Talk:Scarlet-and-white tanager/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 09:36, 30 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• What's a "median stripe"?

I've adee.

• "It feed mainly" feeds.

Fixed.

• It is... repeated several times in the lead. Perhaps switch one or two out for the name of the species for variety.

Done.

• "P.L. Sclater" -> "P. L. Sclater"

Done.

• "in Remedios, Antioquia" which country?

Added.

• "Union (IOC). Alternative" you never use IOC so not sure of the purpose of abbreviating it.

Removed.

• "scarlet and white tanager" and "scarlet-white tanager" alt names are normally given in bold and plausible redirects can be created from them to this article if they don't already exist.

Bolded and created redirects.

• Link body parts again in the prose.

Done.

• "non-migratory" link appropriately.

Linked.

• Can we say what IUCN means?

Not sure what you mean.

• Red list was mentioned in the lead but not in the main article, don't have details in the lead which aren't in the main article.

Added to body.

• Ref 6 has a spaced hyphen, needs to be en-dash.

Fixed. AryKun (talk) 04:12, 2 October 2021 (UTC)

That's it for me. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:38, 1 October 2021 (UTC)