Talk:Moses Gray (American football)/GA1
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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 22:17, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Notes[edit]
- I added an image
- The infobox doesn't follow the proper team chronology right now.
- So, should I say "Titans (1961)* - Warriors (1961) - Titans (1961-1962) - Warriors (1962)"?
- yes, they released him. Its not like nfl europe where they put people on the exempt list or whatever. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 00:15, 25 October 2023 (UTC)
- So, should I say "Titans (1961)* - Warriors (1961) - Titans (1961-1962) - Warriors (1962)"?
- I'm not sure those highlights are notable enough for the infobox.
- Removed.
- Were you able to find any more info on his college career like stats or honors?
- Wasn't able to.
- "213th overall" change to 214th
- Done.
- "In his sophomore and junior seasons, he averaged 18 minutes played per game" Maybe I missed something but I think the source is only talking about his junior year?
- Changed.
- "before seeing more action as a senior" The source used for that is before the season started
- Changed to saying he was a starter as a senior with a new ref.
- "afterwards was sent to the Indianapolis Warriors" I don't see Gray mentioned in the source
- Its in part 2.
- "and retired afterwards" I don't see in that source where he "retired"
- Changed the phrasing some.
- ref 1 says he was born in Rock Castle, Goochland County.
- I read it say "Moses was born on April 12th, 1937, in Goochland, VA" - where do you see Rock Castle?
- sry i meant ref 3 the moses gray papers WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 00:15, 25 October 2023 (UTC)
- @WikiOriginal-9: I just changed it to "Goochland County" BeanieFan11 (talk) 00:21, 25 October 2023 (UTC)
- sry i meant ref 3 the moses gray papers WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 00:15, 25 October 2023 (UTC)
- I read it say "Moses was born on April 12th, 1937, in Goochland, VA" - where do you see Rock Castle?
- ref 1 says he furthered his education at Michigan and the General Motors Institute (whatever that us) if we can find any more info about that
- I'm not seeing it, could you provide a quote?
- oops sry i mean ref 3
- Added.
- oops sry i mean ref 3
- I'm not seeing it, could you provide a quote?
- Should we link telethon if that's actually what it means?
- Linked.
- "becoming in 1972 the state's" comma after 1972
- Added.
- Link Cambria County in body
- Linked.
That's all I think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 22:17, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
- @WikiOriginal-9: BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:47, 24 October 2023 (UTC)
All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 00:30, 25 October 2023 (UTC)