Talk:No Russian/GA1
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 19:41, 2 August 2016 (UTC)
Remember, no Russian. JAGUAR 19:41, 2 August 2016 (UTC)
- "gameplay footage from the level was leaked on the Internet" - you sure you want to capitalise internet?
- According to the Internet article, the word is capitalized. I'm not entirely sure if it should be, but it's a pretty minor point that I don't think is worth fretting over
- The lead is perfect; is summarises the article well, so not issues here
- "However, the player is never forced to partake in the massacre, and may instead let their comrades kill the civilians" - I think it's worth mentioning that the only objective of this level is to "follow Makorov's lead" (if you can source it)
- Sadly, no of the sources mention that you only have to follow Makarov. All they say is that the player is never forced to kill the civilians and that they'll die anyway
- "they will then get into a firefight with armed military soldiers" - I think all soldiers are from the military, so how about just soldiers or special forces. If I remember my CoD lore, they were probably just armed police
- The source I used for that statment says "SWAT-or-local-equivalent response", so I just left it at armed soldiers
- "A screenshot taken from "No Russian". In the screenshot..." - The caption is repetitive; I would get rid of the first sentence, as it is clear what level it's from
- Done
- " the game's developer and publisher respectively" - try the game's respective developer and publisher
- Done
- "and Stephen Lowe, the retired Bishop of Hulme, felt that the level was sickening" - this should be quoted
- Done
This article is well written, well sourced and compact. Once they're all clarified then this should pass. 
JAGUAR 19:51, 2 August 2016 (UTC)
- @Jaguar: Alright, all issues have been addressed. Thanks for the review! Famous Hobo (talk) 20:33, 2 August 2016 (UTC)
