Talk:Percy Shaw Jeffrey

Percy Shaw Jeffrey has been listed as one of the Social sciences and society good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.

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Date	Process	Result
February 12, 2009	Good article nominee	Listed

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B-Class review[edit]

After a request on my talk page, I'm going to leave a few comments on what would, in my opinion, make the article B-Class:

Categories need to be better... right now, there's only the birth year and death year categories. There really should be others organizing be occupation, nationality, etc. See Category:People and its subcategories. Done
WP:Persondata should probably be added. Done
The lead is a bit short compared to the rest of the article. Done, I think
A number of The Colcestrian references could use some clarifications, such as month and year of publication, author (if applicable), etc. The PDF reference could use an accessdate. Done

Once that's all fixed, I think that this definitely deserves to be B-Class. Hope the GA review goes well! -Drilnoth (talk) 21:24, 16 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Good work there! A few of the The Colchestrian references could use some more clarification, but otherwise it looks good. -Drilnoth (talk) 14:33, 21 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]