Talk:Pillow/Archives/2019
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Bit of cleanup
I have cleaned up the lead paragraph so that it actually reads like sentences written in English. It originally said: A pillow is used to sleep on or other parts of the body, on a bed, or, in the United States, the body as used on a couch or chair.[1][2]
I have changed to:
A pillow is used to sleep on and support the head/neck or other parts of the body, used while sleeping on a bed, or, in the United States, for supporting the body as used on a couch or chair.[3][4]
I have also removed the (~10 years old) entries to the talk page which are actually discussing the subject matter rather than the actual encyclopedia article.
If anyone else cares to improve this article go ahead. I'm not a registered user because I haven't seen any advantages to having a username, but I do try and fix things when I see them. 2A02:C7D:864B:3A00:1005:868E:94F6:E148 (talk) 17:51, 23 May 2016 (UTC)
References
- ^ "Pillow". The Free Dictionary By Farlex. Retrieved 2012-05-20.
- ^ "Pillow, n.1a". Oxford English Dictionary. Retrieved 12 May 2015.
- ^ "Pillow". The Free Dictionary By Farlex. Retrieved 2012-05-20.
- ^ "Pillow, n.1a". Oxford English Dictionary. Retrieved 12 May 2015.