive (talk) 16:06, 14 September 2011 (UTC)
  • Yes a link is appropriate.Teapeat (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 18:30, 14 September 2011 (UTC).
  • Yes. Wikipedia has considered the inclusion of the 9/11 conspiracy theories article notable (including 299 Note references), so it is incredulous that this article shouldn't include a link to that article—even if that link is just in the "See also" section. To not inform our readers of the existence of the conspiracy page is a disservice as it takes away choice (and smacks of censorship). GFHandel ♬  20:32, 14 September 2011 (UTC)
  • Yes To not have a link from the main article to a very notable article 100% based on the events in the main article is incompetence. Public awareness (talk) 01:57, 15 September 2011 (UTC)
  • Comment I'm non-committal at this stage, so I'll make this comment - on one hand, a link could be WP:UNDUE. On the other, it is clearly related and notable. As much as I hate the conspiracy theories, I might be able to say yes for inclusion on the condition that none of the theories are mentioned, not even in passing, in the body of the article. But I'm not committing as of right now. NYyankees51 (talk) 02:32, 15 September 2011 (UTC)
  • Minimal inclusion As someone who has spent a great deal of time dealing with Truthers of all kinds from not-unreasonable "there are things we don't understand about 9/11" to "WTC was nuked!", I come to the reluctant conclusion that the article should state, briefly and unequivocally, what the current state of thought is on conspiracy theories in scholarly and mainstream press references. Something like "The September 11 attacks have been the subject of a variety of conspiracy theories, suggesting the involvement of parties other than the 19 hijackers and their backers. These theories have been given no credence in serious scholarship on the events of 9/11." This can be referenced (I've provided links to similar discussions in the Guardian among others last week in sections farther up the page) and establishes appropriate weight and reliable sourcing. 9/11 conspiracy theories have gained no traction in mainstream sources, and we should say so. As one of the few architects on WP, I have spent much time explaining how utterly and provably wrong many Truther theories are from the points of view of fire protection engineering, materials science, building codes, building construction and structural design principals, completely apart from the issues of the posited existence of a massive conspiracy with extensive advance preparation. The theorists have no credibility in the architecture/engineering community, and their pressure group is firmly on the fringe. The state of Truther "scholarship" amounts to little more than a rumor mill and random theorizing, while much less sensational, but far more important and real issues concerning the level of preparedness of the US before 9/11 are lost in the noise. We should state briefly and plainly that the theories exist, but have no credibility in scholarly sources. Acroterion (talk) 14:12, 15 September 2011 (UTC)
That's one possible approach. I'm against inclusion because of WP:ONEWAY: "Fringe theories may be mentioned in the text of other articles only if independent reliable sources connect the topics in a serious and prominent way." That's a much higher standard than simply "mentioned in reliable sources." The Warren Report discussed and dismissed conspiracy theories, probably because they were so widely embraced by the public. The 911 Commission did not, probably for the reasons you state. To me, that's a barrier that hasn't been surmounted. There have been many articles in reliable sources, such as a major effort in Popular Mechanics, but the conspiracy theories are too fatuous to have been connected by reliable sources in a prominent way. ScottyBerg (talk) 15:00, 15 September 2011 (UTC)
Yes. I honestly fail to see why this is even in question. The Cavalry (Message me) 21:12, 15 September 2011 (UTC)
Now the only question is how long my edit will last?--intelatitalk 03:39, 16 September 2011 (UTC)
Six hours and 25 minutes, turns out. Careful you don't have your hat impounded for doing that too often. Shirtwaist ☎ 11:25, 16 September 2011 (UTC)
If this RfC is closed with a consensus that including such a link is appropriate then one can be added. Until then don't jump the gun. Hut 8.5 11:59, 16 September 2011 (UTC)
From your edit, intelati, I assume your opinion is Yes? If so, I think we are better off if both sides state their opinion but can wait a bit before taking action. I think the consensus is much clearer here to add the link than it ever was to remove, but there is still time for more opinions to be added. Please explain why you think the way you do. Maybe people can be convinced. --GRuban (talk) 12:48, 16 September 2011 (UTC)
Per my Sleep deprived, yet still accurate, comment on MONGO's talk page.--intelatitalk 18:48, 17 September 2011 (UTC)
  • Yes. The article details the official account of what happened that day. It's the most widely believed, and it's the most plausible in my view, but it's not the only view. Whatever we may think of those who hold alternative views, we cannot state the official account as though it is indisputable fact and fail to mention that there are other views. It's not for us, as editors, to judge the validity of the official or the alternative viewpoints, but to provide the reader with the complete picture and let them make their own mind up. HJ Mitchell | Penny for your thoughts? 12:22, 16 September 2011 (UTC)
    If reliable sources stated that the Pallid sturgeon is actually a Blue whale we would report that...but no reliable sources state this.MONGO 15:57, 16 September 2011 (UTC)
    Not only are you wrong, but you comically defeated your own argument! If reliable sources reported that there was a minority view that the pallid sturgeon was a blue whale, we would note that—we might even write blue whale conspiracy theories—but we would not report that view as fact (and nobody here is in favour of reporting these conspiracy theories as fact). Oh, and of course there are no reliable sources, what must I have been thinking? HJ Mitchell | Penny for your thoughts? 19:18, 17 September 2011 (UTC)
    There are NO reliable sources that report a Pallid sturgeon is a Blue whale anymore than there are reliable sources that report that any of the conspiracy theories surrounding the September 11 attacks are true. There are reliable sources that report that the CT's exist, but none that they are a fact. You don't seem to have any ability to understand that do you?--MONGO 10:02, 18 September 2011 (UTC)
  • I remind MONGO not to make personal attacks. Do not insult another editor's intelligence. Just because people hold a different opinion than you does not make them stupid. LadyofShalott 18:31, 18 September 2011 (UTC)
  • I see, so HJ Mitchell's comment above "Not only are you wrong, but you comically defeated your own argument" and his other snide sarcasm are exempt...nice. Weren't you the one that closed my AN/I report regarding HJ Mitchell before an adequate review could take place? Besides, I not once said he was stupid...so don't mischaracterize my comments.--MONGO 19:02, 18 September 2011 (UTC)
