Talk:Michael's Last Dundies/GA1
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Reviewer: Ed! (talk · contribs) 16:23, 17 January 2013 (UTC)
- "... will be his co-host at the Dundies." -- The dundies is sort of an in-joke for the show, and may not be familiar to the average reader. Please explain what they are or reference a previous episode that featured them.
- "...After work, the employees arrive at the Dundies" It's at a Chili's like the other ones, right? This should be noted.
- " Ferrell initially called the producers and offered to appear in Carell's last season" -- as in, he wanted to be in the entire season?
- Just an opinion, but I think Chili's should also be mentioned in the Cultural References section, as it's a recurring theme in the series that he goes there a lot.
- Reception should note the reviews on Ferrell's character in the previous episode, and how he was received in the overall story arc. If I recall correctly, his appearance was highly anticipated but with each successive episode, the character fell flat.
- "Jack Coleman as State Sen. Robert Lipton" is noted in the infobox, but not in the body of the article. It needs a citation.
- Dup links tool shows four duplicate links: Will Ferrell; Steve Carrell; The Office (U.S. season 2); The Dundies.
- Dab links tool returns no problems. Some of the external links have access issues, but all of them still seem to be working. The image of Ferrell is properly licensed.