Talk:Nitrosopumilus

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Hello. First of all: good choice. This microorganism looks potentially very interesting. I have some tips for you:

The introduction is a bit dispersive, it could be shortened in order to make it more “impactful”.
Some of the sentences regarding metabolism in the introduction could be moved to the paragraph “Phisiology” together with the first part of the paragraph “Genome and Cell Division”, so as to dedicate a single space to all the metabolic aspects relating to the microorganism.
I found the part about FtsZ and Cdv cell division proteins a bit complex… you could deepen/simplify it.

As for the content, you seem to be well under way. The material at your disposal sounds valid and inspiring, you just have to develop the concepts a little bit more clearly. Keep it up! Fra.ac.6 (talk) 20:50, 22 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Proposal to move to Nitrosopumilus maritimus[edit]

This article is currently named after the genus of this species, but it seems to specifically be about N. maritimus. I'm proposing that the article be moved to Nitrosopumilus maritimus instead of redirecting from there to here. -- Primium (talk) 21:24, 9 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]