  • HJM's fish/whale analogy doesn't make a whole lot of sense to me. However, what you have quoted is a comment upon your argument; whereas "You don't seem to have any ability to understand that do you?" is a comment upon the editor and does imply a lack of intelligence. LadyofShalott 21:55, 18 September 2011 (UTC)
  • What appears to have happened is that MONGO was checked on his attempted use of red herring, straw man, and Argumentum ad logicam tactics in this debate, so he resorted to Argumentum ad hominem (See here). I think most of the participants in this discussion have used fairly clear logic in deciding the stance that they support, so using logical fallacies in response probably isn't very helpful or productive. Hypothetically speaking, when one is losing a debate as badly as this one is being lost by the few editors supporting removal of the link from the "See also", it's probably more productive to concede the point and move on. Cla68 (talk) 22:49, 18 September 2011 (UTC)
@MONGO, getting back to the point, whether reliable sources state that the conspiracy theories are true is wholly irrelevant. The existence of the theories is notable and their existence is easily verifiable. Now, the official account of what happened on 11 September 2001 is one theory (and the most plausible in most opinions), but nobody alive can say with absolute certainty that the official account is what happened. Thus, being an encyclopaedia and having a policy on neutrality, we cannot suppress the fact that alternate theories exist. With the utmost respect, I think you are being driven by emotion, and I sympathise with your feelings on this, but sometimes writing an encyclopaedia means we have to be detached and put our emotions to one side. HJ Mitchell | Penny for your thoughts? 23:33, 18 September 2011 (UTC)
Last time I checked, I was alive, so I must be the only person alive that can say with absolute certainty that the "official" account of what happened on 9/11 is fact. However, I'm sure there are others who are alive that might concur with me...the CT's surrounding the attacks are a cultural response based on an emotional reaction, not a thinking reaction, so its passin driven to add such things and science driven to stick to the facts. I always defend what the science says...since there are no reliable refs that claim that any of the CT's are fact, they can't be "alternate" since that word indicates plausibility.MONGO 11:51, 19 September 2011 (UTC)
I'm alive as well and I concur. Toa Nidhiki05 15:34, 19 September 2011 (UTC)
Ok this sounds odd - you admit there are CT's but you personal don't think they a true so they must be omitted despite what others many believe? So in other words your telling them what they are allowed to read. CT's are just that a non mainstream view. Your reply seem to be very one sided and is not what a balanced article should portray.Moxy (talk) 14:34, 19 September 2011 (UTC)
it doesn't matter what other people believe...it only matters what relaible sources say about the September 11 attacks...there are no reliable sources that support the claims made by conspiracy theorists...there are reliable sources that say the CT's exist, but none that say they are true. Point is, this article is based on the facts, not the fantasies. It is not the place to pander to these fantasies...they can be found in other articles for which this one isn't even a parent of.— Preceding unsigned comment added by MONGO (talk • contribs) 15:02, 19 September 2011 (UTC)
On a project where MONGO's opinions reflected community values, the article on Jesus, for example, would look very different. We would only mention the "proven fact" that he existed but we would be unable to record the veneration of Christians. Why not start a new project with those values, maybe call it "Factopedia"? Meantime on Wikipedia, we use reliable sources and not our own beliefs or prejudices to decide coverage. --John (talk) 15:23, 19 September 2011 (UTC)
Nice straw man... When did he declare support for facts over RSes? He pointed out the theories are not considered fact by any reliable sources, and thus they are not suitable for a page on the facts of the attack. Toa Nidhiki05 15:34, 19 September 2011 (UTC)
The last RfC was about removing material. This one is about adding material. But either way, it's probably about time for an uninvolved editor to review this discussion and articulate the current consensus. Tom Harrison Talk 23:01, 18 September 2011 (UTC) I didn't know there was a prescribed length; it should run for the full time. Tom Harrison Talk 02:03, 19 September 2011 (UTC)
RfCs run for 30 days. It's only been 6. A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 23:34, 18 September 2011 (UTC)
RfCs run until they're closed. They're removed by a bot from the list after 30 days, but that's just to keep them from being around forever. This one seems to be reaching its natural conclusion -- no new arguments have been advanced for a while, and not many new users are joing in -- and if an uninvolved admin doesn't close it soon, I'll be asking for one to close it. --GRuban (talk) 11:10, 19 September 2011 (UTC)
  • Yes While MONGO does make a strong case for total exclusion, I think a See Also link should be included per Intelati's reasoning here. Mark Arsten (talk) 19:27, 16 September 2011 (UTC)
  • No Conspiracy theories are not part of the factual events of 9/11. They are a dispute of the credible findings from the 9/11 Commission which is a separate article. This article links to the findings. The findings lnk to conspiracy theories. There is no reason to make this article a WP:COATRACK for every crackpot theory (or even give an "in" to crackpot theories). Every article related to gravity doesn't include links to the flat earth theory. Similarly, every article on the actual history of 9/11 should not link to conspiracy theories. This article is about the factual events of 9/11. Anything crackpot violates WP:UNDUE and WP:COATRACK --DHeyward (talk) 01:26, 19 September 2011 (UTC)
The point is that this article doesn't link to the conspiracy theory article. This RfC isn't if there should be a conspiracy theory section in this article; it's if a link to the conspiracy theory article should be under the 'see also' section. One single link does not turn this article into a 'crackpot theory', as you put it. – Richard BB 02:22, 19 September 2011 (UTC)
I don't believe my argument was limited to a CT section. I think I clearly stated a link is inappropriate. CT theories dispute the official findings on the 9/11 Commission. The link belongs in that article not here (and it's already there). It doesn't belong in every single 9/11 article as it's simply a crackpot view that the engineers and scientists were wrong in their post 9/11 findings. By injecting the link into every 9/11 article as if it were a credible alternative is a violation of WP:COATRACK andWP:UNDUE as there is no reliable sources or peer reviewed articles that give it any credence whatsoever. --DHeyward (talk) 13:42, 20 September 2011 (UTC)
  • Strong Yes it is a closely related article, and should be in the "see also" section. I doubt I'll make any arguments here that haven't been made already, but I think WP guidelines support this. -- Adjwilley (talk) 16:12, 19 September 2011 (UTC)
  • Clearly yes there should also be a (very short) section in the article on the topic, but that boat has sailed. The article should cover all relevant issues and this is certainly relevant (if wrong). Hobit (talk) 13:52, 20 September 2011 (UTC)

