Talk:Ryan Johnson (footballer, born 1996)/GA1

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 17:52, 2 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]


Comments

  • Can we avoid single-sentence paras.
  • "youth academy" any link?
  • Link for "loan"?
  • "joining Stevenage" which league?
  • "spells at Boreham Wood, as" these were non-League right?
  • "the Football League " link, but the lead said youngest player ever which presumably could include non-League time?
  • "being sent-off for" link.
  • "bookable offence" link.
  • Link loan again if possible.
  • Link substitute.
  • "the National League South club" overlinked.
  • "heading in a corner" link both.
  • "international duty in" you haven't yet mentioned for whom.
  • "manager" link.
  • " the COVID-19 pandemic in March" link the UK specific Covid pandemic article.
  • "friendly match" link.
  • "on penalties" link penalty shoot-out.

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 09:40, 3 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for reviewing the article @The Rambling Man: great spot with the youngest ever player / youngest player in the Football League difference. I have made all of the suggested changes. Cheers. SBFCEdit (talk) 23:36, 3 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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