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Six dancers were on stage → this either works as "onstage" or "on the stage"
facing the audience with a spotlight shined on her → facing the audience with a spotlight shining on her
I see only a part of the content here is actually supported by the references given, but I assume this is okay since describing synopsis dosn't necessarily need surcing (e.g. Rebel Heart Tour)
Two female dancers performed during "Buzzcut Season" They → A full stop is missing
One dancer performed inside the container → A dancer performed inside the container
During "Ribs" the six → comma before "the"
A video of Lorde spray painting a car → A video of Lorde spray-painting a car
As the outro played Lorde left the stage → comma before "Lorde"
Quotes from American journalist Joan Didion's 1968 essay collection book Slouching Towards Bethlehem were shown on a screen during an interlude → Where is this exatcly sourced in the reference??
Lorde was shown in silhouette → What should this mean?
Okay, now that I looked over the section again, I sugges you leave out refs here completely since they always only halfway cover what's stated. Just use them for the quotes and other information that has to be sourced (such as the Slouching Towards Bethlehem usage). Quotes that can't be sourced should be removed
with critics praising its stage design, Lorde's stage presence and the intimate setting → no need for this; readers can conclude for themselves once they read the section
Echoing similar judgments → "thoughts" would be a better choice here
I edited the tables by myself
below average → below-average
a promoter for the tour also offered free → comma after "tour"
The "Notes" is somewhat confusing to me as it doesn't include all covers she performed during the tour... I also read she covered "In the Air" and another song of Kanye's. This should include all covers she performed
On hold for 7 days — A well-written article which needs a few fixes to be promoted to GA status. Greets; Cartoon network freak (talk) 08:38, 19 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]
@Cartoon network freak: Took care of all your comments, except the copyviolation and the tour citations. The reason the copyviolation shows over 41% is due to this quote: "The Lorde tour was more of everything...". Lorde never announced separate European leg tour dates during the final months of touring. They were festivals she played at. Those dates are individually sources in the Notes section. Also, she never covered "In the Air Tonight" on tour; it was part of a BBC Live Lounge performance she did. However, I did include the Kanye's "Runaway" interpolation during her "Liability" performance. I got a source from Coup de Main regarding the Joan Didion quote she used during one of her interludes. Not many media sites covered this on their reviews. De88 (talk) 22:50, 19 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]
While videos of her appear online covering "In the Air Tonight", no reliable source reports this. I cannot cite it. I added citations for her Russia tour dates. De88 (talk) 23:07, 19 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]
@De88:Passing — Everything seems to have been solved, thus I can promote this to GA status. Is there any chance you could also review one of my GANs? Just disregard if you're too busy... Greets and congrats; Cartoon network freak (talk) 16:20, 20 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]
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On hold for 7 days — A well-written article which needs a few fixes to be promoted to GA status. Greets; Cartoon network freak (talk) 08:38, 19 April 2019 (UTC)