Talk:Ricochet (Faith No More song)/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 11:26, 3 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

"replaced their previous guitar player Jim Martin and were dealing with the absence of keyboard" why did both of these happen?
"Paris, and charted" -> "Paris. The single charted..."
And link record chart.
"had been fired" why?
"Andy Wallace. Wallace had" repetitive.
"close friend of Bottom's.[1][3] In" typo.
" B-side" is there a link for this?
Ref 16 SHOUTING.

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:29, 3 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks again for a prompt review. I've addressed the above concerns; regarding your first point I wasn't sure how much details to go into in the lead but have added a bit more information; I also expanded some further details on Martin's firing in the body too. Hope these changes look okay. Gʀᴀᴘᴘʟᴇ ^ˣ 18:54, 3 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]