Talk:Microman (wrestler)

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:10, 27 May 2020 (UTC)

Going to be reviewing this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 09:33, 28 May 2020 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Lead

• "who is working for the Mexican" - works
• "where their private lives are kept a secret from the wrestling fans." - concealed from wrestling fans.
• "Microman's debut on April 30, 2017, also marked the debut of the CMLL Micro-Estrellas division," - the first comma is unneeded
• "despite his diminutive stature of 1.00 m (3 ft 3 1⁄2 in)." - just 1 m (39 in) will suffice

Personal life

• "Microman was born on September 30, 1998, in Mexico City, Mexico, son of professional wrestling " - the son
• "Microman was born on September 30, 1998, in Mexico City, Mexico," - this needs a reliable source to verify the information since The Telegraph does not mention it
• "(real name not revealed).[4][a]." - the second period is redundant
• "Growing up he was a big fan of" - idolized is more concise
• "He initially studied computer sciences" - computer science
• "in school but gave them up to start training for a professional wrestling career." - stopped to begin

Consejo Mundial de Lucha Libre (2017–present)

• "Microman and El Gallito defeated Zacarias and Cuije in the first-ever Micro-Estrellas match at one of CMLL's "Kids' day" shows. [4][6] " - the space between the end of the sentence and both references is unneeded
• " At 1.00 m (3 ft 3 1⁄2 in) tall," - just 1 m (39 in) will suffice
• "In the months following the anniversary" - how many months exactly?
• Lucha libre should be italized
• "per lucha libre traditions.[15]With the success of the Micro-Estrellas," - there should be a space between the ref and the start of the second sentence
• "Chamuel pinned Microman to eliminate him and to win the championship" - the word in bold is redundant

Independent circuit (2017–present)

• "one of Mexico's larges independent promotions," - typo; should be largest
• Wikilink Mr. Nibela on his only mention outside the italized show name
• Zarchias is spelt as Zacarias
• "For the 2020 Homenaje a Mr. Niebla show on January 4, 2020, Zacarias, dressed like the recently deceased Mr. Niebla, defeated Microman." - Super Luchas does not mention Zacarias defeated Microman dressed like Mr. Niebla. Please find another reliable source that explicitly states this

Reception

• Wrestling Observer Newsletter, Voices of Wrestling and Súper Luchas should be italized because they are print publications
• "rookie of the year awards," - Rookie of the Year award
• CBS news should be wikilinked and "news" must begin with a capital letter

References

• Be consistent in regards to whether you includee the translated title or not
• Reference 4 should mention that Agence France-Presse is the agency that provided the story to The Telegraph
• Wikilink The Telegraph to the appropriate article
• Reference 25 should be in all capital letters per MOS:ALLCAPS
• Reference 26 is missing the author

Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 09:33, 28 May 2020 (UTC)

• MWright96 - I have addressed everything except for the height. I am using {{height|m=1}} which is the standard way to deal with height, which looks a little odd for someoone who is 1 meter tall. Do you want me to replace and type it out instead? MPJ-DK (talk) 12:29, 28 May 2020 (UTC)
  • @MPJ-DK: Now promoting to GA class. I've made a minor change to the article. MWright96 (talk) 13:10, 28 May 2020 (UTC)