Talk:Oido

Review

The article needs a number of fixes to be in the range of a B-A grade:

• There are numerous references missing, please ensure each paragraph is referenced. In particular, what are the references for the "Place where Dinosaurs lived" section?
• "Features of Region" is unreferenced and seems like a collection of random, unrelated information that should be merged into appropriate section (geography, history, etc.)
• "Tour attraction" section is unreferenced
• You need to improve the English of this article, there are too many grammar errors which make some sentences very confusing
• For 시흥시전통문화유산보호위원회 ref, please provide (in addition to current hangul script) also an English translation. Ex "시흥시전통문화유산보호위원회 (Siheung Traditional Cultural Heritage Protection Committee)"

--_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 03:02, 23 June 2015 (UTC)