Comparative summary

The discussion has now been open over a week, people seem to have run out of new arguments, and few new opinions are being offered: only 2 new participants in the last 4 days, as compared to over 40 participants giving their opinions before that. It looks like a conclusion can be drawn, and since this is an article under administrative sanctions, I'll be asking at WP:ANI for an admin to close, rather just an experienced editor.

The closing admin will of course take quality of arguments into account rather than mere headcount, but I'm obviously biased in summing up those: I think the arguments for having a link are clearly far stronger. But I can count how many support each opinion, though, and compare to the count from the last consensus that we're trying to change.

The current state (no mention of or link to 9/11 conspiracy theories anywhere) seems to have been established with this discussion in June. That discussion had 5 options for people to choose between, from removal of all mention, to a separate section. There were about* 19 editors participating, with about* 12 of them supporting removal of all mention: which was done. *(If you think that given a choice between N options, each editor will pick exactly one of then, you clearly haven't been to many Wikipedia discussions!)

The current discussion has about*(as above) 37 editors supporting restoring the link, and 10 against any mention. --GRuban (talk) 13:13, 20 September 2011 (UTC)

The "outcome" here has been influenced by issues surrounding recentism due to an opinion piece in the NY Times...in 6 months or less, the outcome of another Rfc would probably have the opposite result since many of the comments here are from editors that have made few if any edits to the article and were simply drawn here by the issues of recentism (anniversary of the attacks, media focus, NY Times piece).MONGO 14:14, 20 September 2011 (UTC)
Many editors who have commented here have edited on diverse topics on the project, and there are actually few newcomers in the discussion. That they have generally made few edits to the article may also mean that they have been less influenced by the polarized editing process on this page.  Cs32en Talk to me  21:33, 20 September 2011 (UTC)
This article belongs to those who have built/privatized it and do not let others to contribute. This is sufficient pretext for others to shut up and do not have opinions. Respect the masters of this article. --Javalenok (talk) 15:55, 21 September 2011 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
You can try an RFC in 6 months then MONGO. Soxwon (talk) 21:57, 20 September 2011 (UTC)
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