Talk:SS Lac La Belle/GA1

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 10:20, 11 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]


Comments

  • "between Cleveland, and Lake Superior" no need for comma.
  • "As of 2021, the wreck..." avoid single sentence para, merge that into the previous lead para.
  • "Cleveland, Ohio by" comma after Ohio.
  • "She was launched" last "she" was the sister ship.
  • "her career ... her career..." repetitive.
  • "on Lake Superior, sustaining" overlinked.
  • "from Ontonagon, Michigan for" comma after Michigan.
  • "St Clair River" not St. Clair River like before?
  • "the Detroit Free Press reported" italics.
  • Lee and Swayze refs need an en-dash not a spaced hyphen.

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 16:41, 12 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: Done. GreatLakesShips (talk) 20:29, 12 